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hey guyz...
i waz jus in maaneet land few moments bk.....got bk into real world right now so thought of sharing wat i fantasized! widout much delay here i start:
scene kuch aisa hai: pinky and her dad hafta go to bombay to attend some wedding...they insist her to come along buh she resists the idea and decides to stay bk....which means shes HOME ALONE!!😃😃😃😃
OK guyz...PART 1:
geet jus tuk a bath, shez wearin her same style salwar kameez buh this time its black in color😉
while dryin her hair she stands near the mirror and talk to herself: "haye....2 din tak main akelay ghar main time kaisay guzarongi??"(feels depressd)-
"chaddoh yaar (change in mood😉)...aisay mouh latkaney sey kuch nahi honay wala, aisa kerti hoon khana kahker saaray designs aaj kay aaj khatam kerdayti hoon....(thinks of maan) shaid woh dusht dhanav mujhse thora khush hojae"...
she dint go to work today fer sum xyz reason....
on the other hand; maan's at home too....and yesh u guessd it right...hez workin on mr chopra's project😆😆😆 hez wearin his white shirt wid black waistecoat and black pants (jus wanted maaneet in same color combo😳)
hez in his room....all files are scattered on the table, with some scale drawings of the house designs...there are some candles lightened on the corner of the table and he has a huge coffee mug kept on his right hand side...
hes busy making editions to the oldage home designs and thinks loudly..."geet ney mutli-plex kay saath kya banay ko kahan tha..." he closes his eyes to recall buh instead imagines the bit where geet hits her head on the door...he opens his eyes in shock, pissed at himself fer thinkin of her ...."zarorri nahi hai jo geet kahey main wohi karoon..main yahan perh...." while thinkin he grabs his coffee mug and is abt to take a sip of it buh then rememeber the extra sugar rich coffee geet made😆😆.....he slightly smiles to himself...and then he realises hes agen thinkin of her!!
woh gussay sey mug table perh patakhta hai, pushes his chair bk and stands up in rage..."phirse geet........" he begins unbuttoning his waistecoat and that too reminds him of geet!😆😆
(wen he offered it to her wen she waz cold!😳)......he takes it offf and throws it away....he luks here and there to distract himself from her thoughts--buh fails👏
he turns bk to his work buh then his attention gets capitvated by the candles and he gets flashbks of the bit where geet almost burnt her fingers!!......ok now maan is realli losing his temper---he blows away all the candles,throws the files on the floor.. and is luks realli realli pissd off!!
he holds his head tight wid his left hand...as if internally commanding his heart NOT TO THINK OF HER!😆😆
buh poor guy---usko geet ki aadat perh chuki hai--he dint get a dose of her today prolly thatz y hes not in his mind..as if shez his drug😳😳...and then maan sayz his famous line" yay larki mujhe waqai pagal kerdaygi"!!😆😆😆😆
"main kyun uskay barain main itna soch raha hoon...kyun kar cheez mujhe sirf uski yaad dilati hai..."....he closes his eyes once agen and picturises her...opens them up quickly and goes like..."maan singh khurana kay zindagi main sab kuch planned hota hai, main wohi kerta hoon jo mujhe sahi lagta hai...koi mujhe nahi bata sakhta kya kerna hai ya nahi....perh..geet kay honay sey sab badal kyun raha hai...(bangs hard his right hand on the table)...hez feelin realli restless now...."mujhe nahi pata yay meray saath kya horaha hai ya kyun horaha hai..geet kay aik din meray pass na honay sey mujhe kyun farq parh raha hai....KYUN...(pauses..thinks...makes a quick decision).....mujhe geet sey milna hoga....abhi!"----he grabs his cellphone, car keys and is off to geet's place!😃
thanx fer the lovely feedbk guyz....here i start wid
PART 2:
geets on fone wid pinky....she has reached bombay and is tellin her the never ending stories abt the wedding arrangements! 😊they are the fone fer quiet a long while...😉
the clouds are warmin up--hmmm...luks like there is storm on the way!😃....
