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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 4


"Chupke se aaye teri yaad yahaan... Sirf main janoon tu hai kahan kahan
Hawa tum fiza tum meri raahaton ka pata tum
Mere aibon ko jo dhak de...wo paak si fiza tum"


I stood outside hearing his voice... he sounded great but for the first time I felt emotion is his voice
But I didn't want to think too much.. still I stayed till he finished the song...applause erupted in the class
Why had I walked out??...ughh I hated this ..
I wasn't clear about my feelings I had been so sure that after thinking about Dhruv and all my plans I would let go of all this and yet again I failed
But it was just the start ..
Somehow I saw him everywhere in the canteen in the hall way.. by the bike stand and now even in the library
What was happening ??? Was he following me around ?
Noh ..somehow I always reasoned my self that he wasn't following me.. I always saw some hot girl or the other.. and I thought he was trying to flirt with them and that's why he was there
And the worst thing was every time he was there my eyes met his...and the tingly feeling crept on me...
I wished it went away ...but...life had other plans for me
I was sitting in the library trying my best to concentrate
But I knew as usual my heart wasn't in it'every time I looked up... he was staring at me...
And then for the 1st time he smiled at me .
My eyes widened
What the hell is going on ????...
I looked down.. angry...gosh what's wrong with this guy ..and worst what's wrong with me .
Why do I have to look at him every two minutes ???

Gosh she got angry now why cant u stop staring at her
I just couldn't stop following her
I just couldn't stop thinking about her
I didn't want to approach her as I knew it would just make things worse

But I had this strong urge to know her
What was happening to me???

I heard thunder..
OH no rain..I better get going...
I took one last glance at her and got up...
Another day gone and still no answer...for any of the questions

...

Oh no Rain ..how will I get home.. I better leave right now
I got up.. and as usual my eyes met his... he was also leaving
Gosh what will I do now..
I heard the rain getting louder
I better get going
I took my bag and walked out of the library
...


She's also leaving now she will think I m following her
But I need to leave ..home is so far it will take time

I came outside the library.. and was surprised
The noise had not done justice to the intensity of rain

But that's not what surprised me..
I saw her staring outside at the rain and once or twice touching the water .
And across her face was a beautiful smile .
that was the first time ever I saw her smiling
She looked beautiful..

I stood there staring at her

She had not seen me yet...she was lost in the rain
Twinkle likes rain ..and I???? well I hated rain .
It was WET and Dirty

but when I saw how happy she was.. I too wanted to play in the rain with her.. stare at the rain with her...in fact dance in the rain.
Dance in the rain
with her
I was lost...in her
She turned to pick her bag and she saw me staring at her ...
Her smile faded...

She bent down immediately to pick her bag and her specs fell off
"Uff what the hell??" she sounded agitated..


Somewhere I hoped if I kept staring
She might try to talk to me..I know that was a stupid thought and most probably she would be thinking me as a creep.. but the fact was I just could not stop looking at her.. This was so not me.. but still

She started walking past me towards the other end...to be away from me.
But maybe rains happen to begin stories .to do what doesn't
happen generally .
And she slipped ...and well ...I caught her
She fit perfectly in my arms...
I stared at her..

at her Deep brown eyes..
Scared brown eyes..
My heartbeat skipped
And I got more than one answer that day

" I was ... yes I was falling in love"

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Thanks for your comments and supports..Hope you all like this part 😳
I am posting the next part tonight itself😳

thanks
griffy

Edited by griffy.fz - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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ohhh griffy tnx for PM and the story ws awesome plz continue soonπŸ˜ƒ
Edited by Phycho - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing update. Loved it.
Continue soon plz.
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Hey Sorry for commentin late..
I jus came across this one and read all the parts in go...
Awesome it ws.. I am it's very different. ..
I am liking it..
And the way u should Twinj separate monologues... too good..
BTW I al so liked the color combinations here..
Pink for Twinkle and Blue for Kunj..
Continue soon...
Tht boy is falling in Love,,❀️
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Again an amazing update!!! Loved it!!! Pls do update soon...
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nice update dear 😊
loved it

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Loved the update
Waiting for what will happen next
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#38

Originally posted by: 17.sonal

Hey Sorry for commentin late..

