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CHAPTER 5

In the bustling cafe, amidst the chatter and clinking of cups, they searched for each other with eager anticipation, their hearts racing with excitement. With a sudden turn, they collided, a gentle collision that sent a jolt of electricity through their bodies. As they stumbled back, their eyes met in a moment of mutual surprise and recognition.

In the chaos of the encounter, Sahiba's purse slipped from her grasp, scattering its contents across the floor like a burst of confetti. With a sheepish smile, Angad knelt down to help gather the spilled belongings, his fingers brushing against hers as they reached for the same item. Their eyes met once again, this time lingering a little longer, as if silently acknowledging the serendipity of their meeting.

Angad led her to their table and pulled out her chair for her.They settled down on their seats when a waiter came and too, their order.

Angad: "We really need to talk about our marriage I can't shake off the tension, can you?"

Sahiba: "No, it feels like a cloud hanging over us, doesn't it?"

Angad: "Yeah, I hate that our families can't see past our differences."

Sahiba: "It's frustrating, to say the least. Sometimes I wonder if they'll ever come around."

Angad : "I know what you mean. But no matter what, I want you to know that I'm committed to us, no matter what anyone says."

Sahiba: "That means everything to me. It's just hard sometimes, you know? Feeling like we're fighting an uphill battle."

Angad : "I understand. But I believe in us, and I believe that love can conquer even the toughest obstacles."

Sahiba: "I believe in us too. And I'm willing to do whatever it takes to make this work."

Angad : "That's all I needed to hear. Together, we'll find a way to make our love story a happy one, despite the challenges."

Sahiba: "I couldn't agree more. Now, let's focus on enjoying our time together, right here, right now."

Angad: "Absolutely. Let's cherish these moments, no matter what the future holds."

Angad and Sahiba parted ways and returned to their respective homes.

IN MONGA HOUSE

Ajeet: I'm telling you Santosh,she probably went to meet that Brar boy,Immediately Sahiba closes shop,she comes straight home but its been two hours since closing time and she's not back.

Santosh: Calm down Ajeet,she could be caught up with something

Just then Sahiba walks in

Santosh: "Sahiba, where have you been? It's late, and you know how worried we get."

Sahiba: "I'm sorry, Mama, I got caught up at work. I had a big order deadline."

Ajeet: "At this hour? Sahiba, this doesn't sound right. No matter what,you usually close up shop at the expected time "

Sahiba: "I know it's unusual, Baba, but it was an urgent matter. I promise."

Santosh: "But why didn't you call us? We were about to call the police!"

Sahiba: "I'm sorry, Mama, my phone battery died, and I couldn't find a charger."

Santosh: "This all seems very suspicious, Sahiba. Are you sure you're telling us the truth?"

Sahiba: hesitates, feeling the weight of her secret "Yes, mama, dont worry . It was just work."

Santosh: "Well, just be more careful next time. And remember, we expect honesty from you."

Sahiba: "I understand,Mama. I'll make sure to keep you updated if anything like this happens again."

Ajeet : "Alright, go get some rest now. But know that we'll be keeping an eye on you."

Sahiba: "Thank you, papa, mama. Goodnight." She leaves the room, feeling the burden of her secret weighing heavily on her heart as she went back to her room. She needed to convince her parents of her marriage or else her heart would never have piece.

Ajeet still felt as if his daughter was lying to him but decided to brush it off as his Sahiba can not lie.

IN BRAR MANSION

Angad came home to see a heartbroken Daarji with his posture slouched and his gaze fixed on a piece of paper and other family member's consoling each other

Angad rushed to his Daarji's side and held him by the shoulders

"kya baat ha Daarji"

Daarji did not utter a word and Handed him the paper in his hands.Angad's face turned pale with shock and his jaw dropped when he read the papers in his hands.

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Waiting for the next part.... a request please make it longer

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Posted: 6 months ago
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Waiting for the next update!

