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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
wow awesome updates dear
i just loved it
awww i felt bad for twinj why their classmates needs to mock at twinkle
may be riya will reveal twinkles past
hope both twinj fell in love soon i knew kunj is in love with her but i wanna twinkle also reciprocate the emotion.
plzzz do continue soon
and thanks for the pm dear๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
loved the update!
Poor Twinkle why need to mock her
love Twinj tho
cliff hanger noo!
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53
Amazing yaar

thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
awesome yaar


waiting 4 ur next
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
Amazing update .
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56
Amazing Update
Looking forward to the next part
Cont Soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: priyanvs

nice update dear

i think riya might say abt the proposal thing that twink proposed dhruv
and it is so beautiful dear
without speaking but understanding through the eyes
loved it


Thanks soo much ... this is something I have been trying to convey.. that they know what each other are feeling even without talking... thus the name heartbeats

thankss so much๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: kusharberry

wow awesome updates dear

i just loved it
awww i felt bad for twinj why their classmates needs to mock at twinkle
may be riya will reveal twinkles past
hope both twinj fell in love soon i knew kunj is in love with her but i wanna twinkle also reciprocate the emotion.
plzzz do continue soon
and thanks for the pm dear๐Ÿ˜ƒ


thanks for such a sweet comment.. I love when readers get involved in the story.. hehe yes yes reciprocating love will happen ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜‰ i assure u ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59
Thanks everyone for being so supportive and sweet๐Ÿ˜ณ


Part 7


" what about Twinkle? " I messaged Riya... I was a bit confused... How did she know Twinkle?

Then only I heard Chinki muttering about people hurting Twinkle she ran after her..

I also wanted to talk and I knew it was the worst idea but I just couldn't just sit and watch

When I came out of the class I saw Twinkle at the far end of corridor and it seemed like Chinki was wiping away her tears
My mouth felt dry suddenly.. I could feel her pain some how

I wanted to go and say sorry on behalf of my friends but now wasn't the time..
I decided to wait ...

...

"Hes not worth it Twinkle why are u even crying"
Chinki started wiping my tears
But what his friends had said had hurt me deeply and worse was not once Kunj tried to stop it
Why was I so stupid..?
I turned and saw him looking towards me I decided never ever to talk to him'
Maybe I was going extreme,,,maybe it was not his mistake ..

Oh there it goes your stupid heart reasoning every crap this guy does
The same what u did with Dhruv and u never realized he had started ignoring u the moment he started going out with Riya

"Riya is here Chinki"
Chinki's eyes widened she knew how desperate I had been for a new start and again the past was running back to me maybe it was a sign to stay away from Kunj
" Riya cant do u any harm dont worry" She said in a comforting tone..

Kunj was still looking towards me
"Chinki can we go??"
"yeah sure"

But then her cell started ringing

And in the meanwhile I started thinking what was I so scared off even if Riya told Kunj the truth..why should I bother I am just another game for him right ..

"Twinkle ...Sunny wants to meet..u konw I haven't been able to meet him since a week I am sorry..u go home straight away ok??"

Chinki was lucky to have found the love of her life
I decided to chuck away all my hearts feelings'..
Chinki left and I started walking away in the opposite direction away from Kunj away from this mess'

...
I saw her walk away towards the bike stand..and almost ran after her.. I couldn't let her go ''
I have to tell her sorry''

" Twinkle"
She didn't stop ..
" Twinkle please"

She stopped and turned
But didn't say a word'.
I caught up with her and looked into her eyes
But today there was more to her eyes apart from fear...there was sadness
I wanted to take away that pain I wanted to let her know that I wasn't playing with her

" I am sorry for what happened there ..I didn't know my friends would behave this way.. I am really sorry"
...

I was lost in his eyes...which spoke guilt and regret...even before he had said sorry.. somehow I had already forgiven him...
As if somewhere I knew it wasn't his fault...
I felt weak again
I felt I was falling again...in...

...

" how is your health,,,ummm are u eating properly...umm I mean after'u"
I hate myself mumbling..
...

I love when he mumbles and automatically a smile came across my face..my brain was angry with me..
Maybe I knew why..
But still I didn't want to accept it,,,
Suddenly all my anger I had 10 minutes ago got washed away
" thanks for asking.. I am fine! "
...
" so did u study for the medicine test ? "
" yeah I did'."
" u mean u completed all of it ??"
"yh I did why ?"
" wow...umm can u can u '"
"what??"

Her face looked puzzled and her eyes...I fell for them every time I laid eyes on them
" can u like teach me chapter 17 and 18? They are really tough" and I started mumbling again

I saw her expression change...
I knew I had gone too far... I felt like kicking myself...I shouldn't have asked her...gosh why do I ruin it always'..
...

"I m going to kill u Dhruv "
I screamed throwing books at him he hadn't studied a bit and now I had to teach him all day ..
Even though I loved to teach him...I hated him for being so irresponsible

And Dhruv came with his cute face
" Twinkle one last time plz"
...

She didn't speak for a long time as if she was lost somewhere''
" Twinkle''
...

I was gonna say nooo I didn't want myself repeating the mistakes I didn't want all to come again as once had been painful enough

Then only some guys passed by saying " oh see Kunj's new game ..what a behenji"
Those words hurt me and tears started welling up in my eyes again
I saw Kunj'sexpressions change

He turned and looked at them
He spoke in a very normal but firm voice'.

"stop passing comments"
"Ohhhooo Kunj's getting angry come on dude we are just joking'

" get lost from here''.. He raised his voice a bit

I saw his face going red.

I sensed a bigger fight...
But those guys had noticed the red face too'..
And they went away quickly


" I should go now sorry " Kunj said in a a voice which again spoke of guilt..
" don't u wanna study ???"
I looked at his surprised face
I started smiling ...

" yeah but" He was at loss of words
" there is a lot to cover...lets go ok?"
" we should go to local library..I don't want more comments"
He looked really happy... and as I looked at his eyes ...my heart skipped a beat again
...

And silently and unknowingly our first date began
I smiled to myself.. it was true I hadn't studies...but I also really wanted to spend time with her..
I saw her she was busy opening the books...I dnno how I was gonna study...I m just gonna stare at her

...

I sat beside him.. he drew the chair a bit away from me
I felt good..
He was a decent guy..
Somewhere it felt like a date
I laughed at myself.
I was so stupid...but then I immersed into studies...making him understand but whenever I lifted my head to see him..
The look on his face ...and I felt by heartbeat skip...

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Edited by griffy.fz - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60
aww such an awesome update. loved how this chapter really ended. it felt so good. very well done dear. loved it
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