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Posted: 8 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: kabirslover

omggg im so excited to read moreee


Thanksss! updating it right away 😳

Originally posted by: hailly

Amazing update loved it.
Twinkle and Kunj are attracted to each otherother. Do continue soon plz.
Thanks for pm.


Hehe yeah they are 😃..your most welcome

Thanks for commenting😳

Thankss soo much 😛

Originally posted by: 3dancelover

It was wonderful

And the last sentences! They both are feeling something yay!
Continue soon!


Hehe everyone's soo happy about them liking each other... cant wait topost the next part and see comments of you all


Thanks a lot 😳

Originally posted by: priyanvs

nice update dear

loved it
both r attracted to each other nice
continue soon 😊


Thankss so much... and thanks for staying on😳

Originally posted by: kusharberry

wow amazing update dear

i just loved it
both kunj and twinkle are attracted towards each other
plzzz do continue soon
and thanks for the pm dear😃


hehe like I said wait till you read the next update ...so happy to get such sweet comments😳

Thankss soo much everyone... its really heartwarming to see such sweet comments!
I am posting the next part and hope you all like it 😳

Love ya all

Griffy
Edited by griffy.fz - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: mahadev07

delicate and alluring update
their meeting was adorable...twinkle being blank and staring him...😳😳
kunj finding excuses to talk to her...uff😳😳...thanx for that i really wanted his view on twinkle
and he's been noticing her since first day😳...that was awsm
ignore feelings😆...impossible cuz twinkle is the one who he is attracted to..
twinkle stared at him and he saw that tooo...soo cute..i can imagine him smiling😳😳
last sentence was sooo good😛
i have a doubt...what did u mean by the line dr.ahem turning to dr.kunj sarna...??ahem is his original name??
cont sooon..lovin'it😃


That is soo soo sweet of you to give such a long comment.. means a lot to me and thanks sooo much 😳😳😳
The best compliment to a writer is that the other person imagining what I am trying to convey
so thanks a lot...😳😳

and as for your doubt ... I am sorry I did not put it up properly
He is going to be a doctor so he still cant use Dr. to his name so ahem is just a voice...so he is saying Dr. "Ahem" going to be Dr. Kunj Sarna

Hope that clears the doubt

Thanks again so much😳

Cheers

Griffy
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23

Thanks again for such awesome comments and likes..means a lot to me.. hope you all like this part 😳



Part 3


The water touched my feet..I looked at the silent sea just like me..
As if it too was lost in its thoughts..
This was a place that always gave me peace...but today it made me wonder that even though it was silent ... once or twice it did let its feelings out
So should I too???
No..!
The last three years had been perfect...I stayed out of trouble...I got decent marks...my parents have no complaints from me...yh perfect too perfect???

His face flashed in front of me ...oh not again.. I remember how stupidly I looked at him when he talked to me gosh how lame I was..
But yeah I was scared...too scared if he read my eyes...read what even I was scared to or admit to. scared that he might sense that when he looked at me...my heart beats were racing...
I didn't want to admit to it...

And then I remebered Dhruv.. Felt something like that even then...but I was stupid and immature...I remember he was my best friend and as usual like every 2nd girl who falls in love with their best guy friend.. I fell for him...
And when I finally told him... He felt bad...and rejected me..
Tears started flowing..
It wasn't like my heart was broken forever .. it is just I wasn't ready for love..
Obviously I was deeply hurt being let down by your so called love... Is a big thing..
And it changed me...I became unstable

I got year back in 12th grade 'shame on myself'

If love was so beautiful why does it make us fail in life?? A question I still seek answer for...Love is suppose to lift you up not drag you down to your worst form..

And that year I decided to be away from all this ..
I thought its best to leave all this behind me ..and start a life which had lesser people ...lesser number of people to hurt me .

The worst part of your so called 1st love is even though the memories of that special person fades the memories of the pain remains and it kind of gets engraved ...
And that's what happened to me...
But was this forever??? should I be a loner forever?

Oh why the hell was I thinking so much.. if my life is perfect shouldn't I just not think and go and study???.. then why a weird feeling was creeping ? .why was I feeling this tingly feeling again...and why where my heartbeats saying..this was different..

Love at first sight???
Then why did I remember every memory of him every time he played that song...teri yaadein...I remember being lost in his words why did all suddenly matter so much.. and behave as precious memories to me .

Maybe I was looking and not really seeing and today suddenly it all came crashing to me...but to name it love??? No no..it was a very strong word... Love is an emotion which is least understood...even by people who fall in it .

Maybe I should let things flow like the sea .. I had controlled my life and yet today it was controlling me again and as if it was whispering to my ear " I let you do it "
...


"heard you went to the library ???all ok dude????"
I laughed when I heard Rahul saying this

" dude I wanna study too"

"oh finally in 4th year you have decided to take medical seriously...college stud what's wrong???"

"medical is the only field where the collg stud is not the topper...and I think I should change that"

Rahul looked at me as is he was going to puke..

I laughed.
And again started playing the guitar ...
But couldn't think of a song
Something was changing ...her scared eyes. her scared brown eyes . What were they trying to tell me? and I turned and she walked in the class as if my heart knew she was gonna come..
She lifted her head and scanned the class
Her gaze rested on me...for a little while...she lowered her head...and walked out...
Just ..Curiosity????? Or something more...and suddenly i started singing...

"Chupke se aaye teri yaad yahaan'. Sirf main janoon tu hai kahan kahan"

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Hope you all like it...Posting the next part very soon

Cheers

Griffy

Edited by griffy.fz - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
Nice update!!! Cute!! Loved it!!!
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Loved the update
awesome story
Do continue soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
Amazing update. Loved it.
Continue soon plz.
Thanks for pm.
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nice update dear
loved it 😃
pls do continue soon
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awesome update dear
just loved it
awww poor twinkle is afraid of love
plzzz do continue soon
and thanks for the pm dear😃
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Amazing Updates Griffy
Looking forward to the next part
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Originally posted by: .Ragini.

Loved the update

awesome story
Do continue soon


Originally posted by: hailly

Amazing update. Loved it.
Continue soon plz.
Thanks for pm.


Originally posted by: priyanvs

nice update dear

loved it 😃
pls do continue soon


Originally posted by: kusharberry

awesome update dear

just loved it
awww poor twinkle is afraid of love
plzzz do continue soon
and thanks for the pm dear😃



Originally posted by: 3dancelover

Awesome update!

Continue soon!


Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Amazing Updates Griffy

Looking forward to the next part


Thank you sooo much for such wonderful comments... I really didnt think I would get such good response..because the story has totally different background.. Thanks for the encouragement.. means a lot 😳😳🤗🤗

Love ya all

Griffy
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