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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi dear how r u i started to read ur story from starting daily but as i have was not active here from few days so read 6 chps in one go n i loved d plot very much suspense romance is increasing day by day n i must say u have very nyc imagination which u put in words i loved it
Do update soon n can u pm for d updates as i am not daily active here plzzz
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Guys as promised i updated one more but sorry couldn't pm anyone. I will definitely pm the next part when my exams are over.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome waiting for next part!
But please 1st concentrate on your studies!
All the best for exams!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing update. .
Enjoyed it
And all the best for ur exams ..rock them 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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That was amazing
finally we could know the story in kunjs point of view
All the best for ur exams
Edited by dafodilsduke - 7 years ago
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Part 32
hey guys i have got three days leave for the new year, feeling very bored sitting in front of books all the time. So took a break and thought to write a post. Tq shreya and komal di for your concern words. And thank you to those who liked my posts. And tq to duke for your appreciation. And thank you for silent readers. Let me start
Fb
Sarna mansion.
Kunj was sitting in the window railing of his room and started remebering his story.
In Amritsar
Sarna mansion
Usha...aaj koi gadbad nehi chaiye aaj sabkuch tktak hona chaiye. Pata haina aaj mera kunj ka bday hai. Aur mein kuch bhi nehi sunnugi.
Workers: jii mam sab
In kitchen
Be..aaj mere sher ka b day, aaj kaane mein koi kammi nehi chaiye.
In hall
Usha: aab jaldi se kam niptao sab. Kunj abhi athahi hoga.
Mahi.. Maa
Us... Haan meri kudi
Mahi.. Maa mein kya pehanu
Us.. Kuch bhi pehenle meri bachi, tu toh sabi mein sundar dikti hai.
Mah.. Maa batyena.
Us.. Oho acha tk. Tu voh pink wali dress haina usse pehenlo.
Mah... Tq ma, you are the best. She pecked usha cheek and went.
Usha.. Hey vaiguru mere dono bachhoko humesha kush rakna
A lavish room is shown and then a bed is shown, there our handsome hunk Kunj is sleeping by showing is naked back.
Us.. Kunj.. Ut jaa beta,
Ku.. Maa aaj mujhe sone dona
Us.. Nehi aaj tera janam din hai. Tujhe aaj jaldi utke gurudware jana hai aur orphanage jana hai. Yadh haina tujhe.
Ku. Hmm.. Hmmm
Us. Kya hmmm utt jaa putar.
Kunj slowly opened his eyes and there ,
All sarna family present happy birthday to you kunj.
Ku.. Thanku meri pyare pariwar.
After getting blessings from everyone kunj went to change his dress. He wore a t shirt and jeans looking handsome as always.
He greeted everyone and saw the decorations around his house
Ku.. M yeh sab karene ki kya zaroot hai
Usha.. Tujhe ek aur suprise hai. Vahan dekho tere papa ne teteliye kya laya hai.
Kunj turned and saw his favorite bike.
Ku.. Papa yeh aapne. Manohar just smiled.
Man.. Tujhe chaiye ta na. Aur meine tujhe mana kiya ta. Lekin aaj tu 18 sal ka hai. Tujhe joh chaiye voh milega.
Ku.. Tq papa you r the best. He hugged manohar.
Ma..yeh sab tere bhai yuvi ki vajese hai.
Yu ...aesa kuch nehi hai mera bhai.
Ma.. Tujhe pata yuvi ne hum sabse bohth ladai ki hai.
Ku.. Mujhe pata hai mere bhai sabse best hai.
Ma.. Aur haan kunj iss bike ko tu licence ke bina nehi chala sakta
Ku.. Tk papa. Mein iss bike ko pehle mandir leke pooja karti hoon.
Ma.. Tk.
Be.. Chal mere bacche gurudware hokar aao.
Ku.. Aur usse pehle mein aap sabko isme ek ride leke chala hoon. Pehle no bebe ki hai.
Us.. Nehi pehle mandir mein pooja karke tu humsabko leke jayega.
Be.. Haan bete teri maa tk kehrahi Hai
Ku.. Mujhe bhagvan se zyada aap log upar ho. Toh pehle aap sabko phir bhagvan ko.
Be.. Aur mein iss umar mein bike vike, mujhse nehi hoga
Ku.. Bebe ap iss ghar ka sabse badi aur sabse hot ho toh pehle aap, please bebe aaj aap muje mana nehi kar sakti.
Be.. Aacha tk.
Kunj made bebe sit.
All family members smiled and everyone sat in bike and got their rides. And kunj took the bike and went to gurudware.
