ACHPM: What happens next? - P2 updated

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ok this is not the news of ACHPM coming back on screen. But Fazi, Nisha and I were thinking that Star Plus has denied us the pleasure to watch the show. But then there were so many things we wanted to see and never got to see. Why not pen down our thoughts in the form of a Fan Fiction. Since the forum is being archived soon we will continue this FF writing in IF's FF section. The link is below:
https://india-forums.com/forum_topics.asp?FID=94
I am posting the first part and Nisha will be posting the second part. I request you all please contribute your FFs in this thread. This way we can continue to keep in touch once the forum is archived.
 
Part 1: Goodbye Allahabad
https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1056846&PID=18660186&#18660186
Part 2: Sandy's first night in Mumbai
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1056846&PID=18688002&#18688002
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 1: Goodbye Allahabad!
Precap: So we start off where ACHPM left off that is Sandeep tells the mohalla that he loves Urmi and they want to get married. Rasik agrees to get them married if he is able to make something of himself in one year's time. Sandeep then decides to take up a job in Mumbai as the editor of the newspaper he freelanced for in Allahabad. He comes and tells this news to Urmi.
 
Sandeep has to leave for Mumbai immediately since he needs to take over from the Mumbai editor who is retiring soon. So the scene starts at railway station at the next day. Two coolies are discussing the crowd around a train boogie.
Coolie1: Bhaiyya kaun hai? Koi neta ya mantri hain kya?
Coolie2: Lagta to aisa hi hain. Par iss neta ko hum kabhi dekhe nahin hain.

