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Hi, I'm Rose... u can call me Cathy or rose.... I've read the ffs posted in various forums... I thought of writing an ff on TaAnu.... This is my first work.....Enjoy and Comment.. criticisms are also welcome....
Ps: Even though my mother tongue is Hindi, you may find grammar mistakes... Please do forgive and enjoy...
I'm posting the character sketch and introduction now...
The story is about two persons.... who had never thought they would fall in love.... This is a journey through their lives.... How they stand for each other still unknowing the fact that THEY ARE MADE FOR EACH OTHER.....
MAIN CAST
Anurag Ganguly:
Smart, handsome..... He is a person every girl would dream of.... He believes in god, but does not believe in going to temples or so. He is the managing Partner of the most famous GEEGEE enterprises in Mumbai.... He is a marvelous keyboard player and as a pastime, he joins his friend Prithvi in his music troop. He is living with Taposh and Mouli, his bhayya and bhabhi. He has 3 best friends namely, Dhruv, Prithvi and Hemant.
Taposh Ganguly:
Taposh is a Doctor.He loves his brother a lot and does anything for him. They had lost their parents when Anurag was just 8 years old. From that day, he is Anu's father, mother, brother... All rolled into one. He is married to Mouli.
Mouli:
She is the best bhabhi in the world. She is very loving and caring and is like a mother to Anurag. She married Taposh against the wish of her parents who were settled in London. They got married a week ago and in just one week time, she became Anu's favorite....
Rithesh Gupta:
He owns the 50% share of the GEEGEE enterprises. He is really workaholic. He never finds time for relaxation or recreation. The only thing in his mind is "WORK....MONEY". And when I say Money, he does anything for that. Well, Anurag keeps on telling him that money isn't everything. There, he fails in convincing him. Anu has a benifit from that as he can leave Rithesh in the office whenever he has to go for Music programmes.
Prithvi Saxena:
He is Anurag's best friend.... He is a very good singer and he owns the "5 STARS Music troop". He is a fun loving person like Anurag. He has chosen music as his profession.
Dhruv Bhatiya:
Anurag's friend, He is the guitarist in the troop. Professionally, he is helping his father in his textile shop.
Hemant Sharma:
The naughtiest one. He is the drummer in their music troop. He has no profession as he thinks that office is place where one should never go. He always makes fun of Anurag and Dhruv who are bussiness men.
Anurag, Prithvi, Hemant and Dhruv were friends from school. They stand for each other always... Actually, 5star Music group started from a small music club which was formed in their college. It was Anurag who found a singer in Prithvi. And with his interest, the music club was converted to "5 STARS MUSIC TROOP". Now, it is the most famous one in Mumbai. They do many concerts, shows etc... It includes Anurag, Prithvi, Dhruv, Hemant and a female singer which makes them 5 in number.
Naina Kapoor:
She is the female singer of the 5 STARS group. She is very proud and thinks that she is the only best singer in the world. Anurag hates her for her character is very annoying. She never comes for rehearsals in time. Well, Prithvi is closing his eyes as they fail to find another female singer to replace her.
Taani Basu:
She is a simple beauty, with lots of talents... Music is her life. She is an orphan. She thinks that one's life would not be beautiful unless he/she shares the beauty of life with others. She has completed her MBA course but failed to get a job. She is having a part time job in a private music school. She is staying in a hostel and unfortunately she is with Naina. She always finds positive in everything. And that makes her unique and loved by all. Every morning, she sings the 'bhajan' in the mandir.
INTRODUCTION
"ANUUUUUUUU"
Anu woke up, startled. He recognized his bhabhi's voice and opened his door.
Anu(yawning):kya hai bhabhi? Ithne jaldi kyun?
Mouli: Kya jaldi? Time dekha? Office nahi jaana hai kya?
Anu: Time to abhi bhi baaki hai. Vaise to Rithesh mujhse pehle pahunchenge.
Mouli: Kuch bhi ho, aaj tum mere saath aana hoga.
Anu: Kahan?
Mouli: Sree krishna Mandir. Taposh ko ek emergency call aaya tha. To vo hospital gaya.
Anu: Mandir?
mouli: haan, Mandir. Ab jaake nahaa lo. Jadi.
He reluctantly left to the wash room.
On the way to mandir...
Anu; Bhabhi, aap har roz mandir kyun jaathi hai?
mouli; Arey, agar bhagwan ki kripa nahi hote to kuch bhi teek nahi hoga. mujhe lagtha hai ki tum bhi har roz mandir jaana chahiye.
Anu; Oh no no no... I'm fine, thank you.
they reached the mandir and mouli went inside. Anu parked his car and stood outside. He heard a sweet female voice singing the bhajan...
Radha aisi baihi Shyam ki deewani... Anup Jalota
Radha Ke Bina Shyam Adha- Shri Anup Jalota
Koi Shyam Sundar Se Keh Do Yeh Jaake...