(fer now its drizzling😉)-
maan has reached geet's place and is in his car, parked in front of her house...he thinks that pinky or her dad wont like if a guy is at their house so late (its 10 at night) so he thinks of callin her out....he tries the fone buh ofc geet's on it!😛
he gets realli pissed off...poor guy cant w8 to get a sight of geet😳..he thinks to himself "jo bhi hoga dekha jayega..." gets off the car, and is ringin the house bell....
ok guyz....cuz of the light rain out there....some water went into the bell🤢....(indian drama guyz...anythin is predictable!!😆)...so apparently its not working!!
...now maan thinks geet on purpose is not responding...hez gettin really exasperated and desperate to see her...he realli cant think of anyway to get to her....he moves bk jus to get a survey of the house (checkin whether they are out)--and sees the front side bedroom light on....hez thinks" yay jaan bouch ker yay sab ker rahi hai" maan is being really unreasonable...he doesnt noe wat hes doin or wat hez sayin..he jus needs a dose of her to get bk to normal!😆...he will go to any xtend jus to see her!!😳
geet is now done wid the fone, shez in her room agen, finding a hair-clip...."kab mein seekhongi apni cheezain jaga perh rakhna(opens the drawer..luks here and there on the dresser)...aik clip bhi nahi milraha!!!" .......her room window is opened...the wind in blowin hard....
the very next moment she senses someone....she luks at the door, buh no1s there....she stands up str8 and gets cautious..."main bilkul pagal hochuki hoon...(tries to comfort herself)---akelay hoon isliyay aisa lag raha hai aur kuch nahi"--she turns herself towards the window and sees maan enterin her room from there!!!😲😲😲😲😲
geet is daymmmmm shocked!!! she cant believe maan is here...woh bhi not from the door...buh aik dum filmy style sey from the window!!!!😃😃😲😲⭐️
maan checks her out up and down....hez loving her in that black dress..he sighs wid relieve and thinks "yay khulay baloon main kitni khubsorat lagti hai"😳😳😳⭐️....he feels realli gud seein her...buh as usual he's xpressionless, buh his eyes say it all...
geet is still in shock...she doesnt say anythin.....maan walks up close to her widout sayin anythin....shes still standin in the same position...woh ankhein pharh pharh ker maan ko dekh rahi hai...maan now comes and stands jus close to her face...geet comes bk to consciousness...stops staring at him and begins moving bk....maan starts moving a step forward to her every bkward step....(geet is walkin bkwards to the wall bit which has the window next to it!)---maan has an xpressionless face and says "tum darwaza kyun nahi khol rahi thi"
geet: (scared) "sir aap bell bajatay toh main kholti"😆
maan: "aaj office kyun nahi aai"
geet: "sir maine application di thi reception main...aur...aur waisay bhi aaj office main meri zarrorat nahi thi"....
shez now pinned wid the wall....maan is an inch away from her face....😳😳....and sayz "perh mujhe toh tumhare zarrorat thi na".....*mahi song plays*
geet is realli shocked, buh she feels sorta contented from inside wen he sayz that😉..."jeee?? sir....main...main kuch samjhi nahi"...
maan gives her those hawt angry luks, moves so close to her...that his body touches hers... "tum kabhi bhi kuch nahi samjhtii😡??"....
geet: (scared to death...unable to say anythin...she feels butterflies in her stomach)--"sir mujhe...pata naii...kayy...main woh...."
maan: "shussshhhhhh".......he doesnt want any explanations...he jus wants to stare at her 4ever...*mahi song plays agen*
and then...all of a sudden...the storm thunders loud!!!!....!!!🤢🤢🤢🤢
geet gets realli scared by the loud noise --closes her eyes....and hugs him tight.....😳😳😳...
ok, now maan gets shocked...his hands are down...hes not sure whether to hug her bk or not...buh then his hands on their own move up to hug her bk....he closes his eyes...and sighs....