A little away at the center of the melee Sandeep is telling Ratiram.
S: Ratiramji itna sab karne ki kya zaroorat thi. Main kahan itna khaa paonga?
Ratiram: Arre toh fridge mein rakh ke khana. Tumhe quater mil raha hain na? Fridge toh hoga na?
S: Woh toh wahan jaa kar hi pata lagega na.
Sujata: Arre Sandeep sunn woh maine jo theple diye the woh tune rakh liye na?
S: Haan Aunty...par itna main nahin khaa paonga. Aur Lucknow se main by air jaa raha hoon. Mujhe nahin lagta woh log itna saman le jaane denge.
Sukka: Maine suna hain extra saman ka woh extra charge lete hain par le jaane dete. Tu bhi fine bhar dena.
S: Sukka bhaisahab...
Sukka: Sandeep teri saas bade pyaar se de rahi aur saas ko apne side mein rakhega toh hi fayde mein rahega.
They all laugh. Others want to know what's the joke. Saurav has bought some grapes and wants Sandeep to take them with him. Sandeep again tries his level best to politely refuse the offering. Meanwhile Sandeep's eye catches Urmi's. Ever since news broke about their relationship Urmi has been acting shy and standing away from him when others are around them. Right now Urmi is standing with Mahua and Zeenat. Now only 10 mins are left before the train departs. Sandeep wonders if he will be able to catch a few private moments with Urmi before he leaves and wonders what happenned to Urmi. Why is she acting like this? He is not used to dealing with a shy girlfriend. He extricates himself from the others and goes towards Urmi when he is interrupted by Hari and the other deewane.
Hari: Sandeep bhaiyya
S: Kya hua?
H: Dekhiye na iss Jugle ke bachche ko. Kal se roye jaa raha hain.
S: Kyun?
H: Aap jaa rahe hain na. Is liye.
S: Jugle, main hamesha ke liye thode hi jaa raha hoon
H(sadly): Wohi toh!
S: Huh?
Jugle goes and hugs Sandeep.
J: Mujhe aap ki bahut yaad ayenge Sandeep bhaiyya. Main na aap se milne aaonga Mumbai.
M: Haan Sandeep bhaiyya hum bhi aayenge.
S: Haan aa jana. Aur main jab nahin rahonga tab tum log zyada shararat mat karna. Tumhari shikayat nahin milni chaiye mujhe. Aur pure mohalle ka aur khas kar ke bauji ka khyal rakhna.
R: Ji bhaiyya.
Sandeep again tries to go towards Urmi when he is stopped by Rasik.
Rasik: Sandeep sunn main ummeed karta hoon ki kal jo kuch bhi hua uss baat ka tujhe zyada bura nahin laga.
S: Arre nahin uncle main samajh sakta hoon.
Rasik: Mujhe pata hain...akhir iss mohalle mein sab se samajhdaar to tum hi ho. Magar jab tumhari beti hogi tab tum meri baat poori tarah se samjhoge.
S(blushing a little): Shayad aap thik keh rahe hain. Abhi toh mujhe ashirwad dijiye ki main apne maqsad mein kamyaab ho sakoon.
Rasik: Mera ashirwad tumhare saath hain.
Sandeep now thinking it is polite enough to move away from Rasik starts to go but everyone has now realized that there is very less time left for the departure. The men come and surround him and hug him, showering him with ashirwads, duas and wishes. The women too do the same. Sujata tells him to let her know as soon as he reaches Mumbai how is he managing with food. He has taken too less with him. Sandeep says that he is sure that all the food will last him the whole year. Pammi tells him to concentrate on his work and not to look at 'shehri ladkiyaan'. Mahua says she is sure that he will do no such thing. Sandeep keeps looking at his watch wondering if he will be able to talk to Urmi at all now. Sukka notices this and realizes Sandeep's state of mind. He goes to group surrounding Sandeep.
Sukka: Tum log aise hi lagi rahogi ya phir isse Urmi se bhi milne dogi?
Zeenat: Arre tu abhi tak Urmi se mila nahin? Chal jaa mil le jaldi se abhi gadi chotne wali hain.
Sandeep heaves a sigh of relief and goes towards Urmi. Seeing him come towards her Urmi blushes now that eyes of all the people are on them. Sandeep feels everyone's eyes on them too and gets conscious.
S: Suno...Bauji ko thik waqt par dawa de dena. Woh kabhi kabhi kehte hain ki woh khud khaa lenge par bhool jaate hain. Isi liye tum unhe khud khilana.
U: Ji. Par aapko unhe yahan aane se mana nahin karna chahiye tha.
S: Do din see unki tabiyat theek hain hain. Aur woh yahan aate toh pata nahin main jaa bhi pata ya nahin.
They become pensive at the thought.
S(huskily): Aur suno apna khyaal rakhna.
U(blushing): Ji. Aur aap apna.
S: Achcha toh main chaloon?
Urmi nods her head.
S: Bas aur kuch nahin kehna tumhe? Main ek saal ke liye jaa raha hoon Urmi.
U: Mujhe pata hain. Aur mujhe aapke baare mein toh pata nahin par main nahin reh paaongi aapke bina ek saal tak. Isi liye toh...
S: Isiliye kya?
U: Kal jo suitcase pack kiya tha woh aapke samaan ke saath train mein hain.
S(stunned): Kya?!!!
U: Sandeep babu dhire boliye koi sunn lega. Ek baar Mumbai pahunchke hum shaadi kar lenge. Phir koi kuch nahin kar payega. Papa bhi nahin.
S: Urmi...tum...
Urmi is no longer able to control her laughter and starts laughing.
S: Ab kya hua?
U: Apna chehra toh dekhiye.
S: Oh! Toh yeh sab mazak tha.
U: Haan ab to mazaak tha. Par yeh sach bhi ho sakta hain. Mujhe aapke bina rehne ki aadat nahin.
S: Urmi..!
U: Par ab ke liye jab tak aap Mumbai pahunch nahin jaate mujhe aap har aadhe ghante baad phone karenge.
Sandeep gives her a meaningful glance.
U: Haan aap karenge. Aur yaad hain na Mumbai pahunchte hi aap mujhe apni chabhi courier kar denge.
Sandeep shakes his head.
U: Koi bahana nahin chalega. Aur wahan idhar-udhar nahin dekhenge.
S: Idhar udhar?
U: Seher ki ladkiyon ko.
S: Jiski itni khoobsurat premika ho usse kisi aur ke taraf dekhne ki kya zaroorat hain? Haan?
Urmi is surprised and happy. Before she can recover Sandeep starts to turn. While turning away he lightly brushes her fingers with his. He looks back and smiles and turns away. Urmi blushes. The final announcement for the departure of the train has been made. Sandeep gets into the train and waves out to everyone.

