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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: silky_harshad

Sorry yara,maine extra tym le lia ch.11 n 12 pdhne me.par pdh lia hai abi.it was freaking awesum ⭐️ n dat 1 year leap was really surprising,yea i know u r full of surprises. 🀣chal acha kia jo tune tani ko maara nhi warna hm sare 2jhe maar daalte 🀣 🀣.ch.13 is too gud n my onu tohhh too cute for words. 😍 😳 n my zohi is a gr8 writer.par ek baat bata,hm masoom besharmo ko tune only two kisses aur ek hug diya 😑 nalayak 😑 😑chal iss baar maaf kiya πŸ˜ƒ.I know i have a BIG heart ❀️ par tu iska fayda mat uthana 😑.update soon warna main 2jhe kacha chaba jaungi.samji 😑 πŸ˜ƒ πŸ€—


oyee thanks for ur long commens but tu mujhe kacha chabayegi 😲 😲 and meine delay isliye kiya kyunke eid thi aur usmein mein busy thi,haan haan is baar jaldi update karoongi 😑 πŸ€—
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nhi re 2jhe thodi na chabaungi πŸ˜ƒ.acha jaldi update krna nalayak meriii 🀣
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: silky_harshad

Nhi re 2jhe thodi na chabaungi πŸ˜ƒ.acha jaldi update krna nalayak meriii 🀣


mein nalayak hoon aur mujhe hi nahi pata tha 😲 🀣
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Posted: 13 years ago
oyeee awsumeee nice zoha page thanks for the messages LOL πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter 14 :

next morning,taani was getting discharged frm the hospital as she was feeling better.onu was getting naughty with taani but taani glared him and said onu tu dur rahe mujhse ,aagar koi aagaya to,log kya kahenge.onu getting irritated says taani tujhe bas dosron ki parwah hai,kabhi tujhe mera khayal bahi aaya,jaa mein tujhse baat nahi karta.taani says onu dekh yeh hospital hai,mein wada karti hoon jab mein poori tarah se teekh hojaoon gi naa tab hum long drive pe jaayenge.she came clsoed to onu's ear and whispered sirf hum dono.onu smiled ,just when he was about to kiss taani,robby entered and says dada,ooopsss meine kuch nahi dekha and turns around.onu moves towards robby and hits him on his head and robby says dekho naa baudi,dada abhi bhi mujhe maarahe hain,ab to meri shadi bhi tai hochuki hai,kuch to lihaz kijeye,waise mujhe ap dono keh darmiyan kabab mein haddi banne ka koi shauq nahi hai,woh to maa ne kaha keh mein aap dono ki help kardoon,that's it.aaye taani baudi aap ka discharge hogaya hai.robby and onu helped taani to get up frm the bed and all went home.outside the banerjee house,the car stopped and onu,robby and taani got out frm it,neelu,shekher,thakoo maa,taposh,laboni,mauli was happy that taani was back.laboni moved forward to do aarti of taani but neelu stopped her and says yeh kya karrahi ho di.laboni says aree baba mein taani ki aarti utharne wali hoon.neelu says di shayad tum aik baat bhool gayi ho,bachpan se lekar aaj tak,onu tumhara beta hai aur taani meri beti hai,is naate mein taani ki aarti utharongi,ab do mujhe thali,takhe meri beti ghar keh aandar aasake.laboni handsover the thali to neelu and neelu does aarti of taani.taani comes inside the house and saw ananya holding a baby.she moved forward and asked ananya,di yeh aapki beti hai.ananya nodded her head in positive and handsover her child to taani.onu thinks in his mind,taani ki bachi keh paas har aik keliye waqt hai magar mereliye nahi hai .robby snapped onu frm his dreams and says kya dada,kis soch mein pardh gaye aap.onu pushed robby towards the corner and says robby mujhe taani keliye kuch special karna hai kal keh din.robby says kyun kal keh din aisa kya hai.onu hits robby and says idiot kal bimal kaka ki barsi hai and zahir si baat hai taani kal upset hogi.robby says aree haan kal to bimel kaka ki barsi hai,waqt kitni jaldi guzar jaata hai naa dada,lagta hai kal ki baat hai keh bimel kaka humhe chordh keh gaye lekin kal poorey 8 saal hojainge unko guzre hue.

Precap: taani in her room picks bimel picture and cries,whlie onu is standing behind her with tears rolling down his cheeks
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chal meri daant ka asar hua hai 2jh pe, gud awesum yaara,loved it 😍 aur dekh zohi ki bachi maine again short comment dia hai πŸ˜›
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Posted: 13 years ago
Gr8 update Zohi...
Loved reading it
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update zohi di! loved it! awesome!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great Update Zohii..
Loved each and every line.. Enjoyed it to the fullest
Precap sounds Romantic πŸ˜†
Update soon...
Thanks for the PM πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update.πŸ€—...
luv it totaly..😊.

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