Whoa ...Well I wanted a spot on of 50 ..But if we are gonna get an update soon. .I am ok with Pg 51 ๐
LoveLucky
Haha nyna...
Sorry being a little devil today and saying res already...Just saw the tittle change and jumped with excitement...Take care...RaziaP's liking all future updates I advance ๐ and one thing is for sure you are rocking the story so far and for that a million ๐ will not be enough...Okay bye...mum screaming ๐
Nynu๐คA quick read till teddy bear scene .. eyes giving up .. WIll be here tomorrow but just to let you know .. the knots are being tied ,some still left hanging in a skillful way .. and I liked sudhirs and ranjit's part equally offering readers details of kavita's case .It gave an better insight of possibilities of what might have happened.Swara and Sanskaar's scene .. I am so so loving this slow gentle journey of theirs and that teddy bear scene .. till I read .. it was touching jhanvi and swahaโค๏ธWill be back for more tomorrowLoveLucky
Dear Nyna,
Wow what a bang return with a update. Am happiee that u had updated and thus makes me think u r back(hope so).
This update shows how you are determined to write the"Forgotten memories " regardless off all odds. ๐ ๐.You got it absolutely right, I am back and am determined to complete this FM
Again leaving us in cliffhanger and curiosity. Swaras memory as gone for ayear still she doesn't remember anything making feel for her. Sanskar determined to find kavitha's murderer. But with no clue he his frustrated. Both swara and sanskar both started to like each other obliviously.It is a year and Swara does not seem to be recovering much of her memories but she has made peace with that fact. Sanskaar is frustrated for there are no clues to Kavita's murder and is also not sure about his feelings for Swara. Rather, he does not want to think about them for he wants to focus only on finding Kavita's killer. Swara, of course does not have such a reason so she will start falling in love (spoiler alert๐)
Sudhir and Ranjith talk explaining the possibilities was neatly penned and explained clearly. Sudhir is having a connection with Gadodia,Maheshwari and Roy. I think there is connection with these family with his fathers death.Does Sudhir's father have a connection, yes / no /maybe๐And I am relieved that you did not find their conversation boring, I felt it was needed for the twist (a small one) and the possibility of progress being made.
Swaras curiosity in all things and learning and trying to find herself is good. Sanskar understanding swara and patiently explaining and getting angry then apologising making their conversation interstiting. Waiting when swaras memory returning. Sanskars reaction findin the truth about swaha. The truth hidden beyond everyone and how its going to be revealed. Am curious. Hope"curiosity doesn't kill the cat". Waiting for next updateRegarding Swara's memory, I am still undecided whether it would return or not, let us see how the story writes itself. Sanskaar reaction, phased over Chapter 10 and 11๐and no, I love the curiosity, keep it alive๐ค
With love,
Divya :-)
Dear Tia,I might not write it out but then in case you have not already done so, do read Suku (@Sakura24) SS - Sailing the Styx. I cannot give away much of the suspense but...love,Nyna
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