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Posted: 14 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: anu008

the story concept looks really interesting!! plz update soon..and do add me da PM list


thnx......yh i'll update

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Posted: 14 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: bhagii10

nice waiting for the next part.

thank u...will b updated today

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Posted: 14 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: samrocking30

awesome concept
add me to ur pm list


thnx....oc i'll ad u to my pm list

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Posted: 14 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: kadds02

Heyy
Nice concept!
PM me when u update

-Kads

thank u......yh sure i'll

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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
The other characters.....





Other characters will be added later

Hi friend .....
Hope you all loved concept.

Here is the first chapter for you all


CHAPTER 01


Anurag climbed down the stairs and came into dinning hall where he sat to have his breakfast.All member of the family were present except Ritesh.

Neelu:Onu roti ek aur lena ..hon..

Anurag didn't tell anything to Neelu.Instead he was suppose to take a roti he saw Ritesh dragging a chair to take his seat.He immediately got up his seat and went to climb the stairs leaving his breakfast.

Ananya:Onu rukho wahan

She got up from seat and near to him.She turned him back by dragging his hand.

Ananya:Kya tum mujhe bathayega yeh sab kab tak chalega.

He kept looking at her without utter a word.

Ananya:Mein tumse kuch pooch rahi hoon Onu

He took away his hand from her holdings and climbed the stairs without answering her question.She turned to dinning table.

Ananya:Maa yeh sab kya hain.

Neelu:Onu ko jaane de aur tu yahan aake baito

Ananya:Lekin maa...

Shekhar:Tum yahan aake baito beta

She came take her seat and startng her breakfast.

Ananya:Yahan kahan ki insaaf hain voh aise karthe rahenge aur hum dekhthe rahenge.

Neelu:Aur hum joh uske saath kiya uska kya Ananya

Ananya shut her mouth when that question was asked by Nilanjana.Smruthi kept looking at Robindo with a questioned face.


.......*****.......

Nilanjana opened a closed door where she found Anurag sitting on a wooden easy chair closing his eyes.

Neelu:Onu...

He opened his eyes.

Neelu:Onu mein khana yahan lekar avoon


Anurag:Nahi maa mujhe bhook nahi hain

Neelu:Acha toh aaj lunch par kya chahiye tumhe

He got up from chair.

Anurag:Kuch bhi chalega

Neelu:Onu tum baba ke saath office nahi jaa raha hain

Anurag:Nahi...mein akele javoonga.

Nilanjna went out.


*****.........*****

Nilanjana went her room and sat on the bed.Shekhar casme and patch on
shuolder.

Nilanjana:Mujhse yeh sab dekha nahi jayega.Mere do bache apni zindagi ache se jee rahe hain aur Onu hain ki aapne aap ko zaza de raha hain.Voh zaza jo hume milne chahiye.

Shekhar:
Neelu agar hume humara Onu vapas milna toh Taani ko yahan aana hoga.

Neelu looked him.

Shekhar:Yeh muskil hi nahi namumkin hain

Neelu:Lekin kab Onu aisa....mein maa hoon uski.Mujhe fikr hothi hain

He sat beside her.

Shekhar:Mein jaantha hoon.

Someone knocked at the door.They looked to the door step.

Neelu:Smruthi tum..?

She wiped her tears.

Neelu:Andar aaja

She came inside and felt strange looking at them.

Smruthi:Sab teek toh hain na maa.
Neelu:Ha...sab teek hain.
Smruthi:Maa mein ek baath poochon

By the time Robindo came inside.

Robi:Smruthi zara aana voh meri file mil nahi raha hain.
Smruthi:Ha..aayi

She went along with him .
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On the way ....

Robi:Smruthi mujhe patha tum maa kya poochna chahthi ho


Smruthi:Kaisi insaan hain woh na kuch boltha na koi jawab dethe hain.

Robi:Bas Smruthi bina vajah jaan ke tum dada ke baare mein kuch math kehna.


Smruthi:Tum toh gussa hogaye
Robi:I'm sorry

They reached their room.

Smruthi:I was surprised to see him.Voh tumhare dada ho aur humare shaadi ke ek funtion bhi unhone attent nahi kiya.

Robi:Smruthi....

Smruthi:Aur toh aur mujhse kal hi patha chala tumhare ek dada bhi hain humare shaadi hokar do din ke baath

They both sat on bed.

Smruthi:
Tum mujhe kyun nahi bathaya how strange is this..?

