Memory Chronicles (SwaSan FF) - Page 23

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Dear Aheli,</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Glad that you called it a twisty update (I am happy, so happy). And also to know that Kavita is liked here - that is exactly what I wanted her to be - she is one who was blessed with every joy and had to die the way she did.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Dr. Amar called Sanskaar for he one reason mainly, he did promise his mysterious caller that he would ensure that Swaha / Swara "dies" and he needed help which he would take from his friend. That is the only reason he called Sanskaar. Similarities between the cases is visible, right both were shot and found at the temple stairs.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Swaha / Swara and Kavi's families - not linked exactly and as to how she ends up trying to save Kavi - you will learn as she starts to remember or Harsha recovers and manages to recount his part in the story😉As to how Harsha got injured, that is his tale to tell (I know I am being mean😈)</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">But I will tell one thing, the person whom Amar calls, who gives instructions to "kill " Swara and the well wisher who informs Jahnavi are one and the same. And no it is not Sanskaar. Sanskaar as of now is as much a pawn as Swara, Kavita and Adarsh are.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Work is hectic and not much time to steal. Will update ASAP.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">love,</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Nyna</font>

Originally posted by: StarySKY

Dear Nyna ..

Sorry for the delay ..

After my MIA I had to go through 3 pages of PMs .. I read a lot during the last few days .. and remain is yours , Viji's and Lucky's .. almost ..

And it is now my turn to go MIA - still not back yet, but thought I will spare a few minutes to reply (It is a holiday for us and I still have to go to work😭😭)

Res .. I will read it right now ..

I will Un-Res after returning from work ..

Un-Res

Dear Nynu .. 🤗

What an splendid chapter .. I loved it ..

This story is getting interesting by every chapter ..

And I am very impressed with the way you used the medical terms and conditions .. though it is all familiar to me and in my work field .. I am sure I can't write it like that .. well done .. 👏

Those medical scenarios - took a significant amount of research and inputs from D P Lyle😆 but coming from you, it is a very high compliment indeed😳😳😳

Chapter 3 : Betwixt Life and Death ( love the banner )

I admit this the first time I know that Betwixt means between .😆. ( thanks for improving my English 😉 )

Betwixt is an old English term (no longer in use)

I can say .. the story start from this chapter ..

The chapter start with Sanskar .. talented Architect ( remind me with the research I am doing for my FF 😆)

Kavita phone call ..

Then she died in his arms .. 😭

I love this Kavita way more than the one in serial .. when he got carried in their memories together my heart broke with him .. he loved Kavita, but I think his love for Swara is way more potent as it is his true love .. but he lost a very close person .. hos best friend

So that how Swaha change to Swara .. Kavita last words " Swa .. " ..

The mysterious hitman who shot both Kavita and Swara .. did he shot Harsha too ..?

I am a little confused here ..

And how Harsha and Swaha/Swara got involved in kidnapping of Kavita ..?

And why Kavita ?! Who want her died and why ?!!

Dr.Bose ( oh we got the Bose too 😉) .. I thought he was a bad guy then " Kill her in papers " .. I thought it was Harsha .. to my surprise it was Sanskar ..

Keep her save to know what happened and why it happened to Kavita ..

But fortunately or unfortunately , she wake up with no memories ..

I am still wondering about the kind of relationship they share , that in the prologue .. are they in love or it is something else ?!

Dr. Sisodia the one treating Harsha .. and Harsha doesn't seems to be getting well ..

Jahanvi on other hand .. who is the well-wisher that know about Harsha and Swaha/Swara ?!

And she can't do anything .. except wait for the part of the plan ..

It give me a feel of a clash of 2 huge organizations .. ( you know like the one in the movies ) ..

First, when you said you love Kavita here, I am both relieved and very happy. As I mentioned in the foreword, I did make her very positive and even though she dies, she would continue to be remembered, so for me, it was imperative that she be accepted. I am now glad.

And yes, that is how, Swaha becomes Swara - more or less. Harsha and Swaha are not exactly involved in Kavita's kidnapping though it appears that they were involved in her death (not involved involved, just involved😉)

Harsha and Swaha & Kavita - shot by ????