geet after a few moments gets to consciousnes...she feels embarassed and begins moving bk...maan opens his eyes and starts staring at geet's embarassed, red face😳...her flinge is all messd up on the side of her face...he moves them behind her earss slowly...geet is still luking down....⭐️
heavy rain begins!!! the raindrops bounce on the window and splashes on geet's face....the side of her face begins to get filled wid hundreds of tiny droplets...maan luks at her lovingly😳...he smiles slightly...and widout a blink of an eye..he caresses her face and wipes off the droplets...geet closes her eyes, her heart is beatin realli fast and so loud that maan can hear her heartbeat😳😳...(now u can imagine how close hes standin to her!!!!)......her innocence is driving maan crazy and daym this guys harmones are raging badly now!!!😆
after a couple of secs...maan moves his hand to close the window(bechara kabtak wipe kerta raheyga😆)--- buh hez still looking at her...the wind blows evn hard now..aur zorr sey the window bangs on maan's hand!!!......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!---finally maan cums bk to his consciousness!!!😆😆😆 (itni zorr sey window lagaygi toh koi bhi hosh main aajaiga na!!!😆)--
he moves his hand up and down and moans wid pain🤢.....geet gets realli worried holds his hand close to herself and goes like...."sirr....aap, app thek toh hai!!! kitni zorr sey lag gaya...!!!...aapkay haath sey toh khun bhi nikal raha hai!!"....🤢
maan tries to move his hand bk (hosh main aagaya haina isliyay😆)...and goes like "main thek hoon geet..thori si hi choth aayei hai"...
geet luks at him angrily..."bas sir...chup!! abh bilkul chup!!" app idhar aaye...she holds his arms, pulls him towards her bed😉...she makes him sit there...she orders him "aap yahee bethay rahain!! main first aid box lati hoon..." maan annoyingly goes like " geet main thek hoon...itni zyada choth nahi lagi, na koi zakham huwa hai jo tum marham pati ker rahi ho!!".....geet luks at him (depressd)..."kabhi agar choti se choth ko waqt perh marham nahi kiya jaye...toh woh bohot bara zakham banjata hai...aur woh zakham zindagi barh takleef deyta hai.." she luks lost while sayin it...(i think shez sayin it from her past xperience😕)----maan gives her a confused luk...buh she quickly changes her xpressions and goes like..."nahi...kuch nahi sir....main abhi aai".............
she gets bk wid the first aid box, sits next to him, opens the box...takes out a piece of cotton and dettol bottle...she pours sum of it out on the cotton ball aur fauran maan ka hath apnay paas laati hai...maan loses himself once agen *mahi song plays*.....he luks at her face lovingly😳....her face full of purity and innocence...her gorgeous hair tickling her face every now and then...maan jus cant get enouf of luking at her...😍
on the other hand, geet luks concerned fer maan and slowly tries to clean off the blood...maan moans wid pain once agen...(khoun perh dettol...daym that burns bad!!!!)----geet parayshani sey ussay dekhti hai and goes like..."sssss..ssorrry sir..." she brings his hand close to her face aur halkay sey phhuk markay wipe kernay lagti hai"......😳
no1 has ever cared fer maan soo much, nor did he allow any1 to do so...now that sum1 is so concerned fer him..he doesnt realli noe how to react to so much love and conern hez gettin from the opposite person!....😍
anyhowz, she cleans off the blood, wraps his palm wid bandage and says "ley, ho bhi gaya" and smiles widely at him😃...they share a breath-taking eye-lock fer quiet a long while....geet as usual is the first one to cum bk to her senses🤢--she moves bk and stands upp....she feels awkward, luks here and there and then bk at maan..rollin the dupatta arnd her fingers, she goes like "sir...apne kuch khaya nahi hoga....main khana nikalti hoon"
maan goes like "geet sunho"...
she stops, luks bk, interrupts wat he waz sayin and goes like "agar kuch khaya bhi hoga, toh phir be meray haath ki biryani apko zaroor khani parhaygi....(she smiles widely) ungliya chaattay reh jayengay!!"...shez abt to leave and turns bk agen..."sir aph kuch keh rahey thay??"
