Remembering those days...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is a poem which I wrote on how much I cherished those times when Tere liye was there. (I don't think there's any probz for posting poems, ryt?) Wrote it in a hurry...so don't expect much! 😆


Remembering those days

When remembering those days

My mind sways

Back to the time long gone

Never to be back once gone

How I cherished those moments

Waiting for the clock to strike ten

Smiling when they smile

Crying when they cry

Happy at times,

Angry sometimes

For they set my emotion in motion

And one day it all got over

Leaving us, but not forever

One day I know

They will come back, and so

Once again waiting for the sun to set

To be before the TV, you bet!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!so brilliant!so touchy!aww we too miss them.awesum.amazing.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Simran42

This is a poem which I wrote on how much I cherished those times when Tere liye was there. (I don't think there's any probz for posting poems, ryt?) Wrote it in a hurry...so don't expect much! 😆


Remembering those days

When remembering those days

My mind sways

Back to the time long gone

Never to be back once gone

How I cherished those moments

Waiting for the clock to strike ten

Smiling when they smile

Crying when they cry

Happy at times,

Angry sometimes

For they set my emotion in motion

And one day it all got over

Leaving us, but not forever

One day I know

They will come back, and so

Once again waiting for the sun to set

To be before the TV, you bet!

Yea yea they do 😍 😍😍 Even now when clock strikes ten at times i feel i am missing out on something so important and get all excited 😆 but then the next moment all tht excitement gets crashed down Anyways as you said some day waiting for the sun to set ...

Nice poem ... do write more :D

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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was really awsum.. murderer.. u wrote it really nycely.. luved every bit of it.. keep posting more!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Mahi148-

wow!so brilliant!so touchy!aww we too miss them.awesum.amazing.


thnx mahi...missing them so much!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: manasi_31

Yea yea they do 😍 😍😍 Even now when clock strikes ten at times i feel i am missing out on something so important and get all excited 😆 but then the next moment all tht excitement gets crashed down Anyways as you said some day waiting for the sun to set ...

Nice poem ... do write more :D



thnx manasi...I kno hw it feels...well, every TLian knows...😭
will write more...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: anahita.taanu

it was really awsum.. murderer.. u wrote it really nycely.. luved every bit of it.. keep posting more!


thnx bubbles!!!!!!!!!
It really feels good!!!!!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I can tell you how much I liked the poem.
It the awesome poem or I should say the best poem I have ever read on tere liye and taanu.
Each and every word very true. It literally brought tears in my eyes.
Its the best poem.
Wright more..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yup, still miss those days when all I knew was when the clock will show 10pm.. TL had become an irreplaceable part.. We all miss it and always will.. Nice poem😃
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