Originally posted by: -Shobz.TaAnu-
wowww...
Amazing pdate SIM...A new date to the same old one... And the way Onu suprises Taani... Ham sab bhi dekhte hi reh jaate hain...Loved the OS... But ek shikayat hai... Zyada jaldi update kara karo naa yaar...U write sooo well...Hope to see the next OS sooner...Loved this one
Originally posted by: anahita.taanu
oyeee simran.. i hve 2 sugest u sumthing..
u awfully hve a need 2 start an FF!u rot it reslly beautfully! de way de were! just luved dem.. nd dius unbeleivably awsum FF!u really rocked murderer!nd u being a murderer could only think of a hill side.. 2 kill sum1🤣but really it tuk my heart!de way u expressed deir feelings! it was damn cute!aur plss jaldi upd karna iss bar!nd u need 2 start an FF! plss!
Originally posted by: -SamanthaAngel-
Hey Hun Simran,
I loved all the Os's. Reading them In One shot is Just Amazing Wow.. I am loving this Update soon hun.Regards,Samantha
Originally posted by: -Mahi148-
oye jani
awesum partTaAnu shoo shweettotally shweety partamazingya annie is right write a FFpllzzzupdate next soon
hey its really
no superbno awesomeactually i dont have wrds...u made spel bound...jus loved it...a fab OSw8in more frm u❤️ uDiy@
Hey guys'..my xams are over and was in mood to write an OS. So after a great bit of thinking, I decided to write about the last epi of TL, changing the way Anurag and Taani come across each other. Feel free to throw eggs and tomatoes and if lucky, maybe I'll get some golden coins too. ;)
OS 😉
No! I can't do this! I do not have the strength to face her, Anurag thought as he stood before the Ganguly mansion. But as old, but golden memories began clouding his mind, he found himself walking towards the house ' the house, where he took his first steps, the house where he used to chase her around, to where he thought would never come back. But their selfless and undying love for each other made him come back to his theeki mishti. As he drew closer towards the house, the fountain suddenly caught his eye.
(11 years back)
"Maa!!" Taani told, between her giggling as she ran up to her mother who was making food for her. "Yeh dekhiye kya hua! You would never believe it!"
"Acha? What happened?" Labuni maa asked.
"Ma'this Onu'chalo! Aa gaya motu. You see with your eyes." Taani told, as she spotted Anurag march towards the kitchen.
Labuni maa took a closer look , as Anurag stood with hands on hips, glaring at Taani. When she finally realized what Taani meant, she also started laughing ' laughing till it hurt.
"Maa'this isn't fair!" Anurag said, with a cute look on his face. "Crow '.. is not rare, na?" (I hope you guys got it!)
"Haan motu! Crow '. is not at all rare ' for you. Crow knows the exact place to '. . O my god ' Incredible motu!" Taani told between her instant giggles. "Dekho, don't come anywhere near me, stinky motu!"
"Taani ke bache'" Anurag said as he ran to catch Taani, who had already understood his intentions. "Incredible kaun hai, main bathatha hoon'"
They ran around the whole house, until it almost broke down to pieces and Taani changed her direction to Anurag's house. They were circling the fountain and when Anurag tried to get hold of Taani, she pushed him off and thud! There he was, flat, lying on the pool of water.
"Oops! Motu, already you have got such a giant stomach and now, I'm wondering where the water would go. Sorry, haan..but I had to say.." She said as she sniggered.
"What's going on here?" Neelu maa asked, coming up to them. "Hey bhagvan! Yeh kya hua?" she asked, trying to stifle a laugh.
"Maa'aap bhi?" Anurag asked, as he jumped out of the pool.
"Motu'sambhalke. Hum sab ko jeena hai, na?"
"That's it! I'm going'" Anurag said, making a face at Taani, with a pained expression on his face.
"Arey maa'" Taani said, turning to Neelu maa. "Main toh mazaak kar raha tha'main usse manane jaa raha hoon.." Taani said, running towards him.
(Present)
Teri meri meri teri
prem kahaani Hai mushkil
Do lafzon mein yeh
Bayaana ho paye..
Ek duje se hue juda
Jab ek duje ke liye bane
Teri meri baathon ka
Har lamha sabse anjaana
Do lafzon mein yeh
Bayaana ho paye..
Kyun khuda tu ne mujhe aisa khwab dikhaya
Jab hakheekat main usse thodna tha'
Where did those days go, Taani? What sin did we do that we were separated from each other? Will the sun ever rise in our lives again or are we supposed to live in the shade the whole lifetime? I am petrified of the dark, Taani. I feel like I am actually becoming mad. I know that I was always mad - mad for a love that could neither find me nor could I.
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"Mama! Where're you going?" Joy asked with a puppy dog face.
"Mama has got a very special music programme today'Is Mama's baby coming with mama?" Taani asked, kneeling down.
"No'baby isn't coming mama'because if baby's papa comes then, baby has to be here, right?" Joy asked, halting briefly to search for the appropriate words. Being told about her papa's accident before her birth, the little girl has kept herself cool, calm and collected. But who couldn't help breaking down was her mama, who had now moved bit by bit towards Anurag's picture.
"I'll get you back to your old self at any cost, Onu. Yeh mera waada hai tumse, hamare pyar se." Taani asked, "swallowing" in her tears, unable to break down before their daughter. "But I can't reveal this to anyone, until I bring you back."
"What're you talking about, mama?" Joy asked, befuddled.
"You'll find out when mama comes back." Taani said, with a small smile playing on her lips. "Come, let's go downstairs."
Down the stairs, labuni maa and neelu maa were having a intense talk about Anurag. Maa, I can understand what you're conferring about. In a little while, I will make it come true. This is a promise ' a promise from a daughter, Taani thought.
"Maa! Aaj mera ek bohat important music programme hai'I am going'bless me.." Taani said, bending her head before the two mothers.
"Let success be with you always, beta'" Both the mothers said, with unison.
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(In the waterfall)
Sorry, Taani. But I couldn't face you ' just couldn't face your eyes, Anurag thought forlornly. As he stood there staring into space, he saw a familiar figure a few meters away. He felt like his eyes were defrauding him, because what he saw before him was like out of the question. The big black eyes, which used to daze him, the edible, kissable lips and the long silky hair, lightly falling over the shoulders ' the person, most important to him 'was standing just a few meters away him. But he didn't want her to see him, taking in the fact that she hadn't seen him. Quietly, he tried to slip away, but paused right behind her, snuffling back a tear.
"Bhagvan, please help me bring Onu back to his life'this is my only wish'" Taani prayed, with her eyes shut.
And that's impossible, Taani. Anurag thought.
As if on cue, she opened her eyes and swiftly turned back, to see an astounded Anurag before her.
Mere Maula Maula Mere Maula,
Man Matwala Kyun Hua Hua Re
Man Maula Maula Mere Maula(Part 2 coming soon)
Amazing one SIM...I jst loved the Motu waterfall wala scene...
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