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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Diya very nice creation and story development... waiting for ur next post...
post soon......... can u PM me ur postings...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: dosthi

Hi Diya very nice creation and story development... waiting for ur next post...

post soon......... can u PM me ur postings...

THAN Q.....YH SURE I'LL PM U...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
great start......
waiting for more!
continue soon....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: ...Nikhita...

great start......

waiting for more!
continue soon....

thank u......surely try to update soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
Hey my frndz....
Hope you all enjoyed the first chapter.

This ff will be updated on all saturday.

So todays update.....

CHAPTER 02


At night....Smruthi went to her room.

Smruthi:Yeh kaisi mohabth hain jis mein dada aapne aap ko kho diya.

Someone from closed her eyes with hand.

Smruthi:Robi...

He took his hand back.She turned and saw him.

Smruthi:Robi
Robi:Ha...
Smruthi:Sach bathavoon Robi your dada looks like "An Angey Young Man"
Robi:Kya....?

He started to laugh.
Smruthi:Ha... beard and in all look he look like "An Angey Young Man"
Robi:Teri haath mein kya hain
Smruthi(excitement) :Arre...!! mein bathana bhool gayi i got Teri Yaadon Mein.
Robi:Kya?!!!
Smruthi:Ha...now distrub me okk
Robi:Okk madam.

She opened the book.

Mein Anurag Ganguly aur yeh zindagani meri aur Taani ki hain joh kisi aur ne likha tha.Taani ,Taani Banerjee voh shayad yeh ke duniya keliye ab nahi raha hoge lekin mereliye voh duniye ki kisi na kisi ko ne (corner) mein zaroor hain.

Smruthi:Kya Taani ...?OMG....!!!!

Robindo came near to her.

Robi:Kya hua..?
Smruthi:Kya Taani mar chuki hain
Robi:Patha nahi ki ab voh kahan hain agar zinda hotha toh ab tak toh aajana chahiye na

Smruthi:Mathlab....
Robi:Kuch nahi tum pado aur mujhe sone do
Smruthi:Ab...?

He fell on to bed again.

Robi:Pleaseeee ....

Smruthi put her mind on book started to read which took her to the past life of Onu and Taani.






SIX YEARS AGO..........

Anurag came with Robi to house after jogging where he heard a sweet voice.

"Saanwariya Saanwariya, Main Toh Huwi Baawariya
Tune Mann Moh Liya'saanwariya Ho') -2
Uljha Sa Ye Mann Hai, Sulgha Sa Ye Tann Hai
Sapnon Ka Saawan Hai, Nainon Ka Aangan Hai

Chhalke Mann Gaagariya..saanwariya Ho'saanwariya Ho...

Saanwariya Saanwariya, Main Toh Huwi Baawariya

Tune Mann Moh Liya'saanwariya Ho'"


Robi:Maa...
Anurag:Tere ko kya chahiye sunai dera maa ga rahi hain
Robi:Voh ma nahi hain dada she is Taani meri collage mate
Anurag:Taani..?
Robi:Ha...acha mujhe bahooth bhook lagi hain mein kitchen mein ja raha hoon

Anurag ran to look whose owns that sweet voice than his mom.
But he couldn't see her because his mom was sitting in front of
her when he opened the door.

Anurag:Maa...

Nilanjana turned and Onu was able to see her Face.He just kept looking at her she didn't even notice him.

Neelu:Onu...Onu...

He came into his sense.

Anurag:Aapko Robi bula raha hain
Neelu:Ha..jarahi hoon

She turned towards Taani

Neelu:Toh teek hain
Taani:Mein chaloon
Neelu:Rukho

She got up came near to Anurag.

Neelu:Tum Robi ko chotne collage ja raha hain uss waqt Taani ko bhi chot dena

Anurag:Teek hain Maa bas yeh dress badalna hain
Taani:Nahi mein chali javoongi
Neelu:Bilkul nahi

Anurag went out.


After sometime....

Anurag came downstairs....while Taani was sitting on sofa in drawing room.

Anurag:Robi...!!!Robi...!!! jaldi aaja late ho raha hain

Robi:Aagaya dada...
Anurag(to Taani) :Aap bhi chaliye

They 3 went..


'''''''''''''~~~~~~~~'''''''''''''

Taani sitting at back and Robindo and Anurag in front.Wind heavily through glasses of the car which gazed through Taani's long beautiful.Anurag adjusted the centre mirror to see Taani who was disturbed with haevy wind.He pressed a button to close all glasses.

Robi:Kya hua dada aapne glasses kyun band kiya
Anurag:Bahooth tez se hawa aa rahi hain

He put on AC.

They reached the collage.Taani got out telling THANKS to Anurag very fastly without looking to his face and ran to collage.

Robi:Ok bye dada.
Anurag:Byee

He drove very fastly.

*****.......*****

EVENING.....

Robi went near to Taani in collage.

Robi:Taani tu aaj aa rahi
Taani:Nahi baba mein tumhare voh "ANGRY YOUNG MAN"
ke paas jaatha hoon na i will start sweat.Usska voh beard ufff...!!!

