FF: Serendipity .... Epilogue on PG 30 - Page 14

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Posted: 15 years ago
That was so sad. I feel for Bani and she finally realizes that she fell in love with a ghost. I hope that they meet again and get together. I want Jai to realize his feelings fast. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago

i am crying with u bani, i hope jai realise soon tt he love bani.. bani do sm thing and wake up jai

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Posted: 15 years ago
lol.. but im always nice.. lol.. great part yaar.. wow hope jai realises how dumb he was to let bani go and goes back to her.. and i hope meera bai gets kicked out of jais case and bani handles it.. lol.. continue sooon yaaar.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Haila..poor bani yaar! I feel sooo sorry for her..and ofcourse Jai too!! [;([

REALLY hope Jai comes out of coma soon!!

Loved it yaar!! 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey
great update..feel so sorry for bani in the end...she fell in love with jai the ghost!! hope she does something that wakes jai up..
continue soon
nadia
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Posted: 15 years ago
aww poor bani
now plzz dont seperate JB yaar
thats soo sad
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
justtttt😭
and 😭😭😭
con soon plz
sh
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awwww! what an update. penned very nicely dil. it was very sad but inevitable for them to part.. now what's going to happen????????? and Dil its a WARNIG from ME dont DISSAPPEARRRR update FAST.
love
kamy
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Posted: 15 years ago
really sad part
aww jigs named her baby jai! so nice
aww poor jb, so close and still so far away
cont soon
SA
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Posted: 15 years ago
The last portion of the update was brilliant. and I also loved the whole permission scene of Bani and Jai as well. I could completely imagine the scenes and all that in my mind and that I feel is just fantastic. I think you did the right thing by making jai decide to be in the room and Bani realizing her love for Jai as well. what was the point in Jai continuing to haunt bani just like that. Now I would want Bani to make sure that Jai wakes up ? which am sure he would do. would it be a anticlimax if Jai wakes up and does not recognize bani. so many possibilities and am excited to read how you take it forward. once again, made a wonderful read.

Swathi
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