maan in sorta "giving up" xpression sarcastically says: "haan main keh raha tha kay namak thora kam dalna, jis tarha coffee main shakker taiz dalti ho, waisay khanay main namak tez toh nahi dalti na?"😆😆😆😆
geet gets realli annoyed, gives him her anger luks, stomps her foot hard on the floor and leaves the room!😉
Part 3:
maan's now alone in geet's room....he goes near the window, luks out and sighs......hes actually feeling contented fer the first time in life....he now feels like a human, not a robot on duty 24/7....he luks at his bandaged hand and thinks how lovingly geet dressed it...he smiles to himself...buh then stops...."yay main kya ker raha hoon.." he closes the window immediately...."main yahan aaya he kyun...(pauses)....kyun geet kay kareeb janay sey mujhe farq perhta hai...kyun main chahta hoon kay geet hamesha meri nazron kay samnay rahain...kyun...???".....😳😳😳
(sorry guys i noe u wanted him to think of all this wen he does his marital arts in his aladdin pants...buh geet kay ghar main kerain ga toh geet behosh hojayegi!!😆)
.....he walks here and there slowly...his hands sumtime on his head, sometym on his waste, sometimes folded arnd his chest.
..."maine aisa aaj tak kissi kay liyay mehsoos nahi kiya, aaj pehli baar maine apnay asool toray, woh bhi sirf geet ki aik jhalak panay kay liyay!" hez confused and shocked at himself....
"kahin mujhe geet sey....(pauses)....NAHI!".....his forehead is full of sweat drops...."maine aisa socha bhi kaisay.." changes topic, tries distracting himself...."mujhe yahan sey jaana hoga"😕
geet on the other hand walks into the kitchen and rests herself on the side of the slab..she closes her eyes and sighs...she feels 10000 butterflies in her stomach...she smiles slightly and gets flashbks of how maan caressed her face...she then opens her eyes all of a sudden and goes like.."yay main kya sochnay lagi....(switches on the stove and adds some masala to the biryani)---geet apnay khayalon perh thora break laga..(starts hittin the spoon on her head)....perh main sonchoon, waisay maan yahan aaye kyun hai???sarre files toh maine submit kerwadi thi...baas construction file meray paas hai...aur ussay maan ko koi kaam nahi hai.."😕
maan comes to the tv lounge, and shouts "geet...geeet!! main jaa raha hoon".....
geet comes out wid the biryani dish in her hands..."app khana khaye baghir ja he nahi sakhtay"
maan: (angry luks) kyun? tum mujhe rokogi?
geet: (wid assurity)-"haan!" mujhe kuch nahi sunna....aap table perh aaojao..😉
maan: (infuriated) "tum mujhe order dey rahi ho! tum jaanti ho main tumhara....
geet: (interrupts)....meray boss hongay office main, yahan nahi....(goes near him and pulls him towards the table,daym this gurl is dominating😉)---abh aap yahan betho, aur bolo maine kitna acha khana pakaya hai" (smiles widely)---
maan: (helplessly sits on the chair) "hmmm...khusbo toh achi aarahi hai...
geet takes the biryani out on a plate and keeps in front of him wid a spoon and folk...she takes out sum fer herself and sits down...she begins eating the rice wid her hands...
maan luks at her disgustingly..."tum haath sey khati ho"
geet: "haan toh?? aap spoon sey khayay na!"
maan: "perh tum....i mean..hath sey...."
geet: (annoyed)..."uffo sir!! jo maaza hath sey khanay main aata hai woh in chammach kantay sey kabhi nahi aata...(gets an idea)--app try kerkay toh dekhay!!! app ko alag hi swadh aayega!!"
maan: (feels eww,hesitates)..."main aur haath sey..??"
geet: (luks at his hands)---"ohoo app kaisay khaogay...aap ko toh choth laggi huwi hai👏👏......(widout asking him or widout any hesitation she pushes her chair near maan and his plate close to her)--main khila deyti hoon"
maan doesnt say anythin--he seems lost fer the fact that geet is close to him once agen...hez in lalala land now😆
geet has a slight smile on her face, shes lukin down at his plate, niwala banati hai...and brings it close to maan's mouth *mahi song plays*
another deadly eye-lock😍....maan opens his mouth, takes it in and chews the food while lukin at her, widout a blink of his sexy eyes!😳
geet: "kaisa laga"
maan: (dont 4got maan is not in his consciousness😉)"tum bohot.....tasty..."
geet: (confused, interrupts)"sir...main??? tasty??? kyaaaa????
