I am on Aunt letty one liz, its fabulous, like actually the emotions you have portrayed here through your words is something very difficult for any writer to do with such fiance, you know I am little out of practice atm in commenting on Fics, don't really recall when it was last I made comment anywhere, so spare me for inconsistency or any stupidity 🤣. Ab main kya likhun😕 I am not getting anything to right, but obvious OS is wonderful and I loved reading it but I am really not getting what to add😳ðŸ˜.
Will try anyways coz anyhow I cannot leave the chance to comment on such masterpiece 😛.
And smell of food, the only thing he remember is Laboni ma in kitchen cooking for him and calling him to have a bite or two
The thing you showed between Aunt letty and Onu was so very cute, both were lonely in world of unknown peoples though Aunt Letty had been there from past 30 years but still so lonely with having lost his one son, and this common loneliness brought them bit close, I mean to such an extent that they can offer their company to each other though barely conversing but still knowing that someone is there with them atleast for that particular moment.
And then Aunt Letty being a dream, so very convincing, in the world where he was from past 3 months yet looks as if just came yesterday, with nobody whom he can call as his own, nobody to care about him and one night suddenly, in midst of dark he found someone who not only shielded him from that killing snow but also offered him some cookies to bite.
And towards last part it was so touching, Onu understanding Bimal kaka died coz he was supposed to and Subodh coz it was an accident a unfortunate but an incident which was out of his own actions but Death of Aunt Letty's son was coz for others, neither he was supposed to and nor it was out of his actions, he died to save many other peoples from dying.
And smell of food means Laboni ma in kitchen making something for him and calling him to have a bite or two, it was not that he was missing her cooked food buts he was missing her small fluffy hands who would feed him affectionately and tenderly wiping off his face with her saree pallu, same love and care had been missing from his life from past many months.
He miss her so much that all he want to run away from here and go there. He has spent many sleepless nights without she being around him or excitement to meet and eat yummy food from her hands on the next day. But he doesn't wanted to show that to anyone that how weak he has become and how he could not identify himself with anything around coz anyways no one would care.
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Seriously liz the way you have highlighted Aunt letty's pain and loneliness through Onu is like focal point for me in the OS, not really knowing her much still he could relate himself to her out of all the people and through what she would have gone through or goes through daily, Onu's pain was nothing in front of her coz he knows that back in India he has his best friend, a loving mom, a cute bro and another mom who loves him alot just bit less from Taani.
And Onu fiddled with his words what I feel, it was not that he did not knew he was Jewish or not but he never paid attention being around Taani coz nothing else existed for him back then and even now but just the relishing the taste of those snacks at Christmas time with Taani, Hope am right ? and made sense😛🤣.
And nupur really surprised me coz she never appeared to me someone who would bother herself for other person, never in show and not in what tit bits you added here and here she is doing what little thing she could do to cheer her up atleast for the while when they were there.
And letter awww my poor Onu, he want to write but he cannot, he know it would break him completely and he would never be able to collect bits of himself and for staying here he need to be strong, he need to kill everyday so that that one day would come soon when he would go back to India where he would be in world of his own people.
I am done😎, felt nice in commenting after so long, will get into practice soon😛🤣.
It was truly gorgeous liz and certainly a treat to read.
Keep them coming no matter when I read them 😛🤣
Lots of love
Aashi
Edited by SunShine_A - 13 years ago
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