 

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Posted: 15 years ago
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bhooooooooooo...........snif snif.......😭........... i want to seeeeee this episodeeeeeeeeeeeee..........
 
 
cool kshhhhhhhhhh.......thanks a lot :).........hai kiya yaad dilladiya zalim!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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oh dear.. I am not sure I want to read this..  but I am even sure I will read this no matter what I decide..
 
yaar.. I just dont want to be there again..I just hope I dont go in devdas mode again and start listning to monu's aoge vid mix everyday..
 
P.S. will read it when I get back on interenet, got to run for uni.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome,ksh....i could literally imagine all the scenes...especially the last one..soo sweet!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I finally read it.Its awesome especially the last part I bet Urmi would have said the same thing to see his bewildered look for the last time but I wonder if Sandeep would have said that last line.

Amazingly written and as Surbhi said all the scenes were before us.So plz keep writing more.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ok. Wow! absolutely wow!! it so soooo sooo exactly chaabhiish!!
loved it. more pleeej!!!
 
the star ppl are stupid. if they had kept Siddharth dude chained in chabhi they wouldnt be worrying abt beating Balika Vadhu atleast! I mean its great (BV) but this one was a Gem!
 
(&^%*&$*^%$&^ star plus!
 
loved it ksh!!  I was starting to forget just how sandeep-ish sandy was and jussst how πŸ˜› Urmi was!!
 
 
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 2: First night in Mumbai

Finally Sandeep's flight lands in Mumbai. It's been a long and tiring trip. As he walks out, he sees a staff member from the newspaper waiting to collect him & take him to his new place. On the drive, the guy mentions that he had tried to call Sandeep to let him know he would be there but his phone was switched of. Switched off? Of course! For the plane, but now Sandeep knows Urmi will have been calling him, worrying..
 
Sandeep switches on his cell. There are 4 missed calls and 3 messages. Before he can dial the phone rings. It is Urmi.

U: Aap ne itni der cell kyun off karke rakha tha?
S: Urmi plane mein cell off karke rakhna chahiye.
U: Par plane se nikal kar on nahin kar sakte?
S: Urmi main jaan bujh kar aisa kyun karonga.
U: Mujhe satane ke liye. Aapko mujhe satane mein bada maza aata hain.
S: Urmiii...

From the background he hears Sujata saying 'Kya phone par chipki hui hain aur usse pareshan kar rahi hain....chal mujhe de'. So saying Sujata takes the phone.

Sujata: Sandeep tu thik thak pahunch gaya na?
S: Ji
Pammi taking the phone from Sujata.
Pammi: Woh jo alu ke paranthe diye the maine woh khaa liye na?
Before Sandeep can reply Sukka takes the phone.
Sukka: Puttar tujhe airport par koi lene aaya hain?
Rasik taking the phone from Sukka 'Arre kyun nahin lene ayenge?'
Rasik to Sandeep on phone: Sandeep sunn tu abhi jaa raha hain ghar ya phir pehle tu hotel ya guest house mein tehrega?
S: Abhi seedhe ghar hi jaa raha hoon.
Rasik: Achcha aur ghar kahan hain.
Ratiram taking the phone from Rasik.
Ratiram: Woh tum baad mein pooch lena.
To sandeep on the phone.
Ratiram: Samaan thik thak pahunch gaya na?
In the same manner the phone gets passed around to everyone in the mohalla. Finally Sandeep requests Mahua to give Bauji the phone.
Sandeep: Bauji aap ne dawai khaa liya na?
Bauji: Urmi aayi thi dawai khilane. Lagta hain tune usse sab sikha padake bheja hain.
Sandeep laughs.
Bauji: Aur sunn iss ladki ko jab woh kahe phone kar liya kar. Nak mein dum kar rakha tha.
Sandeep gives a wry smile.
S: Bauji apna khyal rakhiyega. Achcha mein phone rakhta hoon. Lagta hain ghar aa gaya hain.
So saying he keeps the phone. They have reached the appartment which is given by the newspaper to its editor. This is where Sandeep will be staying for the next one year. The staff member Suraj who had come to pick him up says:
Suraj: Lagta hain bahut log aap ko already miss kar rahe hain.
S: Haan meri family hain.
Suraj: Tab toh Mumbai aana aapke liye mushkil raha hoga? Meri family bhi Nagpur mein rehti hain.
S: Haan lekin zindagi mein kuch karne ke liye kabhi kabhi mushkil decisions lene padte hain.
Suraj: Sahi kehte hain aap.

