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All was quiet and well in Brar mansion where all the occupants slept without a care in the world,both the abusers and the abused.Manveer Kaur Brar slept peacefully heedless to the future which promised to disrupt her existence of contentment,heedless to the storm which would send tremors everywhere.She woke up the next morning,ready to begin a new day of mudslinging and gas lighting when she realised something extremely strange.Blinking as if she were in a dream,she sat up only to realise she was no longer on her bed but on the floor ,in the storeroom.It was dark and dingy and she could hear scuttling in the shadows.Her hair seemed longer than usual and her skin surprisingly glowing.

Stumbling to her feet,she ran to the mirror and stared at her reflection.After ten long seconds,a loud scream tore out of her,startling a napping rat.She screamed again.The rat simply raised an unimpressed eyebrow and slowly sauntered off.She felt very offended. Footsteps echoed down the corridor and the door burst open to reveal a very hassled looking Gurleen,flour in her hair.

"Sahiba,is everything alright?I heard you scream twice."

To be continued......

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Posted: 4 months ago
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Waiting for next chapter....

It seems different.😳😳

Damn everyone is more creative than PH.

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Posted: 4 months ago
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Chapter one

All was quiet and well in Brar mansion where all the occupants slept without a care in the world,both the abusers and the abused.Manveer Kaur Brar slept peacefully heedless to the future which promised to disrupt her existence of contentment,heedless to the storm which would send tremors everywhere.She woke up the next morning,ready to begin a new day of mudslinging and gas lighting when she realised something extremely strange.Blinking as if she were in a dream,she sat up only to realise she was no longer on her bed but on the floor ,in the storeroom.It was dark and dingy and she could hear scuttling in the shadows.Her hair seemed longer than usual and her skin surprisingly glowing.


Stumbling to her feet,she ran to the mirror and stared at her reflection.After ten long seconds,a loud scream tore out of her,startling a napping rat.She screamed again.The rat simply raised an unimpressed eyebrow and slowly sauntered off.She felt very offended. Footsteps echoed down the corridor and the door burst open to reveal a very hassled looking Gurleen,flour in her hair.


"Sahiba,is everything alright?I heard you scream twice."

Manveer opened her mouth to answer but no sound came out.

"Why is there flour in your hair?"she found herself asking,feeling rather stupid.

"Veer and Ekam had a flour fight in the kitchen."she replied,raking a hand through her hair,absent mindedly."But what happened to you puttar?"

Manveer felt a lump in her throat.It had been a long time since anyone had addressed her with genuine affection,not even Gurleen who had always been wary of her power play.Everyone respected her,but there was no lost between her and the rest of the family.In fact,the only reason Angad still stuck to her was because he had been condition to do so by his daarji and her.Had he been his own person, he would have most definitely walked off.Perhaps that's why she hated Sahiba.After all,she had been the one to force open Angad's eyes and encouraged him to think independently.

Angad was all she had and she feared losing him the most,so she had done everything in her power to chain him to her,even at the cost of his well being.

"Sahiba!"

Gurleen's voice brought her back to earth.

What should she do ?she wondered.

She could either pretend to be Sahiba and prey whatever magic had happen reversed itself or just come clean to everyone.Realising that she wasn't saintly enough to pretend,she decided to seek Gurleen's help.Taking a deep breath,she addressed the younger woman.

"Gurleen,this is Manveer in Sahiba's body."

Gurleen burst into laughter.

"That's an excellent joke Sahiba ."

"I'm not joking."

Gurleen stilled and looked at her incredulously.

"Prove it by telling me something only Manveer parjaai would know."

"The emerald necklace bebe gave Jasleen is not real but just an immitation."

Gurleen was stupefied.

"Only the two of us were there and bebe swore us to silence to avoid Daarji's wrath.But Parjaai,how on earth did this happen?"

