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Posted: 14 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: ...Nikhita...

great part!

glad taani went after all.....hope this naina stays out af their way!
continue soon....thanks for the pm!



u r welcom... nd Thanks 4 commenting
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Diya1991

nyc update...even though short...i knw u r not grtin tym.....no probs...give long update nxt tym...mvaaah


luv u



thanks di... thnx 4 ur support😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
hi guys.. thnx 4 ur wonderful comments....

Sorry guys.. was a bit busy dis week… Here's my update…

So where were we???

Taani enters the "5 STARS MUSIC"

CHAPTER 3

There was a round of applause when she ended her song... Anurag was looking at Prithvi to see his reaction.. He saw prithvi was very happy... not just him.. dhruv and hemant too...

Hemant: Taani, you are far far better than Naina...

Taani; Aisa kuch nahi hai... Naina to professionally ek singer hai naa...

Dhruv: Tum Naina ko jaanthi ho?

Taani: Vo meri room mate hai.

Dhruv: Aur tum Deepa ko jaanthi ho?

Taani: Vo meri sabse achi dost hai...

Hemant: Dhruv, ter ko to decent hona padega... Teri hone wali to iski saath hai...

Dhruv: Chup kar... Badmash

Taani gazed at her watch... it was nearly 10.00 pm..

Taani: main jaaun???

Prithvi: haan jao.. Kal 5 baje aana...

taani; teek hai bye..

hemant: bye...

Dhruv; good night..

She was looking for someone else.... She saw Anu phoning someone... She went to him and waited for him to finish his talk.

taani: Bye...

Anurag: Ab yeh jagah acha laga?

Taani: haan.. Bilkul... Acha, main jaa rahi hoon...

Anurag: Bye...

She left and all the other 4 stars loved her character... She was a girl full of talents but she didn't show off... And that's our Taani....

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NEXT DAY…

Anurag was driving to the rehearsal place... it was already 5.00 pm. He was late as he had some urgent office work to do.. He stopped his car when he saw Taani walking... he opened the glass window.

Anurag: kahan jaa rahe ho?

Taani: rehearsal ko.. Aaj main late hoon... Bus nahi mili..

Anurag: Koi baath nahi hai.. Mere sath aao. Main bhi vahan jaa raha hoon...

Taani; Magar...

Anurag: magar wagar kuch nahi.. chalo...

She got inside the car reluctantly. He continued driving

Anurag: vaise, kahan rahthe ho?

Taani: Hostel

Anu: Vo nahi, I mean... home town?

Taani Punjab.

Anu; Ghar mein kaun kaun hai?

Taani: Koi nahi..

Anurag: Mathlab?

Taani; main ek orphan hoon... Orphanage mein rahthi thi.. Padayi ke baad job keliye Mumbai aayi.. Main ab ek music school mein temporary teacher hoon...

Anurag: Oh.. I'm sorry..

Taani: Koi baath nahi.

They reached the reherasal place...

The concert was very near... Taani had been practising the song really well. It was a duet with Prithvi. She was singing very well and now Prithvi and others has confidence in her. As they were about to leave after the rehearsal, Prithvi got a call. He answered it urgently.

Prithvi; Hey guys, Mr Sharma aa raha hai.

Anu; Aaj?

Prithvi; haan.. rehearsal dekhne....

Dhruv: Ab hum kya karenge? Taani to prepared bhi nahi hai.

They saw a car approaching their building.

Hemant: Lo aagaya Mr. Sanjay Sharma. Ab to band bajega....

Dhruv: Chup re!!

Anu watched Taani all tensed. He smiled at her. But she didn't return the smile as she was really tensed.

Prithvi: hello Mr Sharma.. Baitiye..

He took his seat.

Sharma: Thayyar ho?

Prithvi: Haan sir..

Sharma: Pehle mujhe duet sunna hai.

Prithvi: Duet to thayyar nahi hai sir.

Sharma: Kya? Jaanthe ho na, concert ke liye sirf theen din hi bacha hai. Aur maine aaj issiliye aaya kyun ki female singer ka ek solo bhi chahiye. Ab kya karega?

He described everything and now Sharma was staring angrilly at Anu.

Anu in reply, nodded his head towards Taani who was standing at the corner... All tensed.

Sharma: yeh?

Anu: Yeh taani hai sir.. Bohat acha gaathe hai....

Sharma: Mujhe kuch nahi sunna hai. Bas ithna hi kaho. Female solo gaa sakthe hai?