maan:(shakes his head slightly,gets bk to normal😆)---"woh woh...mera matlab.....tum sahe keh rahi thi...khana waqai bohot tasty hai....aur namak bhi taiz nahi"😆...(smiles)
geet: (annoyed and a bit pissed) "ugggghhh😡.."....(talks loudly to herself while making another niwala fer him)..."tanna maray baghir inko sakoon kahan milta hai"
maan: "kyaa??"
geett..."nahi sir...kuch nai..kuch nahi..."
she puts the next niwala in his mouth, maan is lukin at her once agen(seems lost)...and bites off her fingers!😆😆😆
geet: (in pain)..."aaaaaaooouuuuccchhh!!!" ahhh..ahhh ahhhhh...."
maan: (worried n embarassed! he immediately pulls her fingers close to his mouth aur halkay sey phukh marta hai😳😳😳.....and then presses them wid his own fingers)...
geet makes a baby face....maan luks upto her and goes like "m sorry"..
geet: (shy, slowly moves her hand away)...."nahi sir...koi baat nai..main thek hoon, (sarcastically) zyada zorr sey nahi kattaa..😆..
lagta hai app apnay puranay badlay lay rahey thay"....(she says all this while making another niwala fer him)--
maan is embarassed😳...he doesnt noe wat to answer bk..he opts to be quiet...😲
geet apna haath barhati hai fer another niwala buh maan holds her hand and moves it bk to geet's mouth....they share another hawt eye-lock and geet eats it....😳😳😍
they are starin and starin and staring....however, the rumbling thunder disturbs them!😉...
they both luk away in awkwardness...they both are quiet...maan sayz "geet, kaffi deyr hochuki hai, (luks at his watch) main chalta hoon"
geet: (worried)..."sir ap kaisay jaogay...bahir toh bohot barish horahi hai...aur main...
maan: (interrupts...stands up, has a str8 face) "geet...tum meri fiqur na kero, main chala jaonga"
maan is walkin towards the door...geet hurries up and reaches there b4 him and stands in front of the door coverin it..."main apko jaaney nahi doungi" (daym this gurl is gettin bold!! character growth u noe😉)
maan: (angry and confused, fold his hands arnd his chest)...."kyun??"
geet: (doesnt noe wat to say...they both are lukin into each other's eyes while hafin this convo)--"kyunkay...kyunkay....(she doesnt noe y shez stoppin him, nor does she noe wat to say)---kyunkay...agar main apke ghar main abhi hoti, aur itni taiz barish horahi hoti, toh kya aap mujhe jaaney deytay??? nahi na?? toh main kyun jaaney douh!!"😆
maan is annoyed now...he hold his head fer a while and leaves it " geet main admi hoon..mujhe koi masla nahi hoga"
geet: (unreasonably) "toh mujhe kaunsa masla hoga😆...main nahi janti...bas jab tak yay barish rukhti nahi app kahin nahi jaengay"(says boldly😉)
maan gives up!! *sighs*...."geet tum na..."
geet: "haan mujhe pata hai main bohot achi hoon😆...aap jakey sofay perh betho...tab tak main (thinks) coffee leyker aati hoon!".....she starts walkin towards the kitchen....
maan: (opens his eyes wide) "coffee!! geet....maine coffe peeni chordi hai!!"😆😆😆...
geet: (shouts from the kitchen) "fiqar not sir, is bar 4 kay bajae 6 chamach cheeni dalongi"😆😆
part 4:
geet comes outa the kitchen wid 2 coffee mugs, she comes close to maan whuz standin near the dinner table..."geet maine waqai coffee peeni chordi hai"😆...