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Chapter 6

Daarji did not utter a word and handed him a piece of paper,............IT WAS A MEDICAL REPORT!!

Daarji was In need of a kidney or else he would had 2 weeks to live.

Angad: "We can find you a kidney right? We will all take a blood tests, one of us has to have the same blood group as you" he said while sobbing uncontrollably.

Inder: "I wish it were that simple, son. But none of us have the same blood group as his . The doctors say none of you can donate your kidneys."

Writers note: GUYS ITS IMPOSSIBLE FOR ALL OF THEM NOT TO HAVE THE SAME BLOOD GROUP AS HIM,BUT JUST GO WITH THE STORY.

Inder: I've already looked into it, son. The transplant registry, potential donors... Nothing has worked so far." He said trying to console his son .

"Then I'll explore every option,.I won't give up on you daarji."

Angad couldn't help but choke back his tears and rushed to his room.

He sat alone in the dimly lit room, his hands trembling as he clutched the piece of paper that held hisg Daarji's medical report. His heart felt heavy in his chest as he read the words again, as if hoping they would somehow change.

"Two weeks...," he whispered to himself, his voice barely audible in the silence of the room. Tears welled up in his eyes as the reality of the situation sank in. His beloved Daarji, the pillar of their family, had only two weeks left to live. A single tear traced a silent path down his cheek, reflecting the anguish that gripped his heart.

"Ring Ring" his phone rang, a small smile played on his lips,It was Sahiba,he desperately needed to talk to her and answered the phone almost immediately.

"Hello" he heard her sweet voice say.

He couldn't help it,he broke down into tears.

Sahiba: "Angad,what's wrong "

Angad narrated the story about how Daarji needed a kidney or he will be gone.

Sahiba: " Ok Angad come down,what blood group is he?"

Angad: He's an A negative

Sahiba: Perfect, I'm an A negative too, I can donate to him!!

Angad : (tears welling up in his eyes): "Are you serious? Sahiba , that's... that's incredible! I can't believe you'd do that."

Sahiba :Of course I'm serious. I love you, and although i havent met him,your daarji seems like. A a nice person . I want to do everything I can to help him."

Angad: Thank you. Thank you so much, Sahiba . You're amazing. You've just given us all hope."

Sahiba: We'll get through this together, okay? I'll do whatever it takes to help your Daarji

Angad: I'll tell my family the good news and you come meet us at Pancham hospital in an hour.

Sahiba:, Alright,And dont worry w e'll get through this together, okay? I'll do whatever it takes to help your Daarji."

Angad: " Thank you Meri Jaan "

As he hung up,his face lights up with a mix of relief and gratitude as he realizes just how lucky he is to have such an incredible girlfriend by his side.

Angad : "Hey everyone, I have some news..."

Hansraj : "What is it?"

Angad : "I've been doing some research, and... I found someone who's willing to donate a kidney to Grandpa."

Inder : "What? Are you serious?"

Angad : "Yeah, I'm serious. It's Sahiba . She's agreed to do it."

Manveer Gasps and tears well up in her eyes

Angad: "I know, I can't believe it either. But she's amazing, and she's doing this for Daarji ."

Manveer: "Oh my God, that's... that's incredible. We can't thank her enough." She says with tears of happiness

Inder :Tell her... you tell her she's our hero. She's saving my dad's life."

Angad: You can tell her yourself later,she's waiting at the for us to arrive so we can perform the surgery .

Manveer: You know,maybe I was wrong about her,she must really love you to do all of this , which is why ,I accept your marriage.

Tears welled up in the Angad's eyes as he rushed to embrace his mother, feeling a weight lift off his shoulders that he hadn't even realized was there. With tears of joy streaming down his face, he knew that his mother's acceptance meant everything. It was a moment he would never forget, a moment of pure happiness and love that he would carry with him always.