So saying that, they go up to Sandy's new apartment.

 
Sandy finally walks into his new place. He looks around, taking it all in...it's fully furnished, very well done up but lacking the homely touch. He's spent his journey thinking over the last couple of days. Kitna kuch hua! He had never thought things would take this turn...that the whole mohalla would find out in such a way. That they would have unanimously supported him..that itself had overwhelmed him. He recalls Bauji stepping in to talk to Rasik .. Sukka & Saurabh's employment offers and Guptaji tellilng him to go work with Naresh...but most of all he remembers the feel of Urmi's hand in his.

He could feel her trembling throughout it all..her fear was giving him the strength he needed to make the decision he didn't want to make. He had never wanted a high flying career which needed him to work long hours, it was what he had stayed away from out of choice! But the feeling of Urmi's hand in his was one that he wanted to feel forever..and if that meant proving himself by succeeding as a Mumbai editor then so be it. He was ready to make that sacrifice.
 
Looking around the apartment he starts to unpack. First things first, he puts away all the food that Ratiram, Sujata and Pammi have packed for him, the theplas alone will be enough for a month! After the food is safely stored, he start with his favourite things, his books. As he is going through putting them on the bookshelf, suddenly a bit of paper flutters out of one and heads towards the balcony. Sandeep walks over to pick it up and realises it's a picture of Urmi! He'd forgotten all about that picture! He picks it up, remembering...how had he taken so long to realise? How had it taken him so long to understand her love - and importantly, his own?

He had almost lost her. Had it not been for Zoya that evening, maybe he would have gone ahead and married Vasudha. Or would he? He had always known in his heart of hearts that he was meant to be Urmi. Would he have done something about that if Zoya had not given him those rings?
 
He smiles to himself, no point in thinking about all that now. Now he has to focus on making a success of his year in Mumbai. 
 
Suddenly, he hears a commotion coming from outside. He walks out towards the balcony, trying to find out where the noise is coming from. He looks around, and finally sees a woman telling a girl off. The girl is young, maybe about 10 years old,  and it's obvious that being told off like this is a regular occurance for her! The girl looks so much like the woman that it's clear they are mother and daughter. Suddenly a man appears, trying to step between the mother and daughter. The girl hides behind the man, and the woman starts to shout at him instead!
 
As the man & woman continue to argue,  the girl runs off to join her friends who are waiting for her...the woman yells out "Tanvi!! Kaha ja rahi ho! Yaha aao!" But's its to no avail, the girl is gone and the man is left trying to calm the woman down. The scene reminds Sandeep of Pammi & Sukka. Even the look on the girl's face is reminiscent of Jugle!
 
Suddenly Sandeep can't help but think of Colonel Gunj. The 4 velle, Saurabh and Mauha, Sukka & Pammi, Bauji...he's never been left alone for so long before. Back in CG someone would have been knocking on his door by now, if no-one else it would have been Urmi bringing him dinner. Urmi..with her nakhre, Urmi, with her determination. Urmi, with her single focus. She had always been right by his side, never giving him a chance to feel lonely. Even when he had been rude to her, she didn't leave his side...

Since the scene with the mohalla yesterday he's had very little chance to spend much time with her. It had all been so rushed, even on the call now he had said barely two words to her before the rest of the mohalla had taken over. His eyes search the vista in front of him, looking desperately for the one person he know can't be there. He wonders how she's feeling. Before he realises what he's doing, he's calling her..

Urmi picks up after 1 ring.