He did tilak and aarti to his bike. He went to god and started praying.
Ku.. Hey bhagvan.,mujhr aaptak joh kuch bhi aapne diya uskeliye tq, mujhe pata hai aap mereliye aachi karaoege. Mein aaj 18 sal ka hoon. Mujhe nehi pata iss ke bath mere life kese badlegi. Lekin mujhe sirf aapki aashirwad aur pyar chaiye aur meri parwaar ko humesha Kush rakna. Aur... Mujhe aaj kuch aurbhi chaiye life mein. Voh kya haina, mera manzil, mujhe aaj mere manzil chaiye bhagvan. Agar usse nehi depayi toh bhi tk lekin mujhe sirf dikhado. Mein usse sirf dekhna aur mehsoos karna jati hoon. Suddenly he saw someone's eyes, kunj opened quickly and again closed it. He saw the same eyes again.
Ku.. Hey vaiguru yeh kya ishara hai. Mujhe samaj nehi ara. He returned home with a peaceful mind.
SARNA mansion: all the family members are there.
Yu.. Kya bhai gurudware mein koi mila hai kya.
Ku.. Nehi bhai aesi bath nehi hai.
Be.. Toh phir mere lad itni kush honr ki vaja
Ku.. Aap logo ka pyar. Agar mujhe koi bhi aese vesa hua toh aaplogo ko zaroor batoonga. Pehle aap anand bhaiya ki shadi ke baremein socho, mein sirf 18 sal ka hoon.
Manohar.. Haan iss ghar ka bada beta anand hai, toh bhaiya aap usskelye ladki doondna shuru kijiye. Anand just blushed and went from there.
Surjee. Yeh ladki ki tara kyu sharma raha hai. Everyone laughed.
Be.. Kunj puttar tune sham ki party ko sabse buladiya na
Ku.. Bebe.. Voh..
Us.. Voh kya haina bebe voh humere sath nehi apne dosto ke sath goa jara hai. Aur mujhe bhi kal hi pata ta.
Be.. Tune kyu yeh gal nehi bataya kunj.vese bhi tu toh aab bada hogaya hai, mein tujhe roku ki nehi. Jaa aur koob masti kar.
Us.. Bebe aese kese
Be.. Arre usha rani, tere kunj bada hogaya, usse bhi thoda voh kya kehte hain.. Haan privagy
Ma.. Bebe voh privacy hai.
Be.. Haan vahi. Jaa kunj.
Ku.. Tq bebe. Aap bebe nehi beb ho. He kissed her cheek and left to get ready.
Be.. Jalla
Before leaving house they had a small family party in house, he cut the cake and fed everyone, got blessings. And left to mumbai.
Airport.
Raj... Kunj kahan rehgay tu
Ku.. He hi fied with his friends and left goa. (Raj and amit were kunj friends)
Goa.
Am.. Pata hai kunj yahan sari jaga sirf ladkiyan hoti hai.
Ku.. Tu phir se shuru kardiya .abhi time kya hai.
Am.. Abhi sirf 8 bhaje hai.
Ra.. Tere b day katam hone mein sirf 4 ganta baccha hai.
Ku.. Haan yaar lets enjoy.
Thy left to the hotel kept their bags and came out. When they all came out there was a heavy sea breeze, kunj saw a girl running at a very high speed toward the road.
Ku.. Yeh ladki itni bhagar kyu jarahi hai, aur voh bhi sabko dhaka deke, agar itni jaldi hai kahi jane ki toh pehle hi ready hona chaiye ta. Yeh sari ladikiyaan ek jese hote hai. Apne makeup se zyada time chalihogi issiliye late hogaiya hoga. Uff they are impossible. They all came out from the hotel and saw a crowd of people watching something, he went forward and saw the same girl was saving a small child who is going to get hit from a lorry.
She saved the kid and got hurt.
Kunj ws so desperate to see her. First he saw her eyes. ,he dont know why that he felt some connection with those beautiful eyes. He remembered those eyes wre similar to which he saw in the morning then he saw her lips as some hair covered her face. The girl sided her hair and turned. Kunj saw her and his world stoped to him for a minute.
ADVANCE HAPPY NEW YEAR EVERYONE
Edited by Sosan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello guys hope you all enjoying my fan fic. A very happy new year to everyone who are reading my posts. Tq everyone without you all this can never happened
Edited by Sosan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 33
wow was the only word he could say.(guys you all know who it is). She took the child safely to the other side of the road.
