Poem on/for TaAnu...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well I just realised that we have a great deal of writers and poets amongst ourselves... And thanx to Anny.. her poem made me open this thread ... This thread is dedicated to all the talented ppl of TL forum... Especiall to Anny, n all the poems a dedication to TaAnu and their selfless love...
So here goes the 1st one from Any...
i want 2 sleep in ur arms
but i cnt becauze i luv u
i want 2 have ur luving embrace
but i cnt bcauze i luv u
my lyfe is meant fr u
and i want 2 save u frm it all
but i cn see how much it hurts u
de way u try 2 make me fyne
but u cnt bcauze i wont let u
i noe if i return 2day
u ll be de happiest person
but i cant bcauze i luv u
2day i sit here
2 save u frm me!
i feel lyke killing myself
but i noe tht will kill u
but i promise u will have..
a secure lyfe forever
secure frm me i promise
ur voice is still present in my ears
ur memories havent faded
and i wanna return
but now itzz 2 late
so u cn have a happy lyfe
but i will alwayzz luv u 4ever!
I think this poem befits the Ritesh-Taani track... a poem from Taani's POV... Thanx for this one

PS : Im really sry Anz if this wasnt to be published... But I loved it and it seriously suits so many situation of TL



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Fangirl_Annie thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww... i luv u shobzzz! fr de thread!
now i will rite loads!
nd thnxx a ton fr whtever u did!
i luv u! hugss nd kisses!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aw anhiee...i luv it
fab poem...cute
yaa rite taani's pov
amazing <3<3
keep writng such peoms <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ripal_taanu

aw anhiee...i luv it

fab poem...cute
yaa rite taani's pov
amazing <3<3
keep writng such peoms <3

will <3
thnxx a ton ripzz! luv u!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice poem annie! write loads more!!!:)🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it's damn good!!!!!!!!!!
Yo bubbles!!!!!
It rocks!!!!!!
Do write more...
*winks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@madziee thnxx a lot! <3
@fairfantasy thnq!
@murderer oh thnk god u lyked it..luv u! <3
nd yes guyzz i ll try nd rite more!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i cant beleive u told me de words
of which i desired but never hoped
becauze i never let myself
fr wht u said tht day
de way u chose her..
but wht u said 2day changed it all
ur eyes said de words but..
did u say de truth i wonder
bcauze it never made sence fr u 2 luv me!
but i noe u said de truth
bcauze it was riten on ur face..ur expression
i could tell u selflessly luved me
though it tuk u 8 years
it was de truthest truth eva!!
"I LUV U" were de words u told me
which made my heart pound
and "I LUV U 2" is wht i want 2 reply
cauze i luv u with de most passion nd intensity!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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this is a taani POV when anu told him "I LUV U"
howzz it??
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Posted: 13 years ago
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U WILL



u r a part of me
which will never die
u r de readon i m still alive
ur memories r all i need
u killed me when u went away
everyday i see my reflection
i see u in me..

u will hve 2 return
2 love me once more
i want 2 feel u once more
i miss ur electrifying touch
ur dazzling nd killing eyes
i noe u miss me when i do

my hopes will never die
i noe u will return
fr every moment we spent 2gether
fr everytyme we fought
fr everytyme we luved
fr everytyme we ate kulfi's
fr evrytyme we romanced
fr me.. i noe u will..!
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