Kya Kya Kahoon Main Krishna Kanhaiya...
Well, he was maha impressed on the voice. To see the beautiful voice behind this, he moved towards the entrance where he was stopped by one of the pandits. He understood that he is supposed to take off his shoes. He took of the shoes and entered the mandir. He saw his bhabhi praying inside the mandir. He again heard the sweet voice...
Shyam Teri Bansi Pukaare Radha Naam - Geet Gaata Chal
Hari Mere Ghar Ko Yeh Var...
Jara murli ki taan sunaade
Shri Radhe Radhe - Shri Gaurav Krishan Goswami
The voice led him inside the mandir where Mouli was praying.
He saw a girl singing the bhajan. Unknowingly, he folded his hands in prayer position infront of the sree krishna statue and closed his eyes. The bhajan was like heaven. He was so involved in the sweet singing that he didn't realise his bhabhi standing besides him. At the same time, Mouli was really astonished to see her devar praying. She tapped on his shoulder.
Anu: bhabhi..
Mouli: Kamal kiya tu ne... Kuch hi dair pehla kaha tha ki mandir jaana nahi chahiye.. Ab yeh kya?
Anu: Vo bhajan....
Mouli: Vo to har din yahan hota hai. Bohat sundar hai naa?
Anu; kis ne gaaya ?
Mouli: Us ne...
She pointed towards a girl walking towards the gate. Found a girl wearing simple salwar, she had a very long hair which was wet, looking like she has just taken bath.
Anurag was facing her back. He felt a tap on his shoulder, he turned around and found Mouli standing there and smiled at him.
Mouli; Ab chalo. tumhe office jaana hai naa... Hum Kal aayenge...
He left mandir, but he felt like his mind is still involved in the beautiful bhajan. He felt like that beautiful voice is with him....
Radha aisi baihi Shyam ki deewani... Anup Jalota
Radha Ke Bina Shyam Adha- Shri Anup Jalota
Koi Shyam Sundar Se Keh Do Yeh Jaake...
Kya Kya Kahoon Main Krishna Kanhaiya.
Mouli understood that he is mentally absent. She snapped her fingers. He came out of his thoughts.
Mouli: kahan kho gaya?
Anu: Kuch nahi.
"Chehra nahi dekha.... Pata nahi phir mulaquaat ho na ho...." He thought. He sat in his car and looked at the mandir and prayed, "phir usey zaroor milwana."
This is the introduction.. I'll post chapter 1 asap... Please do comment so that i can improve..... Suggestions are also welcome.....
Ps: Even though my mother tongue is Hindi, you may find grammar mistakes... Please do forgive and enjoy...
I'm posting the character sketch and introduction now...
The story is about two persons.... who had never thought they would fall in love.... This is a journey through their lives.... How they stand for each other still unknowing the fact that THEY ARE MADE FOR EACH OTHER.....
MAIN CAST
Anurag Ganguly:
Smart, handsome..... He is a person every girl would dream of.... He believes in god, but does not believe in going to temples or so. He is the managing Partner of the most famous GEEGEE enterprises in Mumbai.... He is a marvelous keyboard player and as a pastime, he joins his friend Prithvi in his music troop. He is living with Taposh and Mouli, his bhayya and bhabhi. He has 3 best friends namely, Dhruv, Prithvi and Hemant.
Taposh Ganguly:
Taposh is a Doctor.He loves his brother a lot and does anything for him. They had lost their parents when Anurag was just 8 years old. From that day, he is Anu's father, mother, brother... All rolled into one. He is married to Mouli.
Mouli:
She is the best bhabhi in the world. She is very loving and caring and is like a mother to Anurag. She married Taposh against the wish of her parents who were settled in London. They got married a week ago and in just one week time, she became Anu's favorite....
Rithesh Gupta:
He owns the 50% share of the GEEGEE enterprises. He is really workaholic. He never finds time for relaxation or recreation. The only thing in his mind is "WORK....MONEY". And when I say Money, he does anything for that. Well, Anurag keeps on telling him that money isn't everything. There, he fails in convincing him. Anu has a benifit from that as he can leave Rithesh in the office whenever he has to go for Music programmes.
Prithvi Saxena:
He is Anurag's best friend.... He is a very good singer and he owns the "5 STARS Music troop". He is a fun loving person like Anurag. He has chosen music as his profession.
Dhruv Bhatiya:
Anurag's friend, He is the guitarist in the troop. Professionally, he is helping his father in his textile shop.
Hemant Sharma:
The naughtiest one. He is the drummer in their music troop. He has no profession as he thinks that office is place where one should never go. He always makes fun of Anurag and Dhruv who are bussiness men.
