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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
ridzii meriiπŸ€—..gr8 wrk yaar..πŸ‘.i luved it.this the first ff evr i m readin n i mjust luving it😳😳..........keep it upπŸ‘πŸΌ........update soon....
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
Haiiii *is too busy re-reading the Onu Taani bit*

Ahem, focus. Loved iiit ridzi.

So sorry I didn't comment til now πŸ˜”

Love you lots πŸ€—
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
Heyya Guyss I am back with another Update..Sorry I was 1 day late!

CHAPTER 3 * Janne Kyu*

Taani Onu are Still looking into each other eyes
They didn't notice Nupur and What she said!
The stool falls...Loud Noise!
Taani: Aah! (hugs Anurag tightly)
Anurag Blushing!
Nupur is looking at them!
Nupur: By God!
Nupur goes around them 2wice!
Nupur Scares Taani
Taani:Aah!
Anurag Taani in their Census
Taani Shocked: Nupur Nahi Vaisa kutch nahi hai!
Anurag: Haan Nupur Ji!
Nupur: Oye...Anurag, Sorry i mean Onuu!
Taani Smiles!
Nupur: Oye mujhe Nupur Ji mat bulav..!
Anurag: thek hai
Nupur: Ab Mujhe bolo...Yeh kya Chori Chori karte ho!
Taani tells the whole situation!
Nupur: Taani tu problem hamesha create karti hai!
Anurag: Haan Wahi toh!
Taani pointing her Finger: Tune mujhe Daraya!
Anurag catching her finger: Oho! toh kaun Cheka?
Taani: Ugli chodo!
Anurag: Yeh lo!
Taani leaves
Nupur walks past signing: Ise Pyaar hua Pyaaar hua!!
Anurag hears it (Blushes!)

Nupur,Mayank going towards their class!
Nupur: Pyaar Hua!
Mayank: Kise!
Nupur: By God
Mayank: Kya?
Nupur: Arrey Anurag ko Taani se!
Mayank: Kyaaaaa?
Nupur: Haan!

In the corridor Taani tying her hair
Anurag: Chodo na! Tum bahut khobsurat lagti ho...Khule balo ke saath!
Taani: WHAT!
Taani ties her hair fast and walks off!
She looks at the Notice Board!
And then Blushes and Opens her Hair! and goes!
Anurag seeing her and Blushing!

Nupur,Mayank,Pooja,Adhiraj,Taani,Anurag see Samrat and Gunjan Fighting
Nupur: Ab tum dono ko kya hua?
Gunjan: Dii dekho na Samrat Ladkiyon ko Looser bol raha haii!
Nupur: Haan...Lekin Samrat tumne na galati ki Ladkien Looser Hote hain!
Taani: Haan Nupur!
Adhiraj: Oh Ladkiyon toh bahut natak karte hai!
Pooja: Raj Girls are better than Boys!
Anurag: Girls Are better in Crying!
Taani: AAye Onu..Zyada bol mat!
Mayank: Ab iska faisla karna hoga!
Nupur: Kaise!
Samarat: Idea
Everyone: KYa?
Samrat: Basketball ho jaae?
Nupur: Haan Thek hai!
Taani and Gunjan wisper: Mujhe khelna nahi aata!
Anurag: Pata Tha!
Nupur: Kya!
Anurag: Taani aur Gunjan ko Basketball kehna nahi aata!
Taani runs from there!
Nupur: Taani!!
Gunjan: Ab yeh taani ko kya ho gayya dii?
Anurag: Usko na Zor ke Jhatke aatein hai!
Taani is running All running behind her!!
She goes in her room and locks herself!
Everyone Searching for her!
Anurag comes towards the room..
Taani thinking that he was Nupur Pulls him In!
Taani is Catching his hands
She couldn't she it was Anurag bcoz there were no Lights!
Anurag: Taani Taani!
Taani: Haan!
Anurag: Arrey mein Anurag hu!
Taani: Kya!
Lights come on!
Taani looks at him and Smiles!! and runs away!!

IN THE NIGHT!
All the 3 gurls are putting Nail polish!
Mayank calls Nupur and tell 'em to come and eat an Ice cream with them!
Nupur: Thek hai!

Nupur: Maine Mayank se kaha hai ki hum uske saath Ice-cream khane jaaengay!
OUTSIDE:
The car is full!
Taani: Tum log jao!!
Nupur: By God! Tum Chalo !
They pull Taani in!
Taani is having problem in Sitting! Instead of catching the Seat she caught Anurag's Shoulder
They reach the Ice cream Parlor
Taani's hand is yet on Onu's Shoulder!
The car gets a push!
Taani goes a bit ahead her hair is on Anurag's Shirt!
She tries to leaves But her hair is stuck in Onus Shirt!

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ON TUESDAY:
Taani Falling over Onu!
Eye Lock!

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Thanks Guys For reading!! God Bless.Catch u on Tuesday!
Edited by -Ridzzi- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
It was fantastic. Waiting for the next up.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
wowww... awesome ridzzi meri...πŸ€—

loving onu and taani's scenes..i'm just imagining harshu and apk with these characters... haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii..😍

waiting for the eye lock in the next update....

keep writing dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
Woow Loved it !! :P Keep it upp & Love the last scene.. hehe :P πŸ€—
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
Love it!!! Love the chacters of Anu n Taani!!!! Plz update soon. I can't w8!!! πŸ‘ Loved the last scene!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
πŸ€— LOVED THE update dear!!! πŸ€—
Onu was soo cute while blushing 😍
The scne in which Onu told Taani that her hair looked better when it's loose and then she unties her knot while standing opposite the noticeboard reminded me of Main Hoon Na, when Srk told that to Susmita Sen...

Plzzz update ASAP dear 😳 and thanks for the PM dear 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
WoW!!! Nice update..Loved it.. Keep it up RidzziπŸ€—
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Haaaiiii love it Twin!!! πŸ€— Can't wait for the next part πŸ˜‰ Taani's hair stuck in Onu's shirt 😍 haaaiiiii!!!
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