I jus came across this one and read all the parts in go...
Awesome it ws.. I am it's very different. ..
I am liking it..
And the way u should Twinj separate monologues... too good..
BTW I al so liked the color combinations here..
Pink for Twinkle and Blue for Kunj..
Continue soon...
Tht boy is falling in Love,,❀️


Aww thanks sooo much for a such a sweet comment 😳😳😳 hehe u noticed the color change?? πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ I am updating asap ...😳

Thanks again

Cheers

Griffy
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Phycho

ohhh griffy tnx for PM and the story ws awesome plz continue soonπŸ˜ƒ


aww your most welcome!! thanks a lot 😳

Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry

awesome update again
loved it


Thankss a lot... you have been such a loyal reader 😳

Originally posted by: hailly

Amazing update. Loved it.
Continue soon plz.


Thanks soo much πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: papu24011999

Again an amazing update!!! Loved it!!! Pls do update soon...


Awww thanks a lot for staying on πŸ˜ƒ

Thanks soo much


ThankssπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: priyanvs

nice update dear 😊

loved it
Thankss a lot



Thanks so much😳

Originally posted by: Duumps

Loved the update
Waiting for what will happen next



Thanks a lot everyone.. 😳😳 Your comments mean a lot to me..πŸ˜ƒ

Cheers

Griffy


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Part 5


Why cant he stop staring at me..I better go away from here...
Oh no... I am gonna fall but then his strong arms caught me..
To some other girl it would be the moment to fall in love.
Somewhere it did affect me too..how much ever I denied...but it also brought back memories memories I had shut away..

" Dhruv I m going to get mamma"
I started running towards the stairs and I slipped ..and fell in his arms ..oh yes that was the moment I fell for Dhruv.. then my best friend

Tears started coming towards my eyes..
I immediately got up...and withdrew my self from Kunj
No it wasn't happening again...
I wanted to say something
But I had too much to say and too little courage...

...
Oh no shes going to cry..did I hurt her??..
She withdrew from my grasp.
She looked as if she wanted to tell something but couldn't
The wind was blowing ..
her hair was falling on her face..
And Automatically my hand reached out .
But she took a step backward ..
And I felt pain ...it wasn't just a step backward it meant she didn't feel the same
And before words could escape my mouth...she ran ..towards the bike stand..
And with in few minutes ..she was gone and this beautiful moment became a memory
I had never felt this way...never felt that I could understand someone so much even when she hadn't shared a word with me
Somewhere I felt she had fallen for me too but somewhere I knew she was scared to admit it
Somewhere she did understand my feelings and somewhere she just denied hers

My heartbeats told me...that a lot had changed...in just few moments..
I felt weak...weak...just because of a girl and well that was the first time ever..
.
and A voice in my head whispered to me that ..
"This was just a start ...this moment was just the beginning''
...


Its raining so hard how will I get home??
" I will drop u na'..lets finish this game 1st "
" but Dhruv "
" comeon Twinkle...shut up and come back...forget about the rain we need to complete this level"

I looked at the rain and then I looked at him
Gosh I had fallen for him and he had no idea about it..and I just loved being dependent on him...
So what if he had a girlfriend I m sure he will forget Riya.. They have been going out only since last month...

I looked at him..and decided I should tell him soon ...because it was getting tougher to be with him and see him with her ..
I was so sure that he also had hidden feelings for me which he hadn't yet realized'
...
So many assumptions...so many dreams...so many questions...and at the end I got what???
Nothing!!
When u love someone u think he will be yours in every possible way...
And when the curtain falls the truth is out it was pure fake show and none of the possibilities could be true..
He did love Riya they were still together I think ..
And still somehow those days I had reasoned to my brain...no...he loved me... even after repeated warnings...

I stared at the rain ..I remember I had started hating it...because one of these nights only he had left me..But today..I felt like playing in the rain...
I was going back to old me...

Was it because of him???
No ..I don't want to believe that
Kunj was just like Dhruv and such guys end up with girls like Riya not with girls like me...
...
(Next Day)

I was walking back from the library and it started raining again...so I stood new near the stairs...

" where have u been??? And why weren't u picking your cell??"
That voice was similar...I had heard it
I turned and saw at the corner a girl hugging ...oh no
"Kunj Sarna"
I could not figure out her from behind...but her voice was echoing in my mind...and I felt my heart drop to to my stomach.. what was going on? Why did I feel bad???
" oh Riya ..I am so sorry!!!"
And my eyes widened
...

Thanks again for your continued comments and likes...
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Thanks
Griffy

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