Anurag, Prithvi, Hemant and Dhruv were friends from school. They stand for each other always... Actually, 5star Music group started from a small music club which was formed in their college. It was Anurag who found a singer in Prithvi. And with his interest, the music club was converted to "5 STARS MUSIC TROOP". Now, it is the most famous one in Mumbai. They do many concerts, shows etc... It includes Anurag, Prithvi, Dhruv, Hemant and a female singer which makes them 5 in number.
Naina Kapoor:
She is the female singer of the 5 STARS group. She is very proud and thinks that she is the only best singer in the world. Anurag hates her for her character is very annoying. She never comes for rehearsals in time. Well, Prithvi is closing his eyes as they fail to find another female singer to replace her.
Taani Basu:
She is a simple beauty, with lots of talents... Music is her life. She is an orphan. She thinks that one's life would not be beautiful unless he/she shares the beauty of life with others. She has completed her MBA course but failed to get a job. She is having a part time job in a private music school. She is staying in a hostel and unfortunately she is with Naina. She always finds positive in everything. And that makes her unique and loved by all. Every morning, she sings the 'bhajan' in the mandir.
INTRODUCTION
"ANUUUUUUUU"
Anu woke up, startled. He recognized his bhabhi's voice and opened his door.
Anu(yawning):kya hai bhabhi? Ithne jaldi kyun?
Mouli: Kya jaldi? Time dekha? Office nahi jaana hai kya?
Anu: Time to abhi bhi baaki hai. Vaise to Rithesh mujhse pehle pahunchenge.
Mouli: Kuch bhi ho, aaj tum mere saath aana hoga.
Anu: Kahan?
Mouli: Sree krishna Mandir. Taposh ko ek emergency call aaya tha. To vo hospital gaya.
Anu: Mandir?
mouli: haan, Mandir. Ab jaake nahaa lo. Jadi.
He reluctantly left to the wash room.
On the way to mandir...
Anu; Bhabhi, aap har roz mandir kyun jaathi hai?
mouli; Arey, agar bhagwan ki kripa nahi hote to kuch bhi teek nahi hoga. mujhe lagtha hai ki tum bhi har roz mandir jaana chahiye.
Anu; Oh no no no... I'm fine, thank you.
they reached the mandir and mouli went inside. Anu parked his car and stood outside. He heard a sweet female voice singing the bhajan...
Radha aisi baihi Shyam ki deewani... Anup Jalota
Radha Ke Bina Shyam Adha- Shri Anup Jalota
Koi Shyam Sundar Se Keh Do Yeh Jaake...
Kya Kya Kahoon Main Krishna Kanhaiya...
Well, he was maha impressed on the voice. To see the beautiful voice behind this, he moved towards the entrance where he was stopped by one of the pandits. He understood that he is supposed to take off his shoes. He took of the shoes and entered the mandir. He saw his bhabhi praying inside the mandir. He again heard the sweet voice...
Shyam Teri Bansi Pukaare Radha Naam - Geet Gaata Chal
Hari Mere Ghar Ko Yeh Var...
Jara murli ki taan sunaade
Shri Radhe Radhe - Shri Gaurav Krishan Goswami
The voice led him inside the mandir where Mouli was praying.
He saw a girl singing the bhajan. Unknowingly, he folded his hands in prayer position infront of the sree krishna statue and closed his eyes. The bhajan was like heaven. He was so involved in the sweet singing that he didn't realise his bhabhi standing besides him. At the same time, Mouli was really astonished to see her devar praying. She tapped on his shoulder.
Anu: bhabhi..
Mouli: Kamal kiya tu ne... Kuch hi dair pehla kaha tha ki mandir jaana nahi chahiye.. Ab yeh kya?
Anu: Vo bhajan....
Mouli: Vo to har din yahan hota hai. Bohat sundar hai naa?
Anu; kis ne gaaya ?
Mouli: Us ne...
She pointed towards a girl walking towards the gate. Found a girl wearing simple salwar, she had a very long hair which was wet, looking like she has just taken bath.
Anurag was facing her back. He felt a tap on his shoulder, he turned around and found Mouli standing there and smiled at him.
Mouli; Ab chalo. tumhe office jaana hai naa... Hum Kal aayenge...
He left mandir, but he felt like his mind is still involved in the beautiful bhajan. He felt like that beautiful voice is with him....
Radha aisi baihi Shyam ki deewani... Anup Jalota
Radha Ke Bina Shyam Adha- Shri Anup Jalota
Koi Shyam Sundar Se Keh Do Yeh Jaake...
Kya Kya Kahoon Main Krishna Kanhaiya.
Mouli understood that he is mentally absent. She snapped her fingers. He came out of his thoughts.
Mouli: kahan kho gaya?
Anu: Kuch nahi.
"Chehra nahi dekha.... Pata nahi phir mulaquaat ho na ho...." He thought. He sat in his car and looked at the mandir and prayed, "phir usey zaroor milwana."
This is the introduction.. I'll post chapter 1 asap... Please do comment so that i can improve..... Suggestions are also welcome.....
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