Magical Journey of Sajan#1(completed)

Posted: 14 years ago
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part 1


a girl wearing a churidar suit and also wearing glasses she bumped into some goons as she was lost in thoughts.she tried to run but one of them was about to touch her face when some one from back stopped him and beat them so much that they ran away.the guy saw the girl hidding her face in her palms
the guy asked ap tekh hain?
the girl removed her hands they both were surprised to see each other
guy:gunjan tm yahan itni raat ko?
gunjan just hugged him and cried a lot .after sometime
samrat;gunjan gari mein betho mein tmhey ghar chor deta hun
after sitting in car
gunjan:smrat mjhe ghar nahn jana
s:kya mtlb gunjan ?
g:mjhe ghar se nikal dya hai bau ji ne ?
s:kya???????
tears comes out of her eyes
s:gunjan puri baat btao
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bau ji:gunjan mein ne tmhar shadi r.v se teh kardi hai
g:kya??
b:han
g:bau ji wo acha larka nahi hai mein us se shadi nahi kar sakte
just than diya and sheena come in the room
b:diya sheena tm is sey smjhao
hm isey bhut achey se smjhaen ge dad both said
actually gunjan is orphan and lived with his caha whom she says bau ji
bau ji leaved the place
diya :gunjan bau ji jo kha hai tmhe wohe karna hai
g:mein aesa kuch nahn karoon gi
sh:agar tmhey yeh shadi nahn karni to tm yahan se ja sakti hamesha hamesha ke liye aur wasiey bhe hmey tmhare koe zarorat nahn aur bau ji ne bhe yahe khah hai
g:sheena ye tm kya keh rahe ho
sh : jo tm sun rahe ho smjhi tmhare pass aik ghanta hai soch lo ye shadi karo gi to raaj krao ge
g:mein yeh shadi kbhe nahn karon ge
sh:to tm yahan se dafa ho sakte ho pta nahn konsi musibat hmare pale par gaye hai
gunjan had tears in eyes .she left the place
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gunjan was crying
smrat:gunjan tm ro na sb teekh ho jae ge
she wiped her tears and nodded
after sometime they reached smrat 's home.they entered in house.
s:gunjan tm betho mein coffe bnata hn
g:mein bana lete hn tm jao change kar lo
s:han tmhary bhe kprey gande ho gaye tm bhe change karlo ohh tmhary kprey hmmm tm meri shirt r trouser pehn lo kunki abhe to aur kuch nahn ho sakta
g:smrat its ok mein pehan lun ge however she was bit uneasy as she dont wear these type of clothes
they both changed and gunjan went to make coffee
in sitting room
smrat called up hIS best friend and like brother mayank and asked him to come at his house
smrat was thinking while gunjan come and gave him a cup of coffee
gunjan sat on a sofa
g:smrat aik bt pocho
s:han sure
g;tm gaib khan ho gae the do saal bd mil rahe ho
s: woh mere dad ke death ho gaye the to mjhe wapis london jana para phir mom r dad ka business r suhani sb ka khyal mjhe rakhna tha. mom dad ke aik saal bad wo bhe chor gayien mein whan se wapis ana tha par us ke leye phele mjhe busineess india mein settle karna tha bus usey mein wqt guzar gya r pta bhe ne chala ke 2 saal beet gaye bus kal he wapis aya hn
g:oh sorry
s:its ok
just then ball rang
g:is wqt kon hai?
s:woh mera dost aye hai
gunjan said acha and take the cups and move towards kitchen
smrat opened door and mayur were there
nupur:smrat itna late bulane ke kia zaroorat the? tm teek to ho?
s:mein tekh hn tm log ander ao sb btata hn
smrat told them about gunjan
just after that gunjan entered she saw mayank and hugged him
mayank also hugged him they broke the hug
m:gunjan to tikh to ho
g:han mein tekh hn bhae ap kasie ho ap london se kb ae wapis aye?apko apni gunjan ke yaad nahin ae 2 saal pehle gaye r bad mein khabar bhe na le ke mein jee rahe hn ya marr gaye?
