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Vindhya Mounika Patnaik

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: easha4539
What change behna?
Another sug-
We oculd make Sakshi abandoned by parents cause of getting fairy blood in vein. Raised by her grandmother who tried hard to make her a perfect fairy. Her grandmother knew she is immortal an will have eternal youth so she always try to find a match for her in supernatural races.

Let her be Orphan.. Yeah we can have a flashback you said and she always under surveillance of her grandmother, but she is ignorant of that, as she is also ignorant of her fairy powers.. I will try to update changed story, today...

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Maham

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Posted: 10 years ago

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And VM thanx 4 character sketch m intrested in Arjun-arohi but mai ne show ni dakha but search karun ge then apna opinion doun ge and guys tum sub pm pe discus karty hu 2 mujay kaise samaj aye ga kea n kaisi story hai kahan aur kis se start ho ge koun kare ga etc

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EshaalYousufzai

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: VindhyaMounika

Let her be Orphan.. Yeah we can have a flashback you said and she always under surveillance of her grandmother, but she is ignorant of that, as she is also ignorant of her fairy powers.. I will try to update changed story, today...

Ignorant of being fairy (pouting)

Ok.

Update the changed story soon.

Waiting..

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shymali

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Posted: 10 years ago

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What if we do ACP Arjun as protector of our fairy Sakshi, but he also dont know about his importance 😆 it was just a thought

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EshaalYousufzai

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: VindhyaMounika

Let her be Orphan.. Yeah we can have a flashback you said and she always under surveillance of her grandmother, but she is ignorant of that, as she is also ignorant of her fairy powers.. I will try to update changed story, today...

She is orphan-deal

She doesn't know about her fairy grandmother- deal

Meri pyari behna shona mayna can we keep at least three knowledge in her?

1. She's a fairy so can fly.

2. Her immortality

4. She can't lie. Means lie doesn't come out from her mouth. No matter how hard she try..

Plz. Tujhe na main 100 dairy milk dungi.

She won't know about her super fairy powers. She won't know about other supernatural races. As she didn't have anyone to guide her. But plz can't we keep this three knowledge plz!!!!!!

Edited by easha4539 - 10 years ago

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Vindhya Mounika Patnaik

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Ok friends... there is change in plot for much better... It is not complete... Like its just an idea to be extended by u people...

Story:

Story is set up in Dras with all these pairs. All girls are Orphans with there own flashback. Which they will gradually learn with there life. They will meet there soul mates. Some guys are supernatural. But other boys will have there own talents.

Immortals story may start here...

Indo-Pakistan war 1947, Zoji la was seized by Pakistan raiders in 1948 in their campaign to capture Ladakh. The pass was captured by Indian forces on 1 November in a daring assault codenamed Operation Bison, which achieved success primiarily due to the surprise use o tanks. Many Indian soldiers lost their lives. So friends, we can take some of our immortal characters from there. We can also take other immortals from basis of people, like from Mayor, Business and other official backgrounds of past. Others will be normal. They will be against immortals, but start believing that they can be good and normal. As story proceeds there life changes as they face challenges.

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EshaalYousufzai

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Errr behna u lost me.

I can't understand what u r trying to say.

Plz elaborate.

Edited by easha4539 - 10 years ago

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Vindhya Mounika Patnaik

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Friends.. Track of Arjun and Sakshi is developed as suggested by Eeasha and Sara... Bold black thing is suggested by me. We can take this abundance track in some Witch character.

Track Of Arjun and Sakshi (EDITED)

Sakshi is 24 year, chirpy, bubbly girl. Innocence signifies her beauty and attract's all goods. She love to help others. She is working as Intern reporter in Prasar Bharati (PB), Fotu La from 6 months. PB opens his reporting branch in Dras. Sakshi requests to transfer her, because all her friends decide to shift there. Sakshi's parents left her as an Orphan in this world, as the reason of having fairy blood in her vein. (Sakshi's mother lost life giving birth to her. Her father was dead in some accident.) Her grandmother took care of her. She was under her surveillance, but Sakshi is ignorant of her presence in her life. Sakshi is ignorant of her powers as fairy but always got a strange feeling inside her. There are wings printed on her back. They were present from her birth. But they are been visible from her age 18. She started sensing her attraction towards bells. She cannot lie from childhood. She will gradually find her powers with weird happenings with her.

Arjun is 26 years bureaucrat, working as ACP in Leh. Arjun is haunted by unknown dreams of saving a lady from the world. He is guided to Dras from Leh. As an efficient and effective Cop, he continued his duty in Dras. He is ACP of Dras and Sameer is his friend and Chief of SCDD (Special Civil Defence in Dras). Arjun is fairy protector, sent to protect her. He is god's gift to soil. Arjun is ignorant of his duty but is always guided by god on his way to perform duty. He is cop with powers. He is left with tattoo on his hand 'Arjun' with small fairy wings printed on either ends of his name, on church steps. Church father took care of him. Church father acknowledged him as his responsibilities indirectly.

Fairy's have powers. They are sensible to iron. They use bells for protection. Any type of bells. (Because there is no specific bells given. We can use all types of bells in story, like hanging bells at windows, Christmas bells, DDLJ bells) They cannot lie.

P.s : I wanted to make Arjun werewolf, but what do u people think..??? Can werewolf be sent as fairy protector...?? Or he is werewolf but protect fairy, with no intervention of god. Then there will be no church father and tattoo on his hand as Arjun with small wings printed on both the ends of his name.

Memeber responsible for Arakshi - Easha

Edited by VindhyaMounika - 10 years ago

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Vindhya Mounika Patnaik

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: easha4539
Errr behna u lost me.
I can't understand what u r trying to say.
Plz elaborate.

Simple...

How did boys become immortals..??? like Vampires and werewolves..

Werewolves, we can treat as running from family.. But Vampires... Some people who lost there life in the Indo-Pak war which was fought in Zojila, mountain pass 1947 were converted into vampires. When they (Who ever Vampire is) taking there last breathe is converted into Vampires by Vampires...

Girls will have there own flashback with there own powers. We will decide it later...

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EshaalYousufzai

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Ok. So Arjun will be a cop?

Like in serial?

Will he be a werewolf with mark of protector?

And what about Sakshi?

Will she be a crime investigator journalist or a student?

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