Rose petals! Romantic climax

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Rose petals Part 1



Uncle Anurag is waiting in his house for his nephew Alekh.He is not his real nephew,but the son of the lady whom he considers as his own sister.That lady is his friend's wife.He is a like a son for him.After Alekh's parents' death,Anurag adopted him and brought him up like his own son.Alekh is coming back to India from US after his higher studies.He is planning to join Anurag in the business field.

"Uncle.."
Anurag hears Alekh's voice.Anurag is thrilled and he goes out with joy.
Alekh is standing there with a smile.
A:I'm back Uncle.
Anurag hugs Alekh.
A:Now onwards i will be always with you.I could not breath properly when i was away from you.
An:I missed you too.

Anurag who is a good cook has arranged lunch for Alekh.
A:Wow!I missed your food the most.You are a good cook.
Alekh eats the food like crazy.

Alekh looks out through the window.He sees a beautiful girl in a grand black salwar.Though her salwar is black she is white..her fair skin shines like a marble.
A:I think new people have come to stay in this house.Last time when i came here,this house was kept to be sold.
Alekh looks at her.Her tresses are flying in the air.
"Sadhana!"
She:I'm coming mom..
She goes inside.
A:Sadhana...nice name.The name complements her appearance.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice.. continue.. please
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Only u've commented.Thx a lot
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I'll post the next part wen i get more comments
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πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘wow perfct ff on SAALEKH....gr8 yaar mst cont nd ever pm wen u do..i like alekh and sadhna's intro style😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi dear. welcome to the forumπŸ€—

Very sweet FF. AALEKH is returning from London. 😳 And ANURAG treat me like his own son. And when AALEKH said--I could not breath properly when i was away from you- so cute and undertandable person. He give lots of respect to his Uncle😊. ANURAG si agood cook also...and AALEKH is eating like crazy boyπŸ˜† Kya kare FATHER- SON ka pyaar hota hi aisa hai(ANURAG is like father of AALEKH😳). AND SADHNA 's introduction was very sweet. Girl is in black.....fair skin....she glow like a marbel...😳😳😳😳 Very sweet intro. Keep updating πŸ‘πŸΌ 
Good jobπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘.

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Rose petals Part 2


Alekh:Uncle...you know that i love dancing.Can i pursue my dancing career also?I mean when i'm free,can i go to the dance school to teach dance?
Anurag:Why not?You should develop your dancing talent.
A:Thank you Uncle.

Alekh joins a dance school.
The principal:Alekh,go to Class B.Those students are going to take part in a dance competition.Teach them a good item.
A:Sure.
He goes to class B.
A:Hi girls.I'm your new choreographer.
The girls whisper:Wow!So handsome.
He sees Sadhana.He can't believe his eyes.
He teaches them dance.

Sadhana and team perform on the song 'Dhoom machale..'{Dhoom}.
They win the competition.They jump with joy.
Sadhana goes to Alekh.He is excited as she has come alone.
S:Sir..
A:Please don't call me Sir.Call me Alekh.
S:Thanks a lot.You took a lot of effort to teach us.Otherwise we would not have won.
A:I did'nt have to put much effort as you guys were good dancers..especially you.
Sadhana smiles.Her lips were pink and soft like a rose petal.Her eyes sparlke like a star.

Alekh goes to an icecream parlour.He sees Sadhana sitting alone.He goes near her.She is surprised.
A:We both are alone here.So let us sit together.
She smiles.
A:You ordered icecream?
S:Yes.
A:Which one?
S:Strawberry.
A:Wow!It's my favourite.
Alekh orders strawberry.Sadhana smiles.
They both have icecream.But their concentration is on each other.
They both move out.
S:Ok..bye..
A:You are going home.Right?
S:Yes.
A:Then let us go together.We both are neighbours.
She is surprised:Really?I did'nt know that.
He smiles.

They both go together.Before entering the compund of her house,Sadhana smiles at Alekh:Bye...
Her shawl flies in the air and falls on his face.She is embaassed.Alekh returns the shawl.They are lost in each other's eyes.
A:Bye..
She smiles.

At night...
Sadhana looks out through the window.She sees Alekh smiling at her in the balcony.She becomes shy and hides behind the curtain.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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please add me to pm list :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sorry for late reply . welcome to this forum . wow nice plot it is really cool. u have done a fabulous jobπŸ‘. keep it upπŸ‘πŸΌ. i am eagerly waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOWWWWWW...

its so nice.pls,continue soon.