The family gathers around Angad and Manveer embracing them tightly and shedding tears of gratitude and relief. For the first time in days, there's a glimmer of hope in their eyes, thanks to the incredible generosity of one person.

IN MONGA HOUSE

The girl took a deep breath, steeling herself for the conversation she was about to have with her parents. She knew it wouldn't be easy, but she was determined to convince them that donating her kidney to her Angad's grandfather was the right thing to do.

Sahiba: "Mama, Papa, I need to talk to you about something important."

Santosh: "What is it, Puttar ? You look serious."

Sahiba: "You know how i wanted to marry Angad,well his daarji is sick and ... Well, the doctors say he needs a kidney transplant urgently. And none of his family members are a match."

Santosh: "That's terrible, dear. But what does that have to do with you?"

Sahiba: "I want to donate my kidney to him."

Ajeet: "What? Are you out of your mind? You can't just go around giving away your organs!"

Sahiba: "I know it's a big decision, but... I can't stand the thought of losing him. And if I can help save his life, then I have to try."

Santosh : "But honey, it's a major surgery. There are risks involved..."

Sahiba: "I know there are risks, but... I'm willing to take them. I love him, Mom. And I love his grandfather too. I can't just sit by and do nothing."

Ajeet: "But what if something goes wrong? What if you end up needing that kidney someday? And of all people to give a kidney to HIM?

Sahiba: Remember when you always tell me that "Anger begets more anger, and forgiveness and love lead to more forgiveness and love." "To forgive is to set a prisoner free and discover that the prisoner was you." "There is nobility in compassion, a beauty in empathy, a grace in forgiveness." "If we really want to love we must learn how to forgive."

Sahiba: What happened to that? Papa pls just forgive and let go.

Her parent's exchanged a worried glance, but they could see the determination in their daughter's eyes.

Santosh : "Well, I suppose... if you're absolutely sure about this..."

Sahiba: "I am, Mama . I know it's the right thing to do."

Ajeet: "Okay then. If you're sure... we'll support you, sweetheart,and we will accept your marriage, Just promise us you'll be careful"

Sahiba:"I promise, Papa. Thank you. Thank you both so much."

With tears of gratitude in her eyes, she hugged her parents tightly, knowing that she had their love and support as she embarked on this life-changing journey.

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Chapter 6

Daarji did not utter a word and handed him a piece of paper,............IT WAS A MEDICAL REPORT!!

Daarji was In need of a kidney or else he would had 2 weeks to live.

Angad: "We can find you a kidney right? We will all take a blood tests, one of us has to have the same blood group as you" he said while sobbing uncontrollably.

Inder: "I wish it were that simple, son. But none of us have the same blood group as his . The doctors say none of you can donate your kidneys."

Writers note: GUYS ITS IMPOSSIBLE FOR ALL OF THEM NOT TO HAVE THE SAME BLOOD GROUP AS HIM,BUT JUST GO WITH THE STORY.

Inder: I've already looked into it, son. The transplant registry, potential donors... Nothing has worked so far." He said trying to console his son .

"Then I'll explore every option,.I won't give up on you daarji."

Angad couldn't help but choke back his tears and rushed to his room.

He sat alone in the dimly lit room, his hands trembling as he clutched the piece of paper that held hisg Daarji's medical report. His heart felt heavy in his chest as he read the words again, as if hoping they would somehow change.

"Two weeks...," he whispered to himself, his voice barely audible in the silence of the room. Tears welled up in his eyes as the reality of the situation sank in. His beloved Daarji, the pillar of their family, had only two weeks left to live. A single tear traced a silent path down his cheek, reflecting the anguish that gripped his heart.

"Ring Ring" his phone rang, a small smile played on his lips,It was Sahiba,he desperately needed to talk to her and answered the phone almost immediately.

"Hello" he heard her sweet voice say.

He couldn't help it,he broke down into tears.

Sahiba: "Angad,what's wrong "

Angad narrated the story about how Daarji needed a kidney or he will be gone.

