Ripz Ripz Ripz!!! U're soo good at writing!!! 1st FF, n u already made ur FF 1 of my faves!!!
Loved the chemistry and love between Taanu in cottage!!! Burgers and chips. LOL!!!Arjuhi fight is soo cute!!!Do update soon!!!๐คNahi xxx
Originally posted by: love_never_dies
Fabulous yaar loved it,especially arjun-arohi part...
Originally posted by: taanufanvartika
very nice chapter.
waiting for taanu's confession. Continue soon.
Originally posted by: zohra.khaliq
๐sorry for late comment ๐"holding my ears"BTW...๐๐ผnice ud๐คโบ๏ธloved Taanu & Arjuhiโบ๏ธ๐กDumb priyanka ๐ก๐ญOH!no evrything is worse b/w Arjuhi๐hope every thing's fine b/w them๐๐ผBTW ๐ nice ud ...waiting for nxt prt๐ud ASAP๐๐ZOHRAโค๏ธ
thnkss for all ur lovely comments
heres next chapter...
ch 12- love nd war
(Anurag nd taani strted walking 2wards d camp site)
Anurag- taani jaldii chal naa
Taani- chal to rahi hut u thodaa slow chalnaa
Anurag- esii speed se chalege naa to bas hum aaj raat tak poh6 jaengaa
Taani- dekh anurag tuje jaana he to jaa'.me akeli aa sakti hu me itni hee speed se chalne wali hu
Anurag(angrily)- huh fir kal ke tarah fir ghum hoo jaegi
(anurag strted walking ahead'..taani was walking slowly nd admiring besutiful nature)
Anurag(looks bak)- grr yeh taani bhi naa '.(suddenly a idea slicks him nd he deceded 2 play a prank on her)
Anurag(in mind)- hmm aab dekhta hu kesa naai daarti (nd he hides behind d tree)
Tani was walking ahead nd he didn't found anurag ahead of her'nd nt even far away
Taani- yeh anurag kaha chalaa gayaa
Taani(screams)- anurag anirag anurag
Bt noo reply
(taani fellt little scared)
Taani- yeh anurag he kaha'.kahi sach me to muje chodke naai chalaa gayaa
(anurag was smiling teasing from d bak of d tree seeing taani scared)
Anurag(in mind)- bada keh rahi thi I m nt scared of ne 1 ha ha ha
Taani(screams again)- anurag anurag kaha hoot um
(bt still der was noo reply'.taani was vry scared her eyes were full of tears nd she strted crying)
Taani(wid teary eyes)- anurag kaha hoot tum
(taani strted walking ahead'.she felt vryy scared she was crying bitterly'.she looked here nd der d trees d noises of birds made her scared more)
Anurag(in mind)- ohh noo yeh to sach me toe rahi he
Taani was above 2 fall'.bt suddenly anrag came from bak nd catches her'taani hugged him wid a sigh of relief'.she was nt able 2 speak nethng nd she hugged him tightly'.anurag kept looking at her nd he hugged her bak'..his arms wrapped over her
Taani- u fool'.muje chodke kaha chalaa gaya tha
Taani was still crying'.anrug saw her tears nd felt like a knife stucking in his heart'he wiped her tears
Anurag(cuped taani's face)- I m sorry taani'me to bas mazak kaar raha tha
Taani(angrily)- mazak'.me kitnaa daar gai ti
Anurag- I m sorry taani abse esa mazak kabhi naai karunga'.muje maaf karde
(taani realizes nd dat she was vry close 2 anurag'nd she moved away)
Taani(feels shy)- haan ohk'.aab chalee
Anurag- haan
(dis time anurag nd taani both were walking 2gether)
Anruag(looks at taani)- taani ki ankho me ansu dekhke muje kuu itnii takleef huii''kyaa me usase pyaar karne laga hu
Taani- aaj anurag ke sath jo paal bitaya wo bahut alag thaa nd '.aaj jo muje anurag ke paas jake hua he esa pehla kabhii naai hua
(anurag taani were walking nd were thinking of each oder)
(dat side arjun nd arohi were worried abt '..anurag taani )
Arohi- yeh anurag taani abhi tak kyuu naai aye
Abhay- haan abhi tak to aa jane chahiye the
Arohi- huh abhii tak kyuu naiaye..he bhagwaan kiski nazar lagi he humare camp ko :P
Arjun- zarur teri buri nazar lagii hogii (nd he looks at arohi)
Arohi- eht u mean by meri buri nazar
Arjun- huh tune to kaha kisiki burii nazar'to mene sochaa teri hee lagi hogii
Aroh- dekho arjun muje jaghda karne kaa koi shauk naai he
Arjun- ha ha as if muje bahut maa aa raha he tujsee jaghdaa karne kaa
Arohi- muje tujse koi baat naai karni
Arjun- ohh really wht do u me to tujsee baat karne ke liye tarastaa hu
Arohi- shat up
Arjun- u shat up u fool
Arohi'haaw how dare u call me fool
Arjun- muh se ha ha ha
Arohi- ha ha vryy funny shatup
Arjun- mera muh he jitna bolnaa hoga utnaa bolunga tuje kyaa'.mind ur own business
Arohi- huh khadus kahi kaa
Arjun- tu khadusnii
Arohi- ek no. kaa junglii janwar'.janwar bhi tuje daar jaye
Arjun- aur tu chipkalii kahi ki'..darpok ha ha
Arohji- grr how dare u called me chipkalii
Arjun- becoz u dare tu call me jungle janwaar
Arohi- ha ha dats true but
Arjun- dats true as well
Arohi- shat up jungle janwaar
Arjun- chipkalllii chipkaalii
Arohi- arjun don't call me chipkalii
Arjun- ha ha I willl chipkali chipkali
(der head were stucking each oder nd both were screaming)
Arjun- chipkaallii
Arohii'junglii janwaar
(arohii hiss arjun on his face'arjun hitss her bak)
Arohi'tumhe sharam nai atti ladki ko marte hue
Arjun- waah tu mare to sharamm aur me maaru to besharam
(dey both strted fighting'.dey both were pulling each oder's hair nd were holding each oder'.dey picked up d rocks nd stretd throwing on each oder)
Arjun(throes d rock)- ha ha yeh le
Arohi- ha ha u missed d shot
Abhay- arjun arohii baas karo aab
Abhay tried 2 make dem understand bt none of dem listenend
Arjun was missing d shotss
Arjun(picks up d rock nd kisses it)- dehnaa yeh wala naai chutegaa
Nd he throws d rock'.arohi suddnyly bent down'.nd dat rock''priyanka just came from her tent'.nd d rock hits her head )
Arohi(laughs hard)- ha ha ha ha
(arjun nd abhay went 2 priyankaa)
At dat time anurag taani reached d camp site'dey saw arohii laughing hard nd hard
Anruag taani(shcked)- yeh arohi ko kyaa hua
Dey both went 2 arohi
Taani- arohi esa pagal ki tarah kyuu haas rahi he
Arohi-aree tum dono aa gayee (stil laughing)
Taani- haan par tu has kyu rahi he
Arohi narrated d story
Anurag- arohi waha priyankaa o laga he aur tu pet pakad ke haas rahi he
Taani- haan arohi chal aab uske paas
Precap-
kidnappers in jungle ๐ฒ๐
Arohi lost
Arjun- me arohi ko kuch nai hone dunga
anurag- taani tu theek to he
taani- yaa i m ohk
hope u all like it...waiitng for ur nice comments...critism is alsoo welcumed๐
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