m:gunjan aese mat keh mein bus majbor tha
they hugged again after some time they broke hug
she saw nupur and asked mayank he told that she is her wife
g:hi bhabi
n:hi gunjan
they hugged also
m:thanks yaar
s:dosti mein no thanks n no sorry
mayank :smrat hm gunjan ko apne sath le jaoon
s:han kuin nahn mayank akhir tmhare behan hai is mein pochne ki kya bt yaar
they all smiled .they say good bye and left sajan had an sweet eye lock(they were only close friends 2 years ago they studied in same college then smrat went london and they had no contact with each other from past 2 years they love each other and know also each other feeling but both dnt have courage to say )
smrat pov
chashmish mein tmse boht pyar karta hn mein tmhey dukhe kbhe nahin dekh sakta mein tmhare zindage kushiyon se bhaar don ga r har gham ko dur kar dn ga
gunjan pov
pta nahn kb meri zindage mein koe kushi ae ge
that n8 they both cnt sleep
next mornig
smrat called mayank and nupur to meet him in coffe bar at 12 o clock.
they reached their on time smrat was already there he was bit worried
mayank and nuper says hi
smrat hi
m:han bolo smrat kya baat hai ?
s:mayank mjhe glat mat smjhna.mein gunjan se pyaar karta hn r us ey shadi karna chahta hn agar tm chao
m:kya tm sach mein us sey pyaar karte kya usey kush rakh pao ge?usy chor ke to nahn jao ge?
kya gunjan bhe tmse pyaar karte hai?
s:han mein us sey bhut pyaar karta hn usey hamesha kush rakhon ge r kbhe nahn akele choron ge promise.beshak hm dono ne kbhe izhar nahn kya par mjhe yaqen hai wo mjse pyar karte hai
m:tekh hai smrat mein gunjan se bt karon ga thanks mjhe gunjan ke bohat chinta the
s:ab tmhey uske chint karne ke koe zarorat nahn mein jo hn
they all smiled then left to their homes
in sharma home
myank:gunjan mjhe tmse aaik bt karne hai
g:ge bhae
he told her about his meeting with smrat and asked her if she want to marry him or not?
g:bhae jaisa apko tekh lage smrat bht acha insan hai mein us sey pyarr kate hn
mayank hugged her and said gunjan mein aj bht kush hn
nupur came and gave them methae she made both of them to eat she looks gunjan lovingly and hugged her
in next few days they decided the date of marriage and sajan were extremely happy
on wedding day
n:gunjan tu tyar ho gae?
g:ge bhabi kase lag rahe hn?
n:bht kobsorat nazar na lag jae she put kajal behind ears mayank also came they all hugged and had slight tears
just then baarat come .it was huge gathering.as smrat and mayank belong to famous company and all bussinessman were invited.smrat sit in mandap.gunjan was brought and all ritual were done and that also from mayur and adhani from gunjan and adhanni.gunjan family were invited but they were not interested in them as her bau ji was only there coz of some imp clients which he wants he hates gunjan .gunjan was depressed as no one from them came to wish her they only were busy in themselves (benia and r v and sheena)except uday. he came to her and asked for forgivness as he was not at home on that day.she forgives him
after dinner bidaii takes place and then they reached shergill mansion
suhani did arrti they enterd and were settled on sofas
suhanni:hmm to bahe aur bhabi ap log tyar hain rasmon ke liye
s:konse rasmein suhanni?
