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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Nyna, I just realised the change of title.. (pretty immersed in the tale :-D)

Can you please add thelink to Index for Book 2 to the index on Page 1? Will help to move from book 1 to book 2 easily.


I am on that job, but that needs multiple windows to be open and I can do it only when my nephew is not around. He has learnt the button to shut down the laptop, simply comes over, pushes it and forces the laptop lid down. πŸ˜†
I also lost a few paras that I typed.😭😭
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Nynaeve


I am on that job, but that needs multiple windows to be open and I can do it only when my nephew is not around. He has learnt the button to shut down the laptop, simply comes over, pushes it and forces the laptop lid down. πŸ˜†
I also lost a few paras that I typed.😭😭


Ayyo... the kids are really smart these days πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

I understand the pain of it. I am sure you will have it sorted soon.
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Posted: 6 years ago
As promised the balance of the update - Part 2 ( C).

The final part of this chapter should be up over the weekend. Give me a few hours break and I shall get back to the comments.

Nyna
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Posted: 6 years ago
Finally, finally, finally!!!!
Wait, I need to do my happy dance first. πŸ₯³

Okay, now coming to the story, I just finished reading upto your latest update today. The gripping tale it was! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘x1000 is not enough to appreciate the effort that went into this chronicle.

One comment is doing injustice, so I am going back to Chapter 8 and drop comments one by one from my laptop. There were a few gems I must pick out and celebrate.


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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Finally, finally, finally!!!!

Wait, I need to do my happy dance first. πŸ₯³

Okay, now coming to the story, I just finished reading upto your latest update today. The gripping tale it was! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘x1000 is not enough to appreciate the effort that went into this chronicle.

One comment is doing injustice, so I am going back to Chapter 8 and drop comments one by one from my laptop. There were a few gems I must pick out and celebrate.



You deserve the applause, sweetheartπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘, I know I write pages and pages,
the thought of re reading book 1 for editing is daunting to say the least.

But then I love you for reading it.πŸ€— And for your comments I am:


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Posted: 6 years ago
People often claim to hunger for truth, but seldom like the taste when it's served up.
George.R.R.Martin

Let's hope that it doesn't happen in Sanskar's caseπŸ˜• Truth be told, there's no escaping the pain/shock once he learns about the secrets kept safe although the decades, but his reactions are what I'm waiting for!

Loved the call between swaragini though swara couldn't get much info about sanskar, it's a relief to know that she didn't break her promise of keeping in contact.

Thanks for updating such a wonderful chapter!
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Posted: 6 years ago
Chapter 8.1

The quote is bang on! The house of cards that the MEPL was built on is coming undone slowly.

This is one such update and story, where I realise the potential Adarsh and Parineeta had. The show never utilised them well, but they are also overlooked in fanfictions. After reading this detailed account, I am starting to think that theirs was a pairing well complemented, though less complimented.

Sujata was not staying at Mihir Bhavan in the early days. So far, this information has not made an appearance in the story. My guess is that it had to do with RP's involvement in Sunil's murder and probably Sujata was accompanied by Ramprasad in her days away from Mihir Bhavan.

Another wild and a very sure guess: That girl at the bar was Swara. This I write with a hope that I be wrong and there's a twist in the tale as you would not leave answers in plain sight. If I am right, well, a reason to pop in the chocolate.

The theft was brilliant. Take the data but show no immediate repercussions.

The chat between AdRi was an interesting one. Again lost opportunity on screen.

"I don't want to hear you breathe" - ROFL moment!🀣 Sanskaar has a weird sense of humour that really comes out in some worst moments.

I come from the construction industry. So I could relate to Swara's frustration to search for the plans and documents. πŸ€”

Uttara's birthday was a nice addition, especially involving the orphanage kids. This Ripu is definitely bad news! I thought this when I read this chapter and what I felt about the realisation of it - I will leave it to the corresponding chapter.

A phrase that this tale is - a slow poison. It's a lot to take in, too much to leave behind, playing on the tongue as you get addicted to reading it.πŸ‘β­οΈ
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Posted: 6 years ago
Read both 2b and 2c there are thousand of things i want to aam aam but for that i have to read it again. Will read it in 4 day weekend and then bug you with questions.
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Posted: 6 years ago
I have missed out many updates ...But I am going to catch up on them
Done with 2A..It left me with so many questions .

I guess I need to do a re reading to link the things but what caught my attention was the file hidden by Sunil which Sudhir was checking in last fee paras ..

So something related to drugs and a ghastly event .Is this somehow related to one of girls mentioned in the very start of FM book 1 and Sunil was killed Bcos he was pursuing the case

And is it kumudini who spoke to Harsha over phone ?

Such a complex take nynu with so many details to fit in and yet you deliver it with so much ease .I wonder how you guys manage to weave such tales on intricate lines ..

And it gave me a thriller feel ..I am going to hop on to next chapters


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Posted: 6 years ago
Dear Nyna,

I read and reread all the parts of Ch-2 (with a gap of a week in between).. This is getting more and more intriguing. I think later on Swara and Ragini will turn out to be half sisters through their mother. This secret surrounding the Maheshwaris run much deeper and murkier.
I loved Uttara's outburst on Sanskar πŸ‘πŸΌ ... though I hoped Sanskar too to share his version with Uttara.

Amazing chapter. πŸ‘
Waiting for the next.
- Tia
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