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Posted: 13 years ago
gr8.missed ur FF.update ASAP.lukin interesting
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: taanufanvartika

First to comment. Indescribable ch. And I am sure everyone missed your FF.

Fabulous chapter di. Missed your FF a lot. 😊
The precap is looking interesting. And this time continue soon...🤗


thank u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nikita_David

hi dear missed ur ff..awesome update...d precap sounds interesting..update soon


thank u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
di nice chapter.hmm children?????????? feeling something good is comming .
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anahita.taanu

grrr drisya u didnt even send me a PM!

nd finally after soo much of begging nd requesting nd ordering u updated!
nd de chap was super cute!
aww just luved de way anu remebered taani.. it was saad!
sooo plsss upd de next chap soon really soon pehle hee badade ek date!
nd its necesaary 2 upd on dat day..understood! i really missed ur ff!
nd really happy fr de upd!
upd ASAP! nd plls PM kar diyo!


thnx...i'll try to update soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hii all
herez the nxt update



The children opened their eyes and looked at him.They stood in confusion looking at eachother.
The little boy come more nearer to Anurag and touched his beard as Anurag was knelt down and he looked at the boy.

Anurag:Kya hua...?
Li'l boy:Kuch nahi...
Anurag:Aap log akele kahan ja rahe the
Boy:Voh kulfi khane
Anurag:Aur aap logon ka ghar
Girl:Voh raha humara ghar

She pointed to house which was few distance away.

Anurag:Mein chot detha hoon aap logon ko
Boy:Nahi
Anurag:Bcause im stranger ...?

Boy and girl looked eachother

Anurag:Chalo hum ek dusre ko introduce karthe hain

The Lil boy:I'm Tanuj
The Lil Girl:Mein hoon Ragni
Anurag:Aur mein Anurag

He hugged the children.But that two names gave little ache to his heart.He left them.

Anurag:Aaplogon ko kulfi khana hain na mein ladoongi.Khadi pe baito
Tanuj:Front seat pe
Anurag:Haan baba
Ragni:Mein bhi baitoon
Anurag:Arre kyun nahi

He made to sit them in car.He took them to otherside where kulfi was and had kulfi.

Anurag:Ab chalen...
Ragni:Haan...

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In car

Anurag:Vaise tumlog LKG pad rahe hain na
Tanuj:No in first standard
Anurag:!st standard ...??
Ragni:Yes hum 1st std A mein pad rahe hain
Anurag:Ooohkkk..Aap dono...?!
Ragni:Hum twins hain lekin mein Tanu se 5 minute se badi hoon
Tanuj:Aur isko Rani
Anurag:Taani..!!😲
Ragni:Raniii...!!! aur maa mujhse pyaar karthe hain
Tanuj:Nahi mujhe...
Anurag:Baba ka ladla yah ladli..?

Both children looked eachother.
Anurag:Kya hua...? baba kisse zyada pyaar karthe hain..?
Ragni:Voh...
Tanuj:Yeh hain humara ghar

The car reached infront of their house.

Anurag:Mein chaltha hoon
Ragni:Aap ghar mein kyun nahi aathe...?
Anurag:Phir kabhi avoonga ab busy hoon
Tanuj:Aap hamesa busy hain na
Anurag:Kyun..?
Tanuj:Bas aise...

They got down from car and went into the house.Anurag leaved after they went inside.


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Robi and Smruthi in resort...

Smruthi on bed and Robi came from washroom.

Smruthi:Robi dada humare saath kyun nahi aaye
Robi:He has his own guest house here
Smruthi:Ither...?
Robi:Haan...

He sat on the bed.

Robi:Irada kya hain...mere bare mein kabhi kabhi socha karo
Smruthi:Robiii...!
...

KOLKATHA..

Ananya sitting on the bed in her bad room with Rithesh.

Ananya:Patha nahi Rithesh in che saalon mein Onu ko kya hua hain...?
Rithesh:Ananya please ...
Ananya:Uss ladki kya kya nahi kiya iss parivaar

Rithesh had nothing to tell.

