The last portion of the update was brilliant. and I also loved the whole permission scene of Bani and Jai as well. I could completely imagine the scenes and all that in my mind and that I feel is just fantastic. I think you did the right thing by making jai decide to be in the room and Bani realizing her love for Jai as well. what was the point in Jai continuing to haunt bani just like that. Now I would want Bani to make sure that Jai wakes up ? which am sure he would do. would it be a anticlimax if Jai wakes up and does not recognize bani. so many possibilities and am excited to read how you take it forward. once again, made a wonderful read.
Swathi
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