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Amazing update dear. Loved it.
Continue soon plz.
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Excellent stuff. Can't wait for part 2👍🏼
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Amazing work..new concept. ..very different one...loved it...and do update soon...
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Thanks soo much for such wonderful comments and showing so much support... means a lot..I thought I will post the next part now itself.. hope you all like it... Thanks again 😳




Part 2

Excuse ?? Excuse???
Oh god give me an excuse to talk to that girl !!!!
An idea struck the awesome mind of Dr ahem going to be Dr Kunj Manohar Sarna

I got up looked at the girl across the hall of library.. who had just stared at me
And walked towards her.
I felt weird ...very weird...this wasn't me...but still I walked towards her
" Excuse me"
she looked up ...I thought she would have an irritated expression but it seemed to be blank but somehow to me spoke a million words ..
I ignored this thought
The basic instant of every guy.. "ignore feelings"

" umm I was wondering whether we have a test on Tuesday or not actually I just came from a holiday and all others are coming tonight from the tour no one has a clue.."
And for the first time I was blabbering...a guy who made girls blabber
She still seemed blank but somehow I could see the fear in her eyes
Maybe I was scaring her...I hesitated
" umm so?? Test there??"

" No...umm'"
But she stopped as if something was stopping her from speaking..
It was the 1st time I ever heard her voice..

I said 'thanxx a lot'
I waited for a reply bt didn't get and finally turned and walked back

Yh It wasn't the perfect meet...
Who knew...that my life was no more going to be perfect...
I turned again and looked at her'.

Why did I talk to her ???
Dr Kunj Manohar Sarna ... who everyone dies to talk to ...who is the heart throb of this college wanted to talk to her someone considered as a loner by others?

Oh yes that was the reason...she was the loner... exact opposite to me...and yet I felt she was like me in a weird way?

I had been noticing her since the 1st day of college quiet keeping to herself...but her eyes as if wanted to belong to the crowd.. As if she was scared of something...

She did have frienz yet I felt she had isolated herself...
Why was I thinking so much about her????

No no...it wasn't attraction ...at least not now and nor was the simplicity factor which is so overrated these days...hot guy simple girl meant to be each other ..love is much more than this
Right now...it was more of a curiosity

Because questions never stopped erupting and I couldn't get even one answer to them.. My head was swarming with every kind of question and assumption


I walked out of the library and I saw from the corner she was looking at me

A smile crept on my face...Something was happening for sure and it was definitely not just on my side...

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Do comment and like people... means a lot to me 😳

Thanks

Griffy


Edited by griffy.fz - 8 years ago
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omggg im so excited to read moreee
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Amazing update loved it.
Twinkle and Kunj are attracted to each otherother. Do continue soon plz.
Thanks for pm.
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It was wonderful
And the last sentences! They both are feeling something yay!
Continue soon!
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nice update dear
loved it
both r attracted to each other nice
continue soon 😊
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wow amazing update dear
i just loved it
both kunj and twinkle are attracted towards each other
plzzz do continue soon
and thanks for the pm dear😃
Edited by kusharberry - 8 years ago
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delicate and alluring update
their meeting was adorable...twinkle being blank and staring him...😳😳
kunj finding excuses to talk to her...uff😳😳...thanx for that i really wanted his view on twinkle
and he's been noticing her since first day😳...that was awsm
ignore feelings😆...impossible cuz twinkle is the one who he is attracted to..
twinkle stared at him and he saw that tooo...soo cute..i can imagine him smiling😳😳
last sentence was sooo good😛
i have a doubt...what did u mean by the line dr.ahem turning to dr.kunj sarna...??ahem is his original name??
cont sooon..lovin'it😃
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