Amit.. Yeh ladki bohth kamal hai.(raj was not there, he came back after atending a call)
Raj.. Kesa ladki
Ami.. Kuch nehi. Hum sab chalte hai.
Everbody left to beech. All the girls were drooling kunj but seems he was in deep thoughts.
Ra.. Kya hua kunj. He simply nodded in no and enjoyed with his friends. The friends enjoyed the whole n8 and returned to tge Amritsar.
Next day
Am.. Pata hai kunj mujhe tumse ek achi news kehna hai.
Ku.. Aur voh kya hai.
Am.. Humara college mein competition aya hai. And Guess what students were coming from various states.
Ku.. Ohh
Am.. Tu kis soch pad hai. Ek hafta hum enjoy karenge
Raj.. Guys i will be out of town for a week, I have to complete my Assignments so will catch you later.
Competition.
Kunj was seeing the decorations, when a heavy wind blew and his papers in hands were flying away. He was just taking his papers, when he saw a girl is struggling with her hair due to heavy blow.
A girl shouted twinkle. She turned and yes kunj stopped in that position, but not only him, his world stopped along for him.
Kunj could only mutter... Twinkle from his mouth .The completion started and he keep on starring twinkle.
The next day
Twinkle came and he went behind her and started following her. He went behind her and keep on starring her forgetting around.
Ami... Kya kunj tu kahan chala gyaa, humara college harahi, aur tu , humere college ki sari members tujhe dundh rahe hai. Aab agar aaj ki competition hum har gyai toh hum pure competition haar jayenge yaar.
Everyone shouted kunj but twinkle dint heard or noticed him and kunj also doesn't want her to see him.
Kunj and twinkle college keep on winning all the competition. Finally it was a dance and the dance will be done by the winning teams. It was cloth tied around the eyes of the people. Yes it was kunj and twinkle who danced but didn't twinkle dont know she was dancing with her prince charm. Tehy were dancing with very much that they dont felt uncomfortable.



After all the competition it was anounced that twinkle college as the winner.
Fb ends.
Kunj thinking.
Uske bath meine twinkle kibaremein sab kuch pata chala, voh kis college mrin hain, kis course padrahi hai, aur sab kuch. Mujhe pata chala voh goa va mein nehi balki mumbai mein hai. Voh goa kisi modrlling designs keliye ayiti. Uski ek ek detail ki barr mein collect ki hai maine. Aur phir mein apni family ko kass kar yuvi bhai ko jute bolke mumbai gayiti. Mein ek sal mumbai mein ta. Aur mumbai sirf twinkle keliye gayata takhi mrin uski aas pass raho. Pehle humeri mulakat tashan se hui ti, phir doti se aurphir usko mujhe pyar hogai ti. Voh mujhse bohth pyar karti hai. Aur mein usse abhi tak tk propose nehi kiya, mujhe na usse acche se propose karna hai, issiliye meine propse nehi ki hai. Mujhe pata hai ki meri twinkle kya pasand hai aur kya nehi isse liye usse baarish mein beeghne di, aur phir ek cliff ki pass leker gaya usko tandi hawa lene bohth pasand hai. Isseliye meine uskeliye voh sab tyar ki.


Meri twinkle haina bilkul bacchi ki tara hai, usko sirf apno ko kush karna pasand hai. Apno keliye jeena pasand, apno keliyekuch bhi karna pasand hai. Voh mere liye kuch bhi karsakti hai, voh muhje pyar jo karti hai. Mujhe yaad hai ki ek baar meine usko apni fav jaga leke gya, voh jaga issileye forest ki beech mein hai kyunki mein ek apneliye ek chota sa ghar set up kiya hai. Aur meri fav ghar sabse chota hai lekin sabse zyada mujhe kush rakhta hai, issiliye muje usse leker ane ka bohth dil kiya hai. (Guys if you could remember the small house where he made twinkle to visit on the way to agra). Mein twinkle ki har ek move ko enjoy karta hoon, uski bathe, uski dattei ,uski bachpana , uski galliyaan, most important iss she is perfect for me. Mein usse kabhi kabhi dekti hoon toh muje laga ki mujhe iss duniya sabsi koob surat ladki mili hai voh sirf surat se nehi balki uski dil bhi uski tara saaf hai. Meri twinkle sabsi best hai. Lekin mein uss din keh nehi paya ki mein usse kitna pyar kata hoon. Uski peeche koi vajah hai...

Very very sorry guys, for being late, my exams got over and I will try to post it regularly.
Edited by Sosan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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A very very nice update ...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Missed u very badly...
as usually nice update
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