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" Bin Tere"

 

Hello 'maaneet fans..

hello to everyone....m a newbie'this is my first post ...
 
m going to start anew fiction on maneet'just  going crazy after seeing d dupatta episode...couldnt stop myself from imagining them togetherand......

The story starts after geet moves in to maan's  outhouse'after the episode of 24th july '.the dupatta n phone scene ..

M looking for your  support 'if u feel its worthy of it'..plz do comment on it ..i do need ur support badly...i hope u understand ..plz reply ur post ...

Thanks'.

Regards

maanmeet

 
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part 4--page  8 
 
part 5--page 10
 
part 6--page13
 
part 7 -- page 16
 
part 8 -- page 21
 
part 9-- page 23
 
part 10--page 25
 
part 11-- page 29
 
part 12--  page 35
 
part 13--page 37
 

part 15--page 46

 
part 16--page54
 
part17--page 56
 
 
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part 19--page62
 
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part 21--page 71 
 
part 22--page 74
 
part 23--page 80
 
part 24--page 86
 
part 25--page 89
 
part 25 continued page 96
 
part 26 --page 98
 
part 27--page103
 
part 28---page107
 
 
part 29 -- page 112
 
part 30--page 117
 
 
prt 31-- page 122
 
 
part32 - page 126
 
part 33---page 131
 
part 34 --page 135
 
part 35--page139
 
part 36-page 144
 
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 Prologue

 

Woh ahesas jise naam dene pe dil dare…

Woh ahesas jisko jubape laya bhi na jaye….

Woh ahesas jisko chupaya bhi na jaye…

Aye sanam…tere kadmome rakh du yeh jahan..

Bin tere ab jia nehi jaye….

 

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Part 1

 

Geet was dumbstruck after listening to what maan just said….

"tum rat ke 3 baje meri dadi ma ko ph nahi karogi….meri dadi ma ko"

Geet doesn't know what to say …or what to do…gulping down the saliva …..she thinks neither she can go back to pinky's house …..nor she can go out 3am at night…

She also recalled about her promise to dadima…touching her hand…she had been always kind and friendly to her…in spite of listening so much bad words about her grandson (dusht  danaav)…..savitrydevi didn't mind at all….and gave her d job.

 

Gathering all her courage geet replied…

 "Sir…..yeh job dadi ma ne die hai mujhe…aur yehan rehne ka ijajat bhi…toh.."saying this she turned back to maan …not daring to face him…..after what she is going to say next…

Toh…..maan knotted his brows…

"toh …..mai kahi nai jaan laggi….etthei rahangi mai ….tuci mano ya mano…"saying this in her full geet style …she thumped on d couch ..with beating heart inside….though desperate to show her bravery outside…
"yeh  dusht danav chup kiu hai …..kahin mujhe fir khichke  bahar na fek de….haye babaji …madat kardo meri…"she said in her mind.

Maan took some moments to realize what she is saying …..himmat to dekho…!!!

"oh really ……dream on…..tumhe to mai nikalke rahunga ...."maan chewed d words…

"dekhte hai…!!"geet retorted back..

"fine…!!"saying that maan stormed upstairs to the bedroom.

 

He held d baju of d bed tightly …..not sure about what he had said just now downstairs….he himself knows she has no place to go….and above all….dadima had given d permission to her to stay here….or……he himself doesn't want her to………

"Maan!!! He clenched his fist ….again u have started…"

he sat on the bed….neither he can go back to khurana mansion nor he can go out of this house…after what he had said to geet just now….she will think I m accepting her to stay  here ….

"No way …."maan thought lying  straight on the bed covering himself with d rapper ….

 

"Oye…..sir….aap to badde woh nikle ….ak ladki nu bithake khud so gaye….chaliye hatiye …..yeh bed meri hai…."..geet reappeared .

 

"Ufffff…fir aa gayi...!!!oye miss hoshiyarpur express  …go to hell…yeh bed meri hai ….tumhe jo karna hai karo…."

Within a sec maan found himself on d floor with a bang…. As a result of  geet's pulling d rapper …

"Geeeeeeeeeeeet .."he growned in d tommy style..

but geet was comfortably slipped into d bed rapping her up with the kambal …completely ignoring his growl.

Maan took a second to stand up …nearing geet he picked her up with the kambal like a feather …and started carrying her to downstairs…..

"Chodhiye mujhe…sir…kya kar rahe hai…..satiya gaye ho aap….!! Sirrrrrrrr….chodhiyeee….."she shrieked at the pitch of her voice.

Ignoring completely to her scream…Maan looked at her puppy face…shouting at full of her  voice…eyes closed…clutching his shirt…maan could feel her nails piercing his chest…looking at her innocent face he stopped ….his heart skipped a beat ..current passed though his spine…so close…so warm…so delicate….but punjaban sherni …..

Maaaaaaaaahi…maaaaahiiii..maahi ve maahi maahi ve……mahi song played at d background …

Sirrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr……..

Brought him back in his sense   "… Chodh du ….?sure…?"

Haan sir niche utariye mujhe …..plz sir…abhi sir..

Thumpppppppppppppp……..she found herself on d ground….like d way maan dropped her down after saving her from the sea…

Aaahhhh…….sirrr…..tuci dunia da sabto badda dusht danaav ho……aaah…..she groaned rubbing her back….

Maan : Kiun tumhi ne to kaha tha….

