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Posted: 13 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: zohakhan59

OMG its such a beautiful story shobi and u r saying its not nyc,i just luved the concept,do update soon and add me in ur pm list.👏

Thanx Zohi madam...
And im in noo mood to update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏WAUW dear!!! Interesting concept, you made me curious👏Plzzz add me to the PM list😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharmeeli

👏WAUW dear!!! Interesting concept, you made me curious👏 Plzzz add me to the PM list😳

Awww Thanx a loadss Sharmeeli...tat means a lot
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Omg Omg Omg Omg Omg Omg!!!

I think I'm dreaming! Finally u've started to write FF's! Party to banta hai! 🥳I'm, so glad!

Here is a little dance 4 u on my bhalf!

The 1st chap was amazing. Awww. Anu...Is Taani his wife or something? Or is it someone else?

Jaldi update karna...Warna 😡

Loool. Just joking bt u have 2 update quickly!

Love ya loads. PM me!

Nahi

xxx 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
hey shbz
wow wat a upd
lovellly
wheres tani????
n my onu
huh
update soon haN
awsum
thnxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: -Nahi-

Omg Omg Omg Omg Omg Omg!!!


I think I'm dreaming! Finally u've started to write FF's! Party to banta hai! 🥳I'm, so glad!

Here is a little dance 4 u on my bhalf!

The 1st chap was amazing. Awww. Anu...Is Taani his wife or something? Or is it someone else?

Jaldi update karna...Warna 😡

Loool. Just joking bt u have 2 update quickly!

Love ya loads. PM me!

Nahi

xxx 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Awww...
Chalo thanx for the party and the ur dance was just amazing...muahhh
Yaa Ill think abt updating...Im thinking of foll a schedule...especially with school and things...Ill try to be as regular as possi...
Sure will PM u...Love u loadsss tooo🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: -Mahi148-

hey shbz

wow wat a upd
lovellly
wheres tani????
n my onu
huh
update soon haN
awsum
thnxx

Thanx kisliye ??? FF likha isliye to u better take it back...Coz i shud be thanking u for reading and commenting...
Taani...will come soon...After all when has Onu been complete without her...Thanx for liking it Mahi 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
Im tooo late.bt sorry ppl was busy with school and stuff... So hope your not dsiappointed by the update.And thanks for all those ownderful comments for chap1 , Means a lot. So here you go,
CHAPTER 2
The next morning was like every normal one'The sun was up and Onu was now waking up Joy'..

Onu :Joy'My princess'Get up ur Johny ted is calling u.

Joy : Papa I cant go to school today'My stomach is paining

Onu : Acha ,pet me dard haan''.(And he starts tickling her)

Joy: Hahahah,'Papa plll acha baba sry''.Ok ur princess is up''

Onu : Now that's like my princess''Now go have bath and Ill be ready for you at the table with ur yummy breakfast''..

Joy : Papa '.Can I get magi today ??? Plll plll

Onu : Sure mera bacha''.Bt just don't enbd up telling ur dadi varna im gonna get beaten by her badly

Joy : Papa ur sooo big and ur scared of dadi bt look at me im young and im not scared of dadi''.heheheh

Onu : Acha '''Joy just look wat Im gonna do now'.

He runs behind her .And seeing her dad pace after her after all Onu's daughter she turns out to be trickier and starts running before he tries to catch her. Bt Anurag is after all Anurag naa''.And catches her and pulls her to the bed and tickled her soo much that she nearly has tears because all the laughter session.

Joy: Ok Papa'papa.plll acha baba''Ill go have a bath varna Ill miss my bus and I sachi me wont be able to go to school.

Onu : (Finally letting go of her) Ok chalo fine jao

Jo starts moving toward the washroom when she takes a turn comes running back to Onu and kisses himon his cheeks and says " Youre the best Dad of the world"

"And you the best bacha"says Onu. Dad Im not bacha im bachi.Aapko ye bhi nahi pata''

Onu : Ab jaati hai ya nahi ??? Jao'And acts has though he 's gonna chase her again'And Joy finally manages to run

Just when he was about to leave the room ,did Onu notice all the books were lying outside Joy's bag'.