Robi:Kya bathavo mein tumhe us insaan ke baare mein jisnee apni zindagi ke 6 saal sirf yaadon ke sahare jiya

Smruthi:Kya 6 saal...?

Robi:Yah fir ladki ki baare mein jisne sirf dada ke kushi keliye jiya.Kyun ki dada incomplete hain without her.

Smruthi:Toh yeh ek love stroy hain

Ahem***Ahem:-Anurag stood at doorstep of Rodindo's bedroom.

Rabi:Dada...

He went and hugged Anurag.Anurag leaving him went towards to Smruthi.She took blessing of Anurag.

Anurag: Dekho Smruthi mujhe nahi patha tumhe kya chahiye.Tum poore haq se mujhse kuch bhi pooch sakthi ho.Voh tumhe dedoonga.

Smruthi:Sach mein
Anurag:Sure

Smruthi:Pehle mujhse ek sawal ka jawab chahiye

Anurag:Ha..Poocho


Smruthi:Kya koi kisise ithna pyaar kar saktha hain ki uski tadoon mein jeene lagay

Anurag looked Robindo.

Robi:Smruthi...

Anurag:Iss keliye tumhe Taani ko jaanni hogi phir..

RINGGGG.....!!!:Anurag mobile rang.
He attented the call.

Anurag:Ha...voh mujhe dekhna padega
He hang off the phone.

Anurag:Smruthi tum mujhe zaroor batha dena ki tumhe kya chahiye ab mujhe jana hoga.

He went.Smruthi returned towards Robindo.

Smruthi:Ab yeh Taani kaun hain.
Robi:Taani voh ladki hain jisne aapne pyaar keliye jiya tha

Smruthi:Jiya tha mathlab...?


Robi:Smruthi Taani ke baare mein dada zyada yahan koi nahi jantha.Tumhe ek secret bathadoon dada ke paas ke book hain jis mein teri saari sawal ka jawab hain.

Smruthi:Sach mein...?!!


Robi:Lekin ek problem hain aaj thak voh book hum mein se kisi nahi pada"Teri Yadoon Mein"

Smruthi:Agar lekha hain toh padne kyun nahi detha

Robi:No more questions.Mein ja raha hoon very important meeting hain
Smruthi:Acha teek hain.


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In Ananya's room...Ananya taking shirt from closet for Ritesh.

Ananya:Uss Taani iss ghar ko badal ke ragh diya.Aur ek hain Anurag jisse ab abhi apni Taani ki chinda hain.Taani...Taani..Taani

Ritesh was quite without uttering a word.Ananya continued cursing Taani.

.....><><><.......

Smruthi went to Anurag's room.

Smruthi:Dada...
Anurag:Tu aagayi...toh bili tumhe kya chahiye
Smruthi:"Teri Yadoon Mein"

Anurag was almost shocked.

Anurag:Tujhe kaise patha

His eyes looked red it was unable predict that was his eyes the redness of anger or the sadness.

Smruthi:Mein voh janna chahthi hoon ki voh kaisi pyaaar hain jisne aapko ithni bebas kardiye yeh che saal aise jeene majboor .

Anurag:Bebas,Majboor you are misunderstood.Meri pyaar mujhe sukoon dethi mujhe himmath dethi hain.

She sat on bed.

Smruthi:Toh mujhe bhi janna hain uske baare mein.

He open a cupboard a book from it which is having the name
"Teri Yadoon mein"

Anurag:Yeh lo...mein apni hi kahani apne mooh kaise kahoon jab mein khud ko apni zindagi ki doshi maan rahi hoon

She felt strangeness in his word and whole picture was unclear to her.Anurag hand over the book to her.

Anurag:Mujhe nahi yeh padne keliye tere dil mereliye kya izad bachegi

Several question raised in her mind to ask Anurag but instead she thought of reading the book which was hand written.


Precap:
Smruthi was shocked to read the first line.

Smruthi:Kya Taani ...?OMG...!!!!

Pls do comment.......

Edited by Diya1991 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
sounds nice......waiting for the first chapter!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
do smruthi knows taani????
awesome part
thnx fro pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
amazing start
full of suspense
tere liye mein taani ki pyaar ki gehrayi pata chal rahi hai
n in this its anu's
eagerly waiting for the next update
do update soon
unlike this one which took u so long😉😆
plzzzzzzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
hey awesome update...continue asap and thanx for d pm..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
awesum👏⭐️ i feel lyk takin the bk frm tat smurthi n readin myself i wanna knw the love story of onu n tani❤️ ......update it asap.......n thnx for pmin me😊
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