suhanni'just wait and watch she winked both of them and went away after some time
they were settled on carpet and a tray of milk was in between sajan
n:to jo phele ring dohnde ga woh he is game ka winner hoga
smrat and gunjan began to find in between smrat held her hand and smiled to her gunjan blushed after 10 they both find ring and bring out together coz wo aik dosrey ko hara he nahn sakte the unke jeet r haar dono sath sath thein
suh:ye to tie he ho gya hai
nupur saw gunjan tired so asked others to allowed them to go into their room
all gone away then smrat enterd in room where gunjan was standing infront of mirror
smrat came and hugged her from back and was memorized by her bueaty
he kissed on shoulder she shivered her dupata fell on floor he was about to open the dorrie of her blouse when he looked her face and saw cleared uneasiness
he stopped and moved a little back gunjan opened eyes and saw her staring
s:gunjan tm change kar lo thak gaye ho ge
he moved but just then gunjan held he arm
g:smrat mjhe tmse baat karni hai
s:han bolo
they were now standind infront of each other
g:smrat mein tmse bht pyaar karte hn
smrat were on 9 cloud
s:gunjan mein bhe tmse bht pyaar karta hn i love u
g:i love u too smrat and they hugged
after sometime they let go off
g:par smrat mere lye yeh itne jaldi...
s:chashmsh mein janta hn ke tmhare ley achank yeh sab kuch karna mushkil tm jtna tym chahte ho u an i can wait he said smilgly
gunjan smiled and hugged him
they broke hug then smrat made her sit on chair and opened her bangles and kissed on her arms then her all jewllary
s:chashmsh tm change karlo
g:hmm
she moved towards bathroom and smrat also changed his clothes
then they both settled on bed W*H smrat head in gunjan's lap she was movig hands in his hair
s:chashmsh hm nae zindage shuru kar rahe hain aik dosrey par mukamal trust kar ke as one soul in two bodies mein tmse wada karto hn ke mein har pal tmhare sth rahoon ga tmhare ghamoon ko kushuion mein bdal dn ga un rishtoon ke kamme ko apne wajood se pura kar dn ga aur tmhey un ke kbhe yaad nahn ae i promise
gunjan had tears said i also promise smrat hamesha tmhare ban ke rahon ge she hugged him and they both sleep hugging each other
coment plz


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Posted: 14 years ago
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mindblasting one shot dear
fantastic fabulas
keep it up 👏👏👏
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INDEX
PART 1           PAGE I
PART 2           PAGE 1
PART 3           PAGE 2
PART 4           PAGE 3
PART 5           PAGE 4
PART 6           PAGE 5
PART 7           PAGE 5
PART 8(A,B)   PAGE 6
PART 9           PG    8
PART 10        PG    9
PART 11        PG    10
PART 12        PG    11
PART 13        PG    13
PART 14        PG 14
part 15            pg 15
part 16             pg 16
part 17(a)        pg17
part 17(b)        pg17
part 18        pg 18
part 19        pg   19
part 20      page 20
PART 21      PAGE 20
PART 22       PAGE 21
PART 23           PAGE 23
part 24        page 23
part 25        pg 24
part 26          page 26
part 27        page 27
part 28        page 28
part 29        page 29
part 30          page 31
part 31        page 33
part 32       page 34
part 33       page 35
part 34        page36
part 35        page 38
PART 36      PAGE 39
PART 37      PAGE 40
PART 38       PAGE 42
PART 39        PAGE 44
PART 40       PAGE 45
PART 41      PAGE 46
PART 42     PAGE 49
PART 43      PAGE 51
PART 44       PAGE 55
PART 45      PAGE 57
PART 46 PAGE 59
PART 47 PAGE 61
PART 48 PAGE 61
PART 49 PAGE 64
PART 50 PAGE 66
PART 50(B) PAGE 67
PART 50(C) PAGE 67
PAART 51 page 72
PART 52 page 74
PART 53 PAGE 77
PART 54 PAGE 77
PART 55 PAGE 77
PART 56 PAGE 77
PART 57 PAGE 79
PART 58 PAGE  81
PART 59 PAGE 82
PART 60 PAGE 84
PART 61 PAGE 86
PART 62 page 88
PART 63 page 91
PART 64 PAGE 92
PART 65 PAGE  92
PART 66 (A)PAGE  92
PART 66(B) PAGE  92
PART 66(C)  PAGE 93
PART 67 PAGE 94
PART 68 PAGE  95
PART 69 PAGE 96
PART 70 PAGE 97
PART 71 PAGE 98
PART 72 page   100
PART 73 page   101
PART 74  page   103
PART 75 page   104
PART 76  page   106
PART 77   page   108
PART 78  page   110
PART 79   page 112
PART 80 page  114
PART 81 page   116 
PART 82 page   118
PART 83 page     120
PART 84 page    120
PART 85 page    121
PART 86 page  122
PART 87 page  123
PART 88 page  125
PART 89 page   127
PART 90 page   131
part   91  page  132
part   92   page  133
part 100  page  133(adding up parts a b c)
thanks a lot
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Edited by meerrii - 13 years ago
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wow great updatee veryy nice its it one shot thennn mindblowing and if its ff typee then i cann onlyy sayy pls doo cont soon i loved it!
