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Posted: 13 years ago
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OH thank god ur back with ur ff! 😃 Amaazing just like the concept! Wonderful!
God luck <3
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Originally posted by: Alisha-Sheikh

OH thank god ur back with ur ff! 😃 Amaazing just like the concept! Wonderful!

God luck <3

thanx a lot. Hope u liked it.
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very good concept n update
update soon
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hey d 1st part was really interesting..
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Hey...really liked the FF! Add me in the PM list...:D
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Originally posted by: Simran42

Hey...really liked the FF! Add me in the PM list...:D

ya sure. I am glad that u liked it.
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thanx a lot all of you that you liked the FF and appreciated it.😊
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Hi everyone
Hope you all enjoyed reading the first chapter.
Here's the second one:

Nupur, Anurag's friend

CHAPTER-2

Anurag drag Taani towards him. They were very close to each other that much that they could hear each other's heartbeat.
Anurag was mesmerized in Taani's beauty. They both had a cute eye lock. When they realized Anurag forcefully pushed Taani into his car.

Taani: Yeh aap kya kar rahe hain?

Now Anurag lost his temper.

Anurag:Mujhe bhi aap ke saath rehne ka koi showk nahi hai. Voh to vo gunda vapas agaye the. And for your kind information my humanity doesn't allow to leave some girl in danger and back out.

Taani realizes her mistake. Anurag was driving the car.

Taani: I am really very sorry. Actually I got so much nervous after the incident so. Tum I mean aap please mujhe maaf kar dijiye.
And thanx that you saved me.

Anurag: Pehli baat mujhe tum keh kar hi bulao apna lagta hai. Aur doosri baat friendship mein no sorry and no thanx.
Taani: Friendship?
Anurag: Haan qui ab hum dost hai na?
Taani: Well, abhi to mile hai or dosti!
Anurag: Oh! Ok.Anyways tumhare mom-dad tention mein honge. Its a bit late.

Taani's eyes filled with tears but she controlled them.

Anurag: Well friendship nahi toh apna naam hi bata do?
Taani: Mera naam Taani hai. And I live alone. Mere mom-dad nahi hai.
Anurag: Oh! I am really sorry.

He tried to change the topic.

Anurag: Vaise mein station apne ek friend ko see-off karne aya tha. Aur tum?
Taani: Voh mein apne higher studies pora karne Mumbai gayi thi. Kolkata poore 5 sal baad lauti hoon.
Anurag: Ok.
Taani: Bas mere ghar agaya. This is the apartment where I live.
Anurag: Oh!
Taani: Thanx for everything you did for me.
Anurag: Its my pleaure. Bye.
Taani: Bye.

At Anurag's house.

Anurag was just entering his house. When someone stopped him. It was Shekhar Ganguly, Anurag's father.

Shekhar: Kaha the? Itna time toh apne friend ko see-off karne mein nahi lagta.
Anurag: Kuch kaam tha.
Shekhar: Anurag tum time par punctual rehna kab seekhoge?
Neelu: Ab jaane bhi dijiye na.
Shekhar: Nahi Neelu. Tumhare hi laad-pyaar ne ise bigaad kar rakha hai. Mere do hi to bete hain. Robindo
to nalayak hai hi aur ye Anurag. Main ne ise kitne baar kaha hai ki mera business join kar le magar nahi.
Ritesh ko dekho Ananya ke saath US mein mera business kitne acchhee tarah se sambhal raha hai.

Anurag just went to his room. He was about to shut the door when Robindo came, Anurag's brother.

Robindo: Dada aap dad ki baat ka bura mat manye. Aur ye aap ke haath par chot kaise lagi?

Anurag narrated him the whole story.

Robindo: Oh ho, to ye sab hua.(teasingly)
Anurag: Dekh Robi, tu jaisa soch raha hai vaisa kuch bhi nahi hai. Now just go and let me sleep.
Robindo: Ha ha.Ok I am just leaving. And have sweet taanilicious dreams.
Anurag: Tu jata hai ki nahi.

For sometime Anurag thought about taani and fell asleep.

Next evening at the cafe.

Mouli and Taani hugging each other. Both took the chairs and sat down.

Mouli: Kaise hai tu. Itne dinon baad mil rahe hai.
Taani: Bilkul theek hoon aur too. Really missed you yaar.
Mouli: Maine kya kam kiya. Why are you looking so tensed?

Taani narrated her the whole story.

Mouli: Tu me mujhe pehle kui nahi bataya. Are you all right(tensed)
Taani: Ya ya. I am totally fine. Dekh ab to tension mat le.
Mouli: Han han theek hai. Vaise voh ladka kon tha?(teasingly)
Taani: Patah nahi usne apna naam Anurag Ganguly bataya tha.(innocently)
Mouli: Ye tu kya keh rahi hai.Anurag Ganguly! He is the son of the most
successful business man. And the most handsome aur dashing person.
Tujhe itna acha mauka mila tha usse dosti karne ka and you left it.
Tera kuch nahi ho sakta.
Taani:Tera patah nahi. Lekin main aise-vaise ladki ek dam nahi hoon. Ok now its time for me to leave.
Mouli: Why? Abhi toh mile hai.
Taani: Sorry. But today is my first singing audition. And I don't want to be late.
Its at sharp 7pm.
Mouli: Acha baba theek hai.Bye.
Taani: See ya

At Anurag's house
Anurag's mobile was ringing.

Anurag: Haan bol Raj(his best friend).
Rajeev: Onu mujhe tujh se urgent baat karne hai. Mujhe tu 7 baje mil.
Anurag: Pur Kyun?(tensed)
Rajeev: Bas mil ke pata lag jaye ga. Bye.
Anurag: Bye.
Anurag(in his mind): Aakhir kya baat ho sakti hai.

He called to Nupur,(another friemd of him)

Anurag: Nupur Raj ne mujhe 7 baje bulaya hai. Tu bhi ajana.
Nupur: Ok.
Anurag; Chal theek hai Bye.
Nupur: Bye.

Hope you enjoyed reading it.
Do comment and criticizes are most welcome.




Edited by taanufan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Awesome update!!! Hehe, bet they're gna meet at the cafe when she's singing!!! Update asap!!! 😊

P.S. Thnx 4 the PM!!! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely Update yaar !! Do Update ASAP!
and thanks for the PM
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