a new poemmmmmmmmmmm

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Posted: 14 years ago
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friendsssssssssssss after sucha long time meetingggggg u alllllllllllllll.hope all of u r fine?i am here with a poem after a very very long time.this poem is very close to my hrt as it depicts my feelings of my personal meeting with gurmeet,the way i have analysed my character.
13th april 2009 will mark the 1 yr completion of my meeting with GURU bhaiya and DEBI di.and i have tried my level best to analyse them from my perspectiveeeeeeeeeee.hope u all like it.
nahi amrit ke kumbh me bhi aisa ras apar

GURU DEBI dono hain sneha ras ka bhandar

aisa dibya hain,aisa sudarshan

lagte ho sammukh lakshmi narayan

manas ko bas ek abhilash

manmandir me ho dono ka bas.....


GURMEET ka byabahar aisa sundar manohari hain

sundar tan man bachan se jo uhi GURU nam dhari hain

lage manuj rup me satya uo RAM ke abatari hain

unsa na sreshtha koi,na koi gunme unse bhari hain

me to bas ek ihe geet gayu,GURMEET charit ka katha sunayu

kaunsa shabda ka karu chayan,kaise karu GURU charit ka barnan

sang he DEBI di ati sukhdayi,ram sang jaise janaki mayi

prem ka murat sneha apar,ati manoram unka byabahar.

ek prem ka sindhu jinka bishalta bhari hain

uo atal sindhu ka jal GURU DEBINA nam dhari hain

jinke na koi sima hain ,uo ananta aur bishal hain

lage bhagbati sang narayan dindayal hain

jaise bhi rup ho ,ho apnapan,premmay ho bas unka jiban

sade rahe sneha nata aise,tole koi bhi ise kaise
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great
u have done fantastic job
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Posted: 14 years ago
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its a lovely poem bhaiya
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow guru-debi becomes very happy for meeting you when they read this poem,fantastic bhaiya.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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saby bhaiyya very good poem

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