Sahiba: " Ok Angad come down,what blood group is he?"

Angad: He's an A negative

Sahiba: Perfect, I'm an A negative too, I can donate to him!!

Angad : (tears welling up in his eyes): "Are you serious? Sahiba , that's... that's incredible! I can't believe you'd do that."

Sahiba :Of course I'm serious. I love you, and although i havent met him,your daarji seems like. A a nice person . I want to do everything I can to help him."

Angad: Thank you. Thank you so much, Sahiba . You're amazing. You've just given us all hope."

Sahiba: We'll get through this together, okay? I'll do whatever it takes to help your Daarji

Angad: I'll tell my family the good news and you come meet us at Pancham hospital in an hour.

Sahiba:, Alright,And dont worry w e'll get through this together, okay? I'll do whatever it takes to help your Daarji."

Angad: " Thank you Meri Jaan "

As he hung up,his face lights up with a mix of relief and gratitude as he realizes just how lucky he is to have such an incredible girlfriend by his side.

Angad : "Hey everyone, I have some news..."

Hansraj : "What is it?"

Angad : "I've been doing some research, and... I found someone who's willing to donate a kidney to Grandpa."

Inder : "What? Are you serious?"

Angad : "Yeah, I'm serious. It's Sahiba . She's agreed to do it."

Manveer Gasps and tears well up in her eyes

Angad: "I know, I can't believe it either. But she's amazing, and she's doing this for Daarji ."

Manveer: "Oh my God, that's... that's incredible. We can't thank her enough." She says with tears of happiness

Inder :Tell her... you tell her she's our hero. She's saving my dad's life."

Angad: You can tell her yourself later,she's waiting at the for us to arrive so we can perform the surgery .

Manveer: You know,maybe I was wrong about her,she must really love you to do all of this , which is why ,I accept your marriage.

Tears welled up in the Angad's eyes as he rushed to embrace his mother, feeling a weight lift off his shoulders that he hadn't even realized was there. With tears of joy streaming down his face, he knew that his mother's acceptance meant everything. It was a moment he would never forget, a moment of pure happiness and love that he would carry with him always.

The family gathers around Angad and Manveer embracing them tightly and shedding tears of gratitude and relief. For the first time in days, there's a glimmer of hope in their eyes, thanks to the incredible generosity of one person.

IN MONGA HOUSE

The girl took a deep breath, steeling herself for the conversation she was about to have with her parents. She knew it wouldn't be easy, but she was determined to convince them that donating her kidney to her Angad's grandfather was the right thing to do.

Sahiba: "Mama, Papa, I need to talk to you about something important."

Santosh: "What is it, Puttar ? You look serious."

Sahiba: "You know how i wanted to marry Angad,well his daarji is sick and ... Well, the doctors say he needs a kidney transplant urgently. And none of his family members are a match."

Santosh: "That's terrible, dear. But what does that have to do with you?"

Sahiba: "I want to donate my kidney to him."

Ajeet: "What? Are you out of your mind? You can't just go around giving away your organs!"

Sahiba: "I know it's a big decision, but... I can't stand the thought of losing him. And if I can help save his life, then I have to try."

Santosh : "But honey, it's a major surgery. There are risks involved..."

Sahiba: "I know there are risks, but... I'm willing to take them. I love him, Mom. And I love his grandfather too. I can't just sit by and do nothing."

Ajeet: "But what if something goes wrong? What if you end up needing that kidney someday? And of all people to give a kidney to HIM?

Sahiba: Remember when you always tell me that "Anger begets more anger, and forgiveness and love lead to more forgiveness and love." "To forgive is to set a prisoner free and discover that the prisoner was you." "There is nobility in compassion, a beauty in empathy, a grace in forgiveness." "If we really want to love we must learn how to forgive."

Sahiba: What happened to that? Papa pls just forgive and let go.

Her parent's exchanged a worried glance, but they could see the determination in their daughter's eyes.