Manveer sighed internally.Gurleen wasn't exactly the brightest bulb in the box.What exactly a smart man like Jaspal saw in her,she had no idea.Or perhaps he genuinely liked her stupidity,she thought viciously in a bid to satisfy her own ego.

"If I knew the answer to that question,I wouldn't be standing here."

The younger woman looked at her strangely.

Manveer started pacing the room.

"Considering the fact that I am in Sahiba's body, it's safe to assume that she is in mine.If we find her,we might be able to reverse it."

"Your body has been missing since morning."

"Wait, what?What on earth does that girl think of herself?But it's ok,we should probably check her schedule and follow her footsteps."

Gurleen nodded doubtfully.

"In that case, perhaps you should get ready."

"Ready for what?"

Gurleen sighed.

"Sahiba promised to take her mother to the sabzi mandi today.Apparently you can get an excellent bargain there."

Manveer promptly fainted.

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Posted: 4 months ago
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I simply love it.

Manveer in Sahiba's body πŸ˜…πŸ˜…

I want manveer to suffer πŸ₯ΉπŸ₯Ή

Only you can make it happen πŸ₯ΉπŸ₯Ή

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Posted: 4 months ago
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This is hilarious, but what will Manbeer do if Angad tried to come close to Saheba’s body??😜😜😜
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Posted: 4 months ago
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To be updated

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Posted: 4 months ago
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Originally posted by: Reader17

This is hilarious, but what will Manbeer do if Angad tried to come close to Saheba’s body??😜😜😜

They're thankfully not in that stage yet.πŸ˜…

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Posted: 4 months ago
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Manveer and sahiba switched places 😈

I hope sahiba makes manveer pay for all her wickedness.

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Posted: 4 months ago
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Chapter two-preview

The hall was silent as Manveer walked in ,her heart thumping,terrified of the look on Daarji's face.The rest of the Brars had gathered around,no doubt anticipating another round of Sahiba bashing. Manveer sighed and took her place next to Angad, only for him to move away,ensuring that she was right at the centre of the circle.This is bad,she thought to herself,gulping in panic and clinging to Gurleen's arm,who had a strained smile plastered on her face.

"Sahiba,I know that you love Gurleen a lot,but could you please ease your grip ?I think her arm's hurting."bebe called out.

Manveer felt terror creep up her spine ,as if the walls around her were closing in.She refused to let go of Gurleen.Suddenly she felt someone prise open her fingers.It was Jaspal who gently detached her from Gurleen and pulled Gurleen aside to stand next to him.He didn't let go of her hand she noted wryly,a spark of jealousy in her heart as she glanced at her own husband,watching everything detachedly.

"So Sahiba.I heard you're going to the market with your mother today."it was Jasleen,who had a smirk on her face.

"Sahiba puttar, I'm very disappointed in you."daarji said.

Manveer's eyes bulged in dismay.What had that girl done now?

"What has Sah....I mean what did I do daarji?"

"You still have ties with your mother.The same woman who trapped Angad in this sham of a marriage."sneered Jasleen.

"What she means to say is that Santosh Ji has not been exactly nice to you."interjected Ekam,trying to diffuse the tension.

"Jaspal, perhaps you should teach your wife and daughter to mind their own business.It's interesting how they have the time to interfere in our matters when their own lives are a part of a circus."Jasleen retorted.

Manveer noticed Jaspal clench his hands into fists, clearly gearing up for a fight when Gurleen simply placed a hand on his arm and gave an imperceptible shake of her head.To her surprise he calmed down and took her hand in his own.Deciding to interrogate her sister in law later,she turned to face the crowd who were looking at her with a mixture of apathy, revulsion and pity.

"Jasleen,since you're so worried about Sahiba consorting with the wrong people, perhaps I should accompany them to the market."

Manveer gasped at the figure,standing at the top of the stairs.The colour drained from her face as Sahiba glided downstairs,in her body,an condescending smirk on her face.

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Posted: 4 months ago
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Ohhhh god...smiley37

Keep writing....smiley37

I love it

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