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Posted: 14 years ago
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Its a wow! I'm sorry that I commented so late... But I came online only now.. so... I guess I should be forgiven... :)

Vaise dekha jaaye toh... ur views have been matched with Mayank's and Nupur's and have been portrayed perfectly...

It was a brilliant OS, all in all.. and I will surely be waiting for more of them :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
congrats on ur new os gallery.......
awesome os......
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43

first of all a heart congrats on your new os gallery.......

 
this is for u for giving us another amazing chance to read your work.......
 
 
after this comment i don't think i need to say add me to your pm list.......
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
love your first one shot.......
 
mayank was so caring......
 
 
best part was how they could understand each other......
 
mayank is the best husband.......
 
i am glad now nupur won't find it difficult to see gunjan act.......
 
hope we would get such a scene in mjht......
 
the cvs should take some idea from you.........
 
 
luv
 
mahima
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
p.s scrap or pm me the reply link
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46

its brilliant!

i think the cv's should borrow some ideas 4rm u bcz they r simply fantastic
i m looking forward for some more mindblowing oneshots
do write more
thnx 4 the pm 😊
 
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
awesome, mind blowing, brilliant os. loved it.
it's too good.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48

wow dear.............

lovely oneshot.......................

its beyond awesome.....................

i am speechless..............................
i really never have words to describe your work............
you rock jaan,..........................😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
Amaziinnnggg yaar....
I just loveeee it....
I understand Nupur and Gunjans POV...
And this is the perfect OS too decribe the feeling...
Make moree please... 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
Congratz on your new gallery dear...... hope it becomes a huge success....

yaar....what have u done mahak.....?? why u always do this yaar !!

again...u have left me speechless with ur mindblowing...awesum...superb work !!

yaar this OS is just....mmm.....now what should i say...u haven't left me with  enough words to describe it....

its par excellence dear......u really rock !!

the way u took out each n every emotion of Nupur.....n put it in the form of this OS is just out of this world.....

you described her feelings so beautifully....i just loved it to the core.....

u have potrayed the real Nupur in your OS....which even the CVs have forgotten nowadays.....

loved Mayur's bonding yaar.....love the way Mayu understand Nupur....her feelings....read her mind....listened all her unspoken words.....

and provided her with the worlds biggest comfort......i.e  giving his warmthest hug......

and saying those three magical words , '' I  LOVE YOU'' .....which are full of purity....honesty ....care...respect.....n ofcourse ...love...

Its an awesum...beautiful...n a very touching OS dear......

i loved it to the core......glad that u posted it....

pehle toh main sirf tumhare FFs ki fan thi..... but dheere dheere ab main tumhari bhi fan banti jaa rahi hoon yaar....

keep it up.....n keep posting more....

lovely work....

love u...
varsha