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DELHI...

Rani and Tanu ran to kitchen.

Tanu:Nani...!!!!

Kalpna Sharma


Kalpna:Arre kahan gaye the tum log
Rani:Bas yehi toh the
Tanu:Aap bathayiye maa kahan hain..?
Kalpna:Kyun..?
Rani:Voh...kuch nahi
Tanu:Chal Rani

They ran out
While walikng...

Rani:Dekh Tanu maa ko math bathana ki bahar gaye the
Tanu:Kyun...?
Rani:Arre voh pareshan hojayenge aur kya..?
Tanu:Haan ... Arre mein toh water bottle car mein bhool gaya
Rani:Kya...?!
Tanu:Ab kya karenge..?

They climbed up the stairs.

...


They opened the door of room.there was sitting in a wheel chair facing to other side.

Rani:Maa...!!!

She turned and it was **TAANI**.The two children went and hugged her.

Taani:Kya masthi karke aaye hain..?
Rani:Voh maa...

Taani looked at both of them.

Tanu:Voh mein ne apni water bottle bhool aaya
Taani:Kya..?!!
Rani:Sorry maa
Taani:Kahan bhool aaye ho..?
Tanu:Car mein
Taani:Car mein...
Rani:Nahi School bus mein

Taani held Tanu's ear softly.

Taani:Masthi karke sab bhool gaya hain na
Rani:Nahi aaj iss ne koi masthi nahi ki
Taani:Phir...?

"Di chot do na":- A female voice came.

Taani:Tujhe nahi patha Meera yeh dono

Meera Sharma

Meera:Aap fikr mat karo mein monday ko driver poochloongi
Taani:Lekin..?
Meera:Aap chaliye kab takh yahan baitogey

She gave push so that Taani's wheel chair moved.


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Anurag reached his guest house.While getting out of the car he found a water bottle.

Anurag:Arre waterbottle toh iss mein chot ke chale gaye dono.Kal toh jana padega iss dene

Sweet memories that he spend with his children came to his mind.He grabbed the water vottle and went inside.

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Night has fallen... Taani and kids on the bed.Tanu truning to otherside busy with in sketching

Rani:Maa nanaji kal pakka ayenge
Taani:Haan
Tanu turned towards them.

Tanu:Maa I'm sorry
Taani:Waterbottle ko bhool jane keliye
Rani:Nahi aapse joot bolne keliye
Taani:Kaisa joot
Tanu:Voh mein apni waterbottle school bus mein nahi kisi ki car mein
Taani:Car mein..? Par kiski...? nanaji toh yahan hain hi nahi
Tanuj:Voh hum kal bathayenge ab bauhath neend aa raha hain
Taani:Lekin voh kaun hain yeh bina bathagey tumlog so nahi sakthe
Rani:Plzz maa..

She yowned went to sleep.

Taani:Kaun hoga voh...mujhe bakar tension de rahe bilkul apne baba par jo gaye hain dono

She also went to sleep

Precap:
Rani:Tanu baba agaya
Tanu:Kya..?!!
Rani:Haan chal ab
Edited by DIYA- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazin Drisya. OMG, Taani's got children? Is the dad Anu? Hope it is.

Update soon.

Nahi

xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
di confused
taani got child? ok confushion over
anurag is their dad haina?
nice update
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Posted: 13 years ago
😲 taani's chilren...nd i wonder who must be der dad
onu??? ohh god soo confusing
update soon plzz
its soo intersting luv it
superb update...vryy eager 2 know whose dad of d children
update soon plzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chalo Chalo/... So gr8 tat u updated...
And those kids are TaAnu's naa ??????/ I mean Taani would never marry anyone else...
And Ananya is soo rdamn rude... why cant Ritesh just tell her abt him... Ufff
And Anu's got to go to their house o give bottle ...
does this mean hell meeet Taani ?????
Di jaldi update karna this time...
Lovingit
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