 
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hmm nice one............. but have many error............pls change it.........and dont get angry for the comment..............i m saying this so that u can improve ur writing......continue soon.....congrats for ur first FF.
Posted: 14 years ago
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part 2
the next morning gunjan got up he saw smrat looking so much cute like a child sleeping she smiled and kissed her on his cheek
and whispered good morning smrat
smrat also kissed her on fore head and said good morning chasmish
then she was about to stand when smrat hold her hand and asked chashmish khahn ja rahe ho?
g:smrat fresh hone tm bhe uth jao phir sath mein he pooja karien ge
s:teekh hai chashmish tm phele fresh ho jao
gunjan smiled and moved towards bathroom
she came out after 15 mins smrat was memorizaed by her beauty
she was wearing a red sarre and loking mindblowing
smrat kissed her on forehead and said you are looking like angel my angel she blushed smrat smiled and moved towards bathroom
he came out quickly and then the do pooja.during pooja mayur also came after pooja gunjan and smrat prayed for each other happiness.
after pooja
s:tm log kb ae (saying to mayur)
m:jb tm log pooja kar rahe the
n:tm log itni jaldi uth gaye wah kya baat hai
s:yeh to chashmish ka hukam tha jald uthne ka warna mein khana sware sware uthoon
g:sware uthna achi baat hote hai
s:to mein ne konse khah galt baat hote hai janab
g:suhanni aur adhiraaj nahn ae
suh:bhabi apne bulaya aur hum hazir
gunjan smiled
suh:kasie hain bhabi
g:tmharey samne hn
suh:phr to bohat kush lag rahe hain
all smiled
g:mein nasta lagate hn
suh:bhabi ap ruken mein lagate hun abhe to ap nae nawele dulhan hain abhe ap aram karien
suhanni moved to kitchen weher everyone sitted in sitting room and talking heartly
after sometime
suh:nashta lag gya hai aa jao sb
they all done their breakfast
m:smrat aj reception hai to tmne preprations kar lein
s:hmmm han preprations ho rahe hain adhiraaj tm ja ke check kar loo teekh hai
a:han kuin nahn
after sometime all other went and sajna rested for sometime
at night
s:chashmsh yeh tie to band do plzzzzzz
g:smrat mein tyar ho rahe hn tm kdh kar lo plz
s:chashmsh mein ne try kya par pta nahn kya hai bnd he nahn rahe
g:acha ruko ati hn
she came out from dressing room
she was lookng so much beautiful.she was wearing a pinkish long frok with steps (hope i am clearified with dress like barbie dress)
smrat was lost in her.
she blushed seeing him lost
gunjan came near him and took the tie from his hand and made him wear he came into senses gunjan was about to leave when he stopped him and kissed on her neck then on froehead then was about to kiss her on lips just then they heared suhanni calling bahe bhabhi jaldi tyar ho ke neche aen
he cursed her to spoil the moment they let each other go
they came down and were looking best jodi .dia and sheena were feeling jelous and was fuming in anger
sajan were very happy and were reciveing wishes and gifts and praises
after some time lights were off there was spot light on gunjan and then smrat was shown singing a song

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really nice update dear.continue soon.
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veryyynice loved itttt plss do contt soon we will be waiting
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really fantabulas update mirrii
just try to continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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its awesomeeeee dear..
amazinggggg..
pllzzzzz cont soon..
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