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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
aree waah!!!!!!!!!!! fabulous diduπŸ‘ full on rocking!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
aawww. lubzie πŸ€— another cute one... I liked taani's attitude here.. 😳 Waiting for next part..😍 Don't be too lazy 😑πŸ₯±πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
Aww!😳
So sweet.πŸ˜ƒ
Both the OSes were fabπŸ‘.
I can really see Taani-Anurag in it.😍😍
Just loved what Taani did. Her attitude.❀️
The kulfi OS was😍
Loving your OS a lot.😳
Waiting for the next part😊
Update asap.πŸ€—

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Posted: 12 years ago
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πŸ€—πŸ€—Di!!!!πŸ€—πŸ€—LOVE them!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ It's so cute seeing how Taani can make Onu's problems go away☺️She just knows how to push his buttons, I think that's great between two partners, both know how to handle each other😳Please update ASAP di😳 and thanks for the PM😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aaaw. Thanks for all the feedback girls, it means alot. <3 <3

Ridz, Pinky, Siddhi, Fnatic, Hano, Silkyyy, Mars, Vartika and Sharmeeli. Mwaaah! Love you all. πŸ€— πŸ€—

Haan Mars, I won't be lazy. 🀣 I'll update soon, promise! <3 <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
Just read both the OS's and loved them!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
loved it dii.. the kulfi wala part..my fav always...my jaanus ❀️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
I promise I haven't been lazy! πŸ˜† just had a few things to sort out...

Anyway, I have an OS written, will update later on today.

Love You All! <3 <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
I swear I feel like I'm losing my ability to write! πŸ€” πŸ˜†

Anyway, hope you somehow enjoy this next OS! <3 <3

O.S 4 ~ Jaan Meri Jaarahi Sanam

After 10 minutes of walking Onu stopped in his tracks. They were passing a 24 hour car garage. He pulled Taani underneath a form of shelter. "Taani, tu do minute ruk. Main mechanic ko bolke aata hoon. Voh gaadi theek kardega"
"Lekin Onu..."
"Tu tension mat le. Main isse jaanta hoon. Baba ka dost ka beta hai"
"Theek hai" she nodded
"Bas do minute main aata hoon. Phir hum ghar chalte hai"
"Acha" she replied and he jogged into the garage.

Taani wrapped her arms around herself. It was starting to get chilly. She scanned her surroundings. She saw a man stood on the opposite side of the busy road, watching her with a bottle in his hand.

Taani watched as he made his way across the busy road. He was heading towards her. Before she could walk off in search of Onu, the man was in front of her.

"Hi" he began. Taani ignored him. He'd go away if she did. "Hellooo?" he stepped closer and Taani could smell the strong stench of alcohol on his breath. She turned her face away. "I'm Karan. And you are...?"

Taani turned to him "dekhiye, aap jaaye yahaan se. Mera pati.."
"Ohhh" he interrupted her "tum apne pati ka intezaar karrahe ho?" he tutted "so sad. Tumhaara pati ne tumhe yahaan, akele chordiya hai"
"Voh abhi aata hi hoga"
"Mujhe nahin lagta ke voh vaapas aayega" he said and she turned to him. He shook his head "Really. I think he's gone"
"Dekhiye"
"Oh nooo" he slurred "dekho, tum kitna bheeg gaye ho" he took her arm "chalo, hum kahin chalte hai"
"Choriya mera haath"
"Arre, yeh kya karrahe ho" he slurred "chalte hai na?"

"Taani?" Onu jogged over
"Onu!" she sighed in relief as he released her from the drunkard's grip.
"Taani" the drunkard smiled "yeh kaun hai Taani?"
"Main pati hoon iska" he told him
"tu kaun hai?"
"Taani, hum chalte hai yahan se" he took her arm again
"Teri himmat..." he grabbed the guy by his collar
"Onu!" Taani tried to stop him before he did any damage "Chor" she told him "Tu mere saath chal yahaan se" she told him
"Taani!"
"Onu, ghar chal" she told him and he gave the guy a look before walking off with Taani.

Out of nowhere, they both heard someone yell from behind them and saw Karan coming at Onu with an empty glass bottle in his hand.
"Onu!" Taani warned and Onu pinned Karan up against a wall and reached for the bottle and broke it off on the wall and sent a punch flying his way.
"Onu!! Bas kar!" Taani yelled and Onu let go of the drunkard, pushing him away and he tripped and landed on the floor before getting on his feet and stumbling away, wiping his bloody mouth.

"Chal yahaan se" Taani pulled his arm and dragged him off towards home.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey nice one di...onu fighting wid a drunkard...wow...now i m thinking what will happen once they reach home...update asap plzzz...its awsome. Superb...
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