She managed to sit on d stairs…maan stopped by her to sit beside her..coming close to her "…tumhi ne to kaha tha…abhi chodh dijiye…"

Geet turned her face back fuming with anger …

A smile played over maan's face…gusse me aur khubsurat lagti hai yeh jhalli …maan kept watching her until she again managed to get up proceed to the bedroom….

Maan caught her hand…..geet stopped…..no actually her sense stopped….she didn't realize why ..?

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He enjoyed her nervousness…while feeling the trembling soft  warm  fingers in his hand….

"Dekho geet ….mujhe koi shaukh nahi hai …tumhare nakhre dekhneka….par baat yeh hai…kuch wajah aise hai…ke mai khurana mansion pe nahi….yaha rehta hu…so I cant move out ….yeh mera ghar hai….."   maan leaves her hand and gets up.

"Par ab yeh mera ghar hai….mai kahi nahi jane bali …."

Maan concealed a smile….as if he wanted to hear only this reply from her .

"to mai kya karu…?" He retorted back "….mujhe iha rehna hai….ab tumhari marji tum kya karoge……tum iha kaise reh paoge…..MERE SAATH……"…he stressed in his last words..waisebhi tum mujhse darti ho……aur fir….mere saath ihaa…..naah geet …..wat will be about ur swabhimaan..ijjaat …bagira bagira…..tch tch..!!! geet ab kya kar sakte hai…..maan singh khurana ke saath to tum nehi reh paogi na….to tumhe to jana hi hoga na…..?

he knew he is hitting the right point ……

"kisne kaha aapse…mai aapse darti hu…" geet  is not going to keep shut.."mai nahi darti aapse…..samjhe aap …."

Maan : "acchaa…." he keeps on moving towards her …

Geet : shakes her head as a stubborn kid …..and says "…haan…nahi darti…"

saying geet starts moving back…as he is coming very close to her….her heart beating fast ….very fast ….she cursed her heart to beat so fast …she feared actually…

Maan chuckles ….  "dekha…!"

Geet gulps down the saliva….and stops moving back….he comes closer to her …geet feels like closing her eyes…..but she cant …as that will prove her nervousness…she keeps her eyes on his deep piercing eyes….she can feel his burning breath on her face….his gaze…geet forgets to blabber..

Mahiiiii…mahiiiii……..mahi ve mahi mahii  vee……

maan locks her in d wall by both of his hands…..she stands there rooted…she can see d reflection of herself in his brown eyes….

Maan is so close to her dat he can see wrinkles on her trembling pink lips…..her eyes……d trust in her eyes…..he can read it….he doesn't know what he is doing …he wants her to stay here…..in his arms ….she is as delicate as a pigeon trapped in his arms

"mujhpe….varosa karti ho…?" couldn't stop himself…

"haan"….geet replied naively…..lost in his eyes….

 

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"Toh'.."maan regained his senses  "'..toh kya hua''.bed mera hai'.mujhe nahi pata tum kaha sogi'suna to hoga na'.. jo jeeta wohi sikanadar''!!"

Saying that maan ran back to d bed''.

Geet followed him in equal speed'sir'..bed mera hai'.aap aisa nahi kar sakte'..!!!!

But maan was first to occupy it'

Huh'khadooos dusht '.kahika'.geet mutters losing the game'..

Kamse kam kambal to de dijiye'.?geet tried her best '

Kiu '? Koi maharani ho '? Nahi dunga'.and don't dare to snatch it again'bohot bura hoga isbaar geet '..he remembered what she did last time ..

Losing d bed'geet  turned to go downstairs'.

Waise niche ek sofa hai'..uspe so sakte ho''maan ironically said'

Keh to aise rahe hai'jaise daya kar rahe hai'.badde aaye delhi ka sartaj baadshah'..geet showed him tongue'..

Geeeeeeeet'!!!

Huh''geet closed the door on her back'..coming downstairs'..usual self talking '.dekha babaji'kistarah se mere bed pe '.nahi..mere room me'..nahi mere ghar pe aake mujhe bahar nikal diye'sadooo'dusht mahadusht danaav'.babaji iske aankh me nind mat dena babaji'so gaya mere bed pe'.kambal tak nahi dia''

Maan could hear all these from inside''

"Oyeee'!!!."

Hearing that maan's very special oyee'geet did not dare to speak more 'kya pata firse bahar nikal de''she thought'.

[precap]
Maan reached to touch her locks kissing her forehead…her innocent face…dawn's  soft creamy rays started reaching her skin…like his touch ……unaware of his should's and shouldn't' s………….unaware of the egoistic world of his……maan singh khurana coming out of his shell…..surrendering himself to her……only to her
Edited by maanmeet8 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hello maaneetians....
 
doston....
trying my hand on it ....
 
waiting for ur responses with a expecting heart ....
if find it worthy reading plz reply .....
 
i hav written some more .....but not sure whether u will like it or not ....
so nailbiting ......
 
thanks
with love..
 
maanmeet
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was awesome........waiting for more updates
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Posted: 13 years ago
Enjoying .......................
Plz continue....................
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Posted: 13 years ago
sounds like a great story...do update soon!

~Naina
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW... LOVE IT!!! 😃
"dusht mahadusht danav" was HILARIOUS 🤣🤣🤣
But what happened to the poor baby when Geet fell off the bed? BECHARA baby 😲
Please add me to your P.M. List if possible and update asap 😃