geet: (still holding both the mugs, xpressionless initially and then gets angry )--"thek hai! mat piyo, main he donnoh pee longi!!"😆 she takes a sip from one mug and then the other😆 (she seemz busy drinkin it, and pretends as if shez cool that maan is not hafing it)....maan is jus standin there and smiling at her kiddishness....😊
...geet aik aur sip leyti hai buh this time the coffee milk is left circled arnd her lips...she obviously doesnt notices it (buh ofc maan does😉)
geet starts walking towards the sofa....maan holds her right arm and slowly pulls her bk (werna coffe donoh perh gir jayegi na!!😆)----they both haf another hypnotising eye-lock session *mahi song plays*....geet has a sorta confused xpression....maan luks lost once agen..he moves his hand upto her face and slowly begins to wipe off the milk mark wid the bkside of his thumb😳😳😳.....(oooo luks like sum1 is hafin x-rated thoughts!😆)----maan gets bk to his senses...buh still doesnt move his hand back....👏
geet is expressionless and is jus starring str8 into maan's eyes.....😳
he begins moving his hand towards her cheek and now down towards her neck and then a bit more down...(not touchin her) and gets hold of one of the coffe mug (oooiii what were u thinking!!! stop gettin x-rated gurls!!😆)--while still starrin into her eyes....he takes it(the coffee mug yaar😆), geet leaves it and maan starts drinking from the part geet had a sip😳😳😳 (awwies<3)
...geet shakes her head a bit (an attempt to get bk to normal)...she feels shy and luks down....maan still giving her those "i want u now" luks while gulpin in the coffee..
"hmmm.....abh kuch behtar hai....laykin itni garam nahi hai"😆
geet: (sarcastic)---"apke garam maizaj key samnay koi bhi cheez thandi perh jaegi"😆
maan: (irritated, luks angry)---"kyaaa???"
geet: (turns her bk on him and walks towards the sofa)..."kuch nahi sir....aap kharain kyun hai?? aaker bethay na (gestures towards the sofa)
maan listens widout any further argument and sits.....
geet walks near the wall (which is sorta close to the window), rests half of her body and head to it.......(she seems lost)
"pata hai sir, jab hoshiyarpur main barish hoti thi, toh maa hamesha pakoray,samosay, aur garma garam chai banati thi (she smiles) aur rajji aur main barish main....".....(pauses, gets depressd and teary)....
maan feels bad fer her, he keeps his coffee on the table, gets up and walks upto her...
"geet main jaanta hoon tumhe unsab ki yaad aati hai, perh maine tumse pehlay bhi kahan tha...jo cheez tumhare ankhon main ansoon lae, ussay yaad kernay ka koi faida nahi...."
widout hafin any second thoughts, he wipes off her tears....geet feels awkward and moves her face away.....
ok now maan realli cant control his emotions fer geet....he jus wants to hold her tight in his arms and never let go of her....hes fighting wid himself....buh geet's mesmerizing beauty and innocence
makes maan lose himslef completely once agen, as if this time he cant control himself.....hez not in his senses anymore....
as mentioned, geet is feelin realli awkward, she decides to walk away...buh maan holds her hand....."geet, mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai".....(maan is xpressionless and lost, geet seems breathless)---she tries to free her hand, buh seeing this, maan holds it evn more tightly...."sir mera hath choriyay".....(she luks scared)...😳😳😳
maan: "maine kaha na mujhe kuch keh na hai (gettin angry)......he pulls her quickly towards the wall and covers both side wid his hand, so she has no place to escape....👏👏
geet: (hell scared and nervous)---"sir....yay...yay aph kya ker rahain hai, mujhe jaaney dey..."
he gestures no....deadli eye-lock....*mahi plays*
maan: "is bar main rukh nahi paounga..." (ohhh daym he luks xtra hawt wen romantic!!⭐️)
geet gets a feelin that maan is gonna confess...this makes her evn more scared...she doesnt want him to confess his feelings wen he doesnt noe anythin abt her past...🤢
geet: (luks angry)....."sir aap meray barain main kuch nahi jaantay...aur yay kya tareeka hai mujhe aisay rokhnay ka....mujhe jaanay dey"...she brings her hand close to maan's chest as n attempt to push him bk, buh maan holds her arms tightly and pulls her evn more closer to him...
maan's emotions are way outa his control, he doesnt haf the strength to control himself any longer, nor does he evn want to.
"geet...aaj nahi...aaj mujh main itni himmat nahi kay main chup rahoon ya tumse dour rahoon"....*stares crazily at her*....
he slowly leaves her arms and moves his hands up to hold her hands....he brings them close to his heart, rests his forehead on her forehead.....and sayz "I LOVE U"😍😳😳😳😳😳
part 5 on pg 11!! it waz gettin realli long here!!!😃
part 6 on pg 14
part 7 on page 16
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