Santosh : "Well, I suppose... if you're absolutely sure about this..."

Sahiba: "I am, Mama . I know it's the right thing to do."

Ajeet: "Okay then. If you're sure... we'll support you, sweetheart,and we will accept your marriage, Just promise us you'll be careful"

Sahiba:"I promise, Papa. Thank you. Thank you both so much."

With tears of gratitude in her eyes, she hugged her parents tightly, knowing that she had their love and support as she embarked on this life-changing journey.

This is a really nice take on SahAn and glad to know that the families approve.

But still can't believe she has to donate a kidney to get accepted into the Brar family.😥

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This is a really nice take on SahAn and glad to know that the families approve.

But still can't believe she has to donate a kidney to get accepted into the Brar family.😥

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CHAPTER 2

IN BRAR MANSION

Angad:"I want to get married"

Bebe:"To who puttar?"

Angad: Her name is Sahiba

Daarji: The one who decorated the prayer room?

Angad: Yes Daarji

Manveer clenches her fists,trying to control her anger and stands up from her seat abruptly.

"Angad,you will not marry that middle class girl and that Is final"

His once bright eyes, filled with hope and longing, now glistened with unshed tears, reflecting the pain that weighed heavily on his soul. As he stood up to leave His movements were slow and deliberate, as if every step he took required a herculean effort of will. He walks back to his bedroom and thinks about how he will break the bad news to Sahiba.

"Manveer,you should let him marry who he wants ,so what if she is a middle class girl" Inder said trying to convince her.

"Angad will not marry some middle class gold digger who will break his heart" With that,she walked away.

IN MONGA HOUSE

Sahiba: I want to get married

Keerat:Anyone we know Sahiba di she said with a mischievous grin

Sahiba:Yes,Actually I was hired to decorate their prayer room a while ago,thats where we met .

Santosh: What is his name puttar

Sahiba: Angad Singh Brar

Santosh: "Brar?!" Her eyes widened in disbelief, pupils dilating as if trying to take in the enormity of what she had just heard.

Ajeet: Absolutely not! He said,rage evident on his face , veins bulging at his temples . His voice, usually calm and measured, was now a booming roar that reverberated through the air like thunder, sending shivers down the spines of all who heard it. With that,he walked away fuming.

Sahiba sat there with shock and confusion as to why her father reacted like that.

Santosh: Sahiba puttar,there's something i need to tell you,you see, when you were 10,your father used to design jewlerry for the Brar's then on one fateful day,Brar Sahab accused your father of stealing and got him arrested.

Sahiba's shoulders slumped forward, the weight of realization pressing down upon her like a heavy burden that she could no longer bear. Her eyes, once bright with hope, now glistened with unshed tears, reflecting the raw pain of a truth that had shattered her dreams.

She went back to her room wondering how she would break the news to Angad.


Manveer SUDHARJAA

You called Sahiba Middle class girl.

And what's wrong being a middle class??

Seriously manveer ??

Manveer being Manveer.

Angad is soo different in fanfiction 🥹❤️

I m loving it 🥹🥹

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CHAPTER 3

IN BRAR MANSION

With a heavy sigh, he plopped on his bed, determination flickering like a dying ember amidst the darkness of his despair. He knew that he must find the strength to be honest with her, to share the burden of their unaccepted love and face whatever consequences may come. He took out his phone and was about to call her when He heard a knock on the door.

Inder:"Puttar,can I come in"

Angad: "Sure" he said and hurriedly wipes his tears

Inder: Look,I know you're upset about your mother's decision ut she's just looking out for you.

You see,when your mother and I got married,her brother fell in love with a middle class girl and they got married.A few months after their marriage,she cheated on him and they got divorced and she took everything from him and left him penniless.He fell into depression and later ended his life.

Angad's mouth opens in shock the weight of the realization.

