DEVI Written Update - March 1st - Incomplete

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Friends,

This is my first attempt about writing episode updates. plz bare with me if you

find any mistake and don't forget to update me abt that

Part1:

Episode starts with Coconut selling business. Two persons came there to buy the

coconuts. Laxmi and her friends tries to go out from back side. They both persons will participate in the action and the person who coats the highest rate, he gives the money and take the coconuts from them. Laxmi sister stops them at door and asks them where they are going? Laxmi says that they are going out to play. She asks if you are going out to play then why you people are going from back door and she continues by saying she will tell papa about this. Suddenly Laxmi friend kranthi starts laughing. Laxmi sister asks her why are you laughing? Kranthi tells some thing to make her fool and they leaves the place with running

One person calls to Pallu bhai mobile and tells that his owner is having so much money but he don't have peace in his life. So he wants to come to see devi mayya. Paltu bhayya says why not, he can come any time. But along with that he need to do some other work also as helping poor people and give some amount to devi mayya as dakshina. He asks for the special dharshan then Pallu bhayya tells that Wednesday special dharshan is there but he need to give special dakshina to devi mayya. The person accepts for that

Part 2:

Conversation between the two brothers about money, paltu bhayya says that he done so much favor by making laxmi as devi mayya, but he is not getting enough for what exactly he deserves.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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This update is really good, please carry on the good work vrsharma 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thx Friends
U can call me as Vidya
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