S: Suno tumne bauji ko dawai de di na?
U: Haan.
S: Aur tumne riyaaz kiya hain na?
U: Riyaaz ke baare mein toh bhool hi gayi. Lekin ab jab mere guruji nahin hain toh...
S: Urmi suno main nahin chahta ki tum riyaaz karna chod do. Aur aunty se kehelwa kar naye teacher ke paas jana shuru kar do warna tumhara riyaaz choot jayega.
U: Sandeep babu.
S: Hmm..
U: Kya aap mere riyaaz ke baare mein baat karne ke liye phone kiya hain?
S: Haan...nahin actually bauji ke dawai ke baare mein bhi poochna tha.
U: Achcha?
S: Aur Gupta aunty ka haath jal gaya tha na? Woh kaisa hain?
U: Gupta uncle unhe station se laute waqt hi doctor ke paas leke gaye the. Accha suniye...aapne khana khaya?
S: Nahin. Khaa loonga. Urmi...
U: Hmmm...
S: Itne mahino baad pehli baar tum muhje dinner serve nahin karogi. 
U: Isi liye toh keh rahi thi ki main bhi chalti hoon...toh phir dinner bhi serve karti aur lunch bhi.
S(strictly): Urmi...
U: Sandeep Babu!
S: Aur tumhare papa? Woh kya sochte? Kya kabhi bhi main un se aankh mila pata?
U: Mujhe pata hain Sandeep babu yeh aapke liye kitna mushkil tha. CG se sabse zyada lagav aapko hain. Yeh mohalla hi aapka parivaar hain aur aap kabhi iss mohalle ko chod na nahin chahte. Lekin ab iss tarah achanak raton raat aapko sab kuch chodna pada. Sab mere khatir.
S: Urmi yeh sab main sirf tumhare liye aur humare future ke liye hi nahin kiya. Magar shayad apne liye bhi bhi kiya. Lekin yahan aa kar jab main aaspaas dekhta hoon toh sirf anjaan jageh aur anjaan chehren dihkai dete hain. Thoda sa CG toh yahan par bhi hain par CG toh nahin hain. Aur yahan bauji nahin hain...tum nahin ho. Pata nahin Urmi main yeh kar paonga ya nahin...abhi toh ek din bhi nahin hua hain mujhe yahan par.
U: Mujhe pata hain ki aap zaroor kar payenge. Shayad humare aane wale zindagi ke liye yeh zaroori hain. Taki hume kisi baat ka afsoos nahin reh jaye. Mujhe pakka yakeen hain ki bahut jald sari Mumbai har subah Sandeep Shukla ke likhe hue editorial padne ke liye bekarar hogi.
S: Haan thik waise hi jaise tum roz bollywood ki khabrein chod kar editorial padti ho.
U: Par aap jo bhi likhte hain woh toh main padti hoon. Maine akhbaar wale Rahim chacha se baat kar li hain. Woh akhbaar ka Mumbai edition yahan deliver karenge. Hala ki woh ek din purana hoga. Aur mujhe yakeen hain ki aapki likhi hui editorial log usi tarah padenge jaise filmi news padte hain.

Sandeep laughs.

S: Chalo main rakhta hoon.
U: Mummy ke theple khana mat bhuliye.
S: Kaise bhool sakta hoon? Itne saare jo hain. Poore saal chalegi.

Urmi laughs. They put down the phone.

Sandeep walks back into the flat, smiling. Just speaking to Urmi had soothed him, reminded him of why he was doing this in the first place. Now he had to succeed, there was no choice but to. Urmi was his future, and this was what he had to do in order to achieve that. No matter what, he knew he would make this a success because he had to.

He walks to the kitchen and unpacks the theplas, smiling to himself.

(Dialogues courtesy of Ksh!)
Edited by Nisha_07 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks for all ur comments folks. I am sure all of us have wanted to see this or that in the show further. so do write up what you wanted to see...either here(so that we can get some ideasπŸ˜‰) or in the form of a FFs.
@shrey: as far as sandy's last line is concerned maybe the sandy of later wouldnt have said something like that but the sandy of august to nov who was falling in love with urmi despite his attempts to control his feelings would have. also i wanted it to end with something romantic from sandy's end which would be a pleasant surprise for urmi.
but yes do keep the comments coming.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow! the 2nd part is great too!
 
An episode full of sandy's tho'ts and flashbacks.. you know .. looks like an ideal start of a new season.
 
btw
 
S: Haan thik waise hi jaise tum roz bollywood ki khabrein chod kar editorial padti ho.

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U: Aur mujhe yakeen hain ki aapki likhi hui editorial log usi tarah padenge jaise filmi news padte hain.
πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 
 
(btw, something to add - I think Ratiramjee would hv definitely cried while sandy was leaving! )