"Ye Joy bhi na" says Onu and shakes his head.😎 Trying to pack up Joy's back and suddenly remembered OMG'She's just like me. My bag was also clustered with pieces of paper here and there.. And hers is the same .Ruffling through the sheets Onu was shocked at what he saw😲😲😲. There she had got really bad marks in her exams, few notes from teachers which she'd crumpled and another one which said that the teacher wanted to meet him if possible on the 21st of this month .With a pang Onu managed to realize that today was the 21st and she had called to meet him today noon at 2.He made a mental note to confront Joy today before she left for school and with that done he packed her bag set it and put it back in place where it had been. After going back to the lobby his mind started hammering him with thoughts which he wished he could just push away. Had his "jaan" been there she would have taken better care, handled Joy more happily and most importantly this situation I a much better way then he's gonna do.

Joy came down dressed smartly in the frock of hers with her wonderful smile .Today they were going out for picnic to the Lodhi gardens (Delhi) and he had said yes. He looked at her and was lost in how well she'd managed her after the accident. Or rather to put it better she was the one who had composed him. Though his friend Robindo(Robi) had tried a hell lot to get him move out of his routine of crying it had been Joy who'd put an end to his tears and he was proud to have her. Proud of her, but he felt bad for what Joy had done. Was it his fault that Joy didn't share her marks with her Dad? Would she have told her mom had she been here ? She definitely would have. Did he love Joy less than her mom?? "What are you thinking Anurag ??" a silent voice spoke inside him and he hushed away all these thoughts.

As joy sat down for her breakfast Onu pushed the slip he had found in her bag to her breakfast bowl. Curious about what that slip held she opened it and was shocked that her father had found it. Her eyes went wet with tears😭😭😭😭 .She wasn't scared that her father had found him,but because she would get scolded and she didn't won't to cheat him.It just slipped out her mind and she now was gonna get a very bad blasting from her father. Seeing Joy's reactions Onu was scared too.He wondered why was she crying now ? He couldn't bare to see her cry. Pulling her close and making her sit on his lap he wiped he tears.

" So now Joy will tell papa why she got this note won't she ?" He said with a smile on his face. "Papa Im sorry I just forgot it ,especially with the picnic. I don't know why she sent that message papa. I didn't do anything wrong I promise."" If that's so Im sure she would have called to tell me something good about you" Onu said making Joy stop crying and lookat him with surprise in her eyes. "sachi papa?? "" saci muchi". And he started to tickle her till she laughed loud enough to make his heart contempt." So I'll come to your school at 2 today and I think you'll be back from your picnic by then. So Id pick you up and we'll go to eat ice creams for sure."With that Onu fed Joy and they left school.

The rest of the afternoon passed with his usual rounds of the office. Checking around the place for new cases .And then he left for the school.He didn't know what was awaiting him there.. As soon as he reached the school, he went in and was glad that he was there on time. After entering the school he left to his daughter's class where the teacher said she would meet him. He reached there and was looking keenly at the drawings by Joy when he heard the knock, and there he saw the teacher. But he couldn't make out her face as she was facing the door and talking to some other teacher.

She had long beautiful black hair he noticed as she was talking. As she turned around her hair started flying because of the wind blowing through the winds and he noticed that she looked even more beautiful. Not only the wind blow away the papers she was holding but it was a wind that would change course of their lived forever. Shirking himself out of his thoughts he went and shut the window and came to help her with collecting her papers. When done with handing her papers he saw her face., he was sure that he was in his day dreaming world again. Cause what he saw was not possible.It was just impossible to see Taani right now in front of him in the same place as he was. And then he heard the voice come out on its from which said "Taani"

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Edited by -Shobz.TaAnu- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
first 2 comment!
shobii at last u updated han!
the love and bond anu and joy share was soo sweet the tickling, everything.
i wonder if its taani, joy's mom!
is she still alive?
i don't noe why but i get a feeling this is sumhow like "a bend in the road" by nicholas sparks!
i hope anu gets happy soon!
and whooever his "jaan" is.. we get 2 noe her soon!
upd sooner now!
thnx for the PM!
the upd was beauitful
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
wooow wat an update...
Anu and Joy scene was very nyc...
lovely dad and cute lil princess...
JAAN😕
jus loved it...so Onu knws Taani...
getting more excited to knw more...
Update sooonnn
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