IN MONGA HOUSE

Sahiba brought out her phone contemplating whether she should call him now or wait till tomorrow when she heard a knock on the door. It was Seerat and Keerat

Seerat: (placing a hand on their sahiba's shoulder) "Hey, sis, we're here for you. We know how much this meant to you, but please don't lose hope."

Keerat:"Yeah, we've got your back. No matter what happens, we're in this together."

Sahiba : (sniffling) "Thank you, guys. I don't know what I'd do without you."

Keerat: "That's what sisters are for, right? Now come here, let's hug it out."

(They gather in a tight embrace, offering comfort and support to their sister in her time of need.)

Seerat: (looking at the phone in Sahiba's hand) are you gonna call him?

Sahiba: "ya"

Keerat:"Alright,we'll leave you to it"

With a shaky breath, she dialed his number, the sound of each ring echoing in the silence of her room like a tolling bell. Each second felt like an eternity as she waited for him to pick up, her stomach twisting with anticipation and dread.

"Hello," he said, his voice barely above a whisper, tinged with a hint of sadness that he couldn't quite hide.

"Sahiba, I need you to come to our favourite park.i want to tell you something Important.

Sahiba: "I'll be there in 10


Inder is one sensible man 😁

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CHAPTER 4

SAHIBA REACHES THE PARK ANGAD SAID THEY SOULD MEET IN Angad:"Hi" he said,sadness evident in his voice

Angad:"I need to tell you something Important

Sahiba:"What's wrong"

He gestures her to sit on a bench nearby and and takes her hand in his.

Angad: "It's about our marriage,. I... I spoke to my parents, and... they're not okay with it."They want me to marry someone of the same social status as us , someone they approve of."

Sahiba:" Actually I wanted to tell you the something.Something happened between our families years ago and my dad's still holding a grudge and won't approve of our marriage."

Angad:"What are we gonna do now"

Sahiba: "I don't know. I wish I had all the answers, but right now, I'm just... lost. All I know is that I love you, and I'll do whatever it takes to fight for us."

Angad: "I love you too. But this... it's not going to be easy, is it?"

Sahiba "No, it won't be. But we'll figure it out, together. I promise."

As they stood beneath the soft glow of the streetlamp, the air around them crackled with anticipation, a palpable tension hanging between them like a veil of electricity. Their eyes met, locking in a shared moment of silent understanding, as if the world had faded away, leaving only the two of them in its wake.

Slowly, almost hesitantly, he reached out a hand to cup her cheek, his touch gentle yet filled with an intensity that sent shivers down her spine.

And then, in a heartbeat that seemed to stretch on for eternity, their lips met in a tender kiss, a gentle collision of longing and desire that set their hearts ablaze. It was a moment frozen in time, a symphony of sensations that swept them away on a tide of emotion.

THE NEXT DAY IN BRAR MANSION

At the breakfast table, tension hung thick in the air, palpable and suffocating, as the family sat in strained silence. The clinking of utensils against plates echoed loudly in the quiet dining room, each sound magnified by the absence of conversation.

His family members exchanged nervous glances, sensing the storm brewing beneath the surface of his Anger. They dared not speak, lest they incur his wrath, instead focusing on their own plates with concentration, trying to ignore the elephant in the room.

Angad left for work fuming without uttering a word to anyone.

When he got to work,As he settled into his desk, the familiar routine of work stretched out before him like an endless expanse of monotony. But today, even the mundane tasks that once brought him solace felt like a burden, a reminder of the emptiness that gnawed at his soul.

Then his phone rang,it was Sahiba,a smile played on his lops and he thought only sahiba could make him smile.

Angad: "Hello meri jaan" He said playfully

Sahiba : Hi Angad

Sahiba: Do you want to meet later

Angad: Sure,when and where

Sahiba: "Our favourite cafe by 2 pm"

Angad: "Sure meri jaan"


Angad saying meri jaan smiley39

And the kiss .

Sahan ❤️

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