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Posted: 13 years ago
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gud...๐Ÿ˜Š i dont to tell more ryt...?? its awesome...!!!
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Thanx for the PM...
Nice concet
Hope u update soon and Plll write ur FF and dont abandon it
Thanc for adding me to ur PM list
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Update soon dear,its a very gud concept.
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It was fabulous.. do continueee๐Ÿ˜Š
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Originally posted by: Sonatl

Thanx for the PM...

Nice concet
Hope u update soon and Plll write ur FF and dont abandon it
Thanc for adding me to ur PM list

ya definitely it will have an ending. Its my pleasure that you liked the FF.
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Originally posted by: DIYA-

gud...๐Ÿ˜Š i dont to tell more ryt...?? its awesome...!!!

ya di. Going to update the first chapter. Thanx for your support.
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@ silky_harshad and rose4yew- I am glad that you liked the concept will post the first chapter soon.
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First Chapter

At Railway Station

Taani has got down from a train. She is just about to come out of the station when suddenly her phone starts ringing. She picks up the phone.

Taani: Han bol Mouli. Main bilkul theek hun aur acchhee tarah Kolkata bhi pahuch gayi hoon. There is nothing to worry about.

Mouli: Acchha meri maa theek hai. Main toh railway station aane hi wali thi magar ek urgent kaam agaya isliye main nahi aa payi. Anyways we are meeting tomorrow evening. Done?

Taani: Definitely. Bas agar tera plan change nahi hua toh.

Mouli: Tu bhi na.Theek hai hum shaam ko jo tere ghar ke pas coffee shop hai vahan milte hain. Bye, take care.

As Taani was talkin she kept looking back. She thought someone was following her.

Taani: Hnn...

Mouli: I said Bye.

Taani: Haan Bye. See you in tomorrow.

The clock strikes 10pm it was quiet late and the station was not much crowded. Taani felt very strange and started walking fast. But then suddenly two men appeared in front of her.

They were looking like the local thieves of the city.

First man: Badi jaldi mein hai aap.

Second man: Hum chod dete hai aap ko. Vaise aap ko kahan jana hai. Pehle apna naam to bata dijeye.

Taani: Its none of your business!

Taani was very frightened. She was about to run when she saw two more men surrounded her.

She was fixed there. They started misbehaving with her. But then suddenly a man appeared before her. He stopped them.

The man: Tum logon ki himat bhi kaise hue?

He had a long fight with the thieves. At last he was able to save Taani.

The man to Taani:

The man: You need not worry now. They will not come again. Vaise I'm Anurag and you?

Taani was scared so much that she gave no response.

Anurag: Hey! At least I deserve a thanx. Anyways mein aap ko ghar chod deta hoon.

Taani gave Anurag a weird look.

Taani: Nahi koi zaroorat nahi hai.Main taxi lekar chali jaongi.

Anurag: Mein keh raha hoon na. I will drop you. Vaise bhi aap ko yahan is waqt koi taxi nahi milegi.

Taani: Nahi main chali jaongi.

Anurag started moving towards her car. But then he turned around to see her. He was quiet mesmerized in her beauty. Her hair was flying over her face. She just looked like an angel. But then he saw the man(thief) coming again towards her. He just drags Taani towards him. They were close to each that they could hear each other's heart beat...



Hope you liked it and do comment.

Edited by taanufan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice intro...fab vartika ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wooow
superb ch
luv it
fab amazing
update soon :)
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