Taani: Sir vo..

Anu: Yes sir.. thayyar hai..

Sharma: To solo gao.

Taani was now staring at Anu… Her face said how scared she was.

She was now standing next to Anurag. He held her hand and asked her to sing. He took his seat in front of his key board and started playing simple chords.

Taani:

Ho tohra saajan ayo tore desh
Badli badra badla saavan
Badla jag ne bhes re
Tohra saajan ayo tore desh

Soyi soyi palkho pe chalke
Mere sapno ke khidki pe aa gaya
Aate jaate phir mere dil ke
Inn haathon mein woh khat pakda gaya
Pyar ka… lafzo mein rang hai pyar ka

Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli baar ve
Bahara bahara
Ke chain toh huwa farar ve
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli pehli baar ve

Ho tohra saajan …………..tore desh

Woh kabhi dike zameen pe
Kabhi woh chand pe
Yeh… nazar kahe usse yahan
Mein rakhloo bandh ke
Ek saans mein
Dhadkano ke paas mein
Haan paas mein ghar banaye
Hai bhoole yeh jahaan

Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli baar ve
Bahara bahara
Ke chain toh huwa farar ve
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli pehli baar ve

Preet mein tori ore saawariya
Payal jaise chanke bijuriya
Cham cham naache tan pe badariya
Hooo..hoo hoo…

Baadaliya tu bharse ghano
(bharse ghano..bharse ghanoo)

Aaa..aa..aaa..

Jo… yeh badliyan woh chhed de
Toh chalke baarishein
Woh.. de aahate kareeb se
Toh bole khwaishen he aaj kal
Zindagi har ek pal
Har ek pal usse chaahe
Hai jiska dil hua

Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli baar ve
Bahara bahara
Ke chain toh huwa farar ve
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli pehli baar ve

Soyi soyi palkho pe chalke…………….

Ho tohra saajan ayo tore desh
Badli badra badla saavan
Badla jag ne bhes re
Tohra saajan ayo tore desh

Prithvi watched Mr. Sharma's face glowing… He was impressed..

Sharma: Bohat acha gaaya tu ne..

Taani; thank you sir..

Sharma: Solo to thayyar hai. Duet bhi thayyar karna. I'm sure you'll do well.

Taani; Thank you sir...

He left the place.

Hemant: Arey, tu ithna acha gaaya.

Taani: Thank You.

Prithvi: Yehi gaana solo gaaoge naa? This is so good.

Dhruv: Haan.. Par film mein yeh gaana to 2 singers milke gaaya hai. Aur tum…. Bilkul ache they.

Taani: Aap ne mujhe bataya nahi, ki solo bhi chahiye they.

Prithvi: Mujhe bhi pata nahi tha. Tum ne suna naa, Sharma ne aaj hi kaha solo ke bare mein.

Hemant: To ab humare concertko theen songs.. Ek duet, ek tera aur Taani ka…

Taani looked at her watch it was past 10.00pm.

Taani: Oh god aaj to dair ho gayi. 10 baje ko hostel pahunchna chahiye tha.

Anu: Koi baath nahi main tumhe chod detha hoon.

In the car

Anu: Bohat acha gaaya tum ne.

Taani; Thank you sir.

Anu; Maine kaha hai, mujhe sir math bulao. Bas Anurag... vo hai mera naam... ithna pyaara naam hai naa??

She smiled.

Anu: Hmm.. tumhara naam bhi ache hai... Taani...

They reached the hostel. Taani got outside the car.

Taani; thankyou sir.. Sorry Anurag..

Anu: hmm.. Good.. Bye..

Taani: Same to you.

She walked towards the hostel door. She saw the warden standing at the door.


How was dat guys?? Pls comment if it is gud or bad...


DIYA- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
WELL SWEETY IS WAS WELL WRITTEN I LYK IT VERY MUCH....😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
super, as ever.👏i'm glad everything worked out fine.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
hey cool yaar.................it was very pleasant .................i loved it..................looking fwd..................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
hi sweetie,

im gonna read ur ff from da beginning and then i'l comment ok?!

big hug
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
wow........lovely update!
loving how Anuraag-taani's relationship is going.......hope the warden doesn't scold her too much!
continue soon......
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
I read all parts at once.. and it's amazing... Please add me to your PM list... Continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
hey nice update...so nw taani and anurag r becoming friends slowly...waiting to see hw d story wil develop...
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