Robi:Hey mere dada ke bare mein aisa kuch math kaho tum
Taani:I'm sorry.Tum mujhe yeh batha uske saath koi tragedy hua hain kya
Robi:No not all
Taani:Toh voh fresh hain...?
Robi:Heyy..!!
Taani:Okk mein jaa rahi hoon
Robi:Okk bye
Taani:Bye

Both went out of collage,


........*****........

Anurag was sitting ,Neelu came and sat beside him.

Neelu:Aaj voh tai aayi thi tujhko ek rishtha lekar
Anurag:Tum bhi na maa
Neelu:Mujhe voh ladki bahooth pasand hain tu dekhna tujhko bhi pasand ayega

She gave photo but Aurag put aside withpur looking it.
Anurag:Maa...Mujhe toh...

Shekhar enters.

Shekhar:Anurag pehle hum iss ladki ko denkhne chalenge teek hain mein un logon keh chukka hum aaj vahan ja rahe so be ready.

He went away.Anurag went near to Neelu.

Anurag:Yeh kaunsa thareeka hain baba pehle bhi aisa hi hain voh decisions lethe aur hum dhop detha hain

Neelu:Bas ek baar usse milke toh delko
Anurag:Agar mujhe pasand nahi toh koi baath nahi na

'~~~~~'~......

Taani's house....

Taani:kya voh mujhse nov(9) saal bada hain maa kya aap ek bhude(old man) ke saath meri shaadi karwa rahe ho

Laboni:Ab zyada math mein teri bhalai keliye karoongi na

......*

Anurag:Kya 9 saal....?
Neelu:Arre toh kya tum tujhse choti ladki ko hi shaadi karega na
Anuag:Nahi maa...aaj kal ki ladki 24 etc saal ki ladka pasand
aur aap mereliye mujhse 9 saal choti ladki ko dekha

Neelu:Ab bas aur avoo humare saath

She left

Anurag:Acha hua voh ladki mujhe reject karegi aur aapne usske saath ooh god you are so great.


.......<><><>..........

Anurag got into the car.Ananya and Neelu was there at the back seat.Ritesh drove the to girl's house.

The car stopped infront of a small house.All got into house when Laboni opened the door and got seated,

Neelu:Yeh hain Anurag

Laboni smiled.

Laboni:Apni beti ko bulathi hoon

She went inside and aftertime she came with Taani.Anurag stood up when he saw Taani .Taani was shocked to see Anurag.

AnuragPOV
Kya Taani mujhse ithni choti hain chalo koi baath nahi lekin agar voh mujhe tokraya toh..?

TaaniPOV
Ooh god yeh...!!!

Laboni:Arre baito na

He came to his sense and sat on sofa.

Anurag:Maa...Taani..?:-in low voice
Neelu:Kyun tujhe pasand nahi aaya :-in the tone.

Shekhar:Agar in dono kuch baath karna hain toh kuch waqt dedetha hain

Laboni:Ha..chal Taani andar chalo

Taani went inside room and

Neelu:Tum bhi javo Onu

He followed Taani.

~'''''''~'''''''~'''''''~

Inside Taani's room.Taani's heart beat so fastly,she started to sweat.

Anurag:Aap..

She looked down.

Anurag:Aap meri umar ko lekar koi provlem nahi hain na..?


He started asking such stupid questions to her but she kept silence.

Anurag:Apko mujhse kuch poochna hain bathana hain toh boliye

They kept silent for sometime as Taani was not asking him anything because her fear.

After somtime Ananya opened the door.

Ananya:Chale Onu ...
Anurag:Ha..chalo

They left Taani's house.

*******.********.*******.
Neelu came to Anurag's bedroom after dinner,

Neelu:Onu..
Anurag:Maa..baito na

Neelu sat on the bed.

Neelu:Tujhe Taani pasand hain
Anurag:Ha..lekin mujhe nahi lagthe ki Taani ko pasand hain
Neelu:Taani ko pasand hain

Anurag:Kya,,!!
Neelu:Ha..abhi abhi phone aaya tha unki taraf se rishtha mansoor hain.

Anurag became very happy kissed Neelu.

.......<<<<>>>>>........

Ananya's Room.....Ananya fell to sleep but Ritesh was lost in his thoughts.

RiteshPOV

Anurag Taani se shaadi karega.Hmmmm.....


Precap:

Taani:Mujhe koi problem nahi mujhe toh aapki khushi chahiye.

She hugged laboni

Edited by Diya1991 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
hi...cool update..nw both have agreed for d marriage...hope dis ritesh doesnt create problems... waiting to c hw taani and anurag get to knw more of each other...
Edited by Nikita_David - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
lol laughed a lot for the 'ANGRY YOUNG MAN' titleπŸ˜†
hmm looks like rithesh's planning has already started
waiting for more



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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
u tuk so lng to update the next part 😲,i ws waitin for ur pm frm past 2-3 days cos i wanted to read tat buk of onu ...............πŸ˜‰
gud work β­οΈπŸ‘πŸΌ,waitin to read more 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
hi bunty girl,

ohhh i hate ritesh big time.... be it da show or ffsπŸ˜†πŸ˜† just make sure he dies soon hahaa..
nice update lil sis.... as usual i love our anurag & robbie

update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
nice update. ANGRY YOUNG MAN. GUDGUD
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