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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Sorry for the long delay people! Will PM people soon. <3

Will add people to the PM List when I get a chance. πŸ˜‰

Riyaaa Meriii πŸ€—

Silky meriii. Mwah! Ghussa mat ho! πŸ€—

OS 2 ~ Aaj Rapat Jaaye Toh Humme Na Utaayo...

Taani watched her husband sit back as silnce filled their car.

"Onu?" he stopped to look up at her before he

"Sab kuch theek hai na?"
"Haan" he replied shortly, as he started the car. Now Taani was sure that something was bothering him.
"Par Onu..." she began and he turned to her
"Maine kaha na Taani?" he insisted "sab kuch theek hai" signalling the end of that conversation.

Taani had no choice but to remain silent. If he wasn't willing to talk, what could she do?

Onu drove 10 minutes down the road before the engine spluttered and the car came to a halt.

"Yeh kya..." he tried to restart it. But no luck.
"Taani, chalo ghar chale" Taani imitated him, trying to lighten the mood. "Ab kya karenge?" she teased as Onuturned to get out of the car.
"Main abhi aaya" he replied before getting out of the car. Taani sighed before spotting something on the other side of the road then a smile appeared on her lips as she saw it began to rain. Perfect. She got out of the car and joined Onu as he was having a look under the bonnet.

"Tu yahaan kya karrahi hai?" he asked "ghaadi main bayt, baarish horahi hai"
"Toh" she shrugged "kuch hua?" she pointed to the car and he shook his head.
"Kal garage leke jaana parega" he closed the bonnet then Taani took his arm
"Acha. Theek hai" she said "ab chal" she said, practically dragging him across the not-so-busy road.
"Kahaan?... Taani?" he said locking the car from a distance.

"Kya hai Taani?" he asked then turned to her as they both stood by the Kulfi vendor.
"Dada, do kulfi dehna" she asked
"Taani. Please, mujhe nahin khaana" Onu wasn't in the mood.
"Nahin khaana?" she asked and he shook his head
"Theek hai" she shrugged for the second time that night. "Dada, inka hissa bhi mujhe dena" Onu watched her in awe. She didn't try to convince him, nor tease him like she usually did. What was going on?
"Taani?" he tried to get her attention
"Mm?" she replied half heartedly.

Onu watched Taani go through the four kulfis in her hands, just like old times. A smile appeared on Onu's lips as he replay flashbacks of their childhood in the back of his mind.

He casually leaned forward to snatch the two kulfis from her but instead, she pushed his hand away and him! She turned around and saw him lay flat on his backside, causing her to burst into a fit of giggles.

"Tu hasrahi hai?!" his eyes widened, giving her a look.
"Haan" she smiled
"Tehr! Abhi dikhaata hoon tujhe!" he said, trying his best to get up but slipping and failing miserably, causing Taani to look away and laugh.

"Ab maddat karegi kya?!"
"Haan haan. Chilata kyun hai?" she reached out for him to grab her hand and help him up. She found him inches away from her and smiled as their eyes met.

"Ab chale?" she asked him
"Haan" he smiled back "chal" he told her grabbing the half eaten kulfi from her hand and walking off ahead of her. Taani shook her head and smiled to herself before catching up to him.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
*still not talking to topic maker*
OSes r fantastic πŸ‘πŸΌ why my onu is so khafa khafa πŸ˜‰bechari tani, gussa onu ko kaise manati 😊
thankfully kulfi wala was there for her (as usual) 🀣 🀣 btw i was expecting sumthing uncensored but...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
want ur pm.and its gr8 to see that u gus are realy active..this is call real lover of taanu..luv
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Lubzie Meriii... First take care of ur health... πŸ€—

and the 2nd part was aawww... I can just imagine Onu and Taani do that.. Y is onu angry for πŸ€” kab reveal karegi?? πŸ˜•
and the kulfi scene was tooo cute..😍 and Onu slipping down and taani smiling and still eating the kulfis without sharing and finally Onu snatching the half eaten kulfis and eating it. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†. hai hai... πŸ˜‰
Continue the next part soon if ur health is alright... Take care bubbu.. πŸ€£πŸ€—
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Sorrry. I'm here! Sorry for my laziness! πŸ˜†

Sending you all the PM now. πŸ˜‰ <3 <3

OS 3.

"Onu..." Taani finished off her kulfi.
"Haan?" he asked looking up at her as they continued walking.
"Ab tu bolega ke kya baat hai?" she asked and he sighed. Taani stopped and turned to face him "Onu, main shaam se dekrahi hoon ke tu kisi baat ko lekar pareshan hai. Kya baat hai?" she asked
"Kuch nahin" he looked away
"Onu" Taani said softly and turned his face so that he would look at her. "Bol"
"Aaj maine baba aur manager ko baat karte huwe suna"
"Kya?"
"Ke mujhse project nahin sambhalga" he told her. Taani knew he wasn't finished so she kept quiet. But a little smile crept on her face. Onu was more sensitive than he looked. He continued: "Taani, main itna mehnat karraha hoon: din raat kaam karraha hoon. Par baba..." he sighed. Taani knew the best way to handle it.

"Bas? Itni si baat?" Taani asked and Onu looked up at her, baffled. "Onu, tu bhi na" she shook her head and began to walk off
"Matlab" he took her arm to stop her
"Matlab ke agar tujhse nahin horaha toh chor de na? Baba shaayad sahi kehrahe honge"
"Kya?!" He exclaimed. Yup. It was working.
"Haan, aur nahin toh kya?" she shrugged
"Taani?"
"Haan"
"Mujhe himmat dene ke bajaaye, tu mujhe chorne ke liye kehrahi hai??"
"Haan! Dekh Onu, main yeh nahin chaahti ke business main kohi problem hojaye" she told him "aur tune khud kaha ke tujhse nahin horaha"
"Maine yeh nahin kaha!"
"Toh...?"
"Maine kaha ke baba ko lagta hai ke mujhse nahin hoga! Maine yeh toh nahin kaha ke main nahin karsakta"
"Toh kya karega?"
"Jo mujhe karna parega" he told her "tujhe aur baba ko saabit karke rahoongake main is project ko handle karsakta hoon"
Taani shrugged: "Theek hai"
"Tu bhi na Taani" he walked off, shaking his head. "chal!" he told her and she walked behind him, smiling to herself. "Taani?"
"Haan?"
"Chal na" he called
"Aayi" she replied and caught up with him. Onu turned to see Taani walking beside him, a smile on her face.

"Kya hua?"

"Kuch nahin" she shook her head and linked her arms with his as they continued their journey home.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
The 2nd OS.. is just superb.. Ye Onu bhi na.. Donno what he is thinking why is he angry.. 🀣 Chalo.. I Loved the Kulfi scene.. 😍 ☺️ and regarding the 3rd OS.. Pehele 2nd wala mein digest karti hoon and then Will read and comment on the 3rd OS. 🀣 πŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
U r superb lubz di. The O.S.s r just awsome...can't wait for next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

So Taani is making him strong and making him believe in himself...😳

Nice one.. Loved it..
Edited by mishti_17 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Nice update but a short one...
Post some more soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60

How r u lubz di ❀️ ?
vll as usual all da 3 OSs r


all TaAnu Scene ver rlly
& 😳
plz do Update SoooN
nd 4 da PM

v8ing 4 more 😍


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