The person who has Swaha "killed" and the well wisher are one and the same, and no - it is not Sanskaar. Amar Bose, well chapter 4 will let you know why I got the Bose in😉) needed someone to help him so he reached out to Sanskaar. As of now, Sanskaar is still unaware of the "conspiracy"

Harsha is suffering from a huge guilt / fear and fever - I will keep him alive, but it will be a long battle (if he recovers too soon, how would Swara get to stay close to Sanksaar?😉) Regarding the prologue - Swara is falling for him, he is not willing to admit to any such feelings, it will take him quite some time to let go of Kavita and move forward😭

Regarding clash of organisations - it would be, but in the background - I have to weave in SwaSan / Raglak and the other emotional threads too (I think I was a trifle ambitious when I took up this story and considering the heavy workload, I am terrified if I can do adequate justice)

Fantastic works as usual .. 👏

Waiting for next ..

****Sigh****will try for this weekend or over the next week - I have to go back and read the whole thing now😕

Love

Khushi

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Hey nyna...

Im super duper late...but very genuine reason i have..my bro got married on 30 dec ..was busy, with addition of newest member in family...but im back now...fully..was actually praying that u guys not update stories...or then i will lag behind...but few stories updated..thank God...

Brother's wedding must be fun, they usually are😊. And do not worry, I will still need some more days to update, too much work pressure, today is a holiday and we still have to work

Now coming to chappy 3...it was bestest...starting with sanky n his architecture experience..i must say commendable job..u wrote with such finese...i actually felt ur in architecture..it was marvellously penned.. n then whole story just changed.with one phone call...n we witness kavis death but that had to happen or else how we will get swasan..felt bad for her ...she appeared innocent n angel here...

Swaha..kavi n harsh got hurt by some man...luckily two survived.one with memory loss..other severely injured...n kavi died...kavi parent were devastated...there was an air of mystery holding story intact..making us curious n anxious...with loads of hows n why...

I have my few guesses...im not sure if im right...but i felt kavi must have heard something in last saturday ..held at her house..resulting in her kidnapping n death...u have mentioned laurie bakers style houses for ventilation...kavi must have witnessed something...she was going to tell sanky but got kidnapped...

Swaha having good heart knew about her where about n went to save her with her uncle harsh n got severly injured...sometimes i felt she will fake memory loss..but that possibility is fading away...n one who killed kavi ..i felt was shekhar..on dps instruction..but that very obvious...must be something different..

One thing more kavi was abducted for few weeks..why havent they killed her earlier..why waited so long..did she had something????or was abduction a bluff...??her death was accidental...wondering???

I have just made a new rule, if you are absolutely correct or totally wrong I shall not comment😆😆😆, where you are sort of right / wrong I will. So that should let you know where you are😉😉

Kavita is a very innocent and nice person here, a very helpful person as borne out by her friendship with both Sanskaar and Ragini. And if you sympathise with her, then the risk I took keeping her in the story is worth it.

Swara's memory loss is not fake - it is difficult to fake that, though as the story progresses, at different times, different characters would suspect the same.

Kavita was abducted and kept for almost two to three weeks - regarding your query, those would be answered once the story reaches its culmination (quite far off - I will most probably focus on SwaSan and Raglak now😆)

Now im desperate for next...nynu want swasan in next..loads of scenes...missing swasan...update soon..thank u for clearing doubt about chappy 2...

No issues, you have any more doubts do let me know. Will try to update soon.

Love u

Talia

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Hola Nyna dearest,

Look who is finally here.. Me... So sorry for being so late.. I don't have any reasonable excuse except I am really sorry for taking so long.. And while I regret not reading it sooner , the fact I only had two chapters to read is making me feel sad.. Since it had been quite some time I decided to read it from the prologue and it was an amazing story dear.. I just couldn't stop reading once I started and now I am like where is chapter 4..

I want to talk a lot about this FF.. So many interesting characters.. So many interesting facts.. I totally love this tale of yours dear.. I would love to say more but typing from mobile I so damn hard.. I will get back to my detailed comments ASAP.. Until then letting you know I loved it so much.. Do update soon

Love

Nita

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

OMG! Nynu sis with all the details u gave, it becoming more mysterious as well as intriguing. 😉 Can't wait to read it. 😛 Update soon. 😳

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Work still hectic, in fact have to go to office today also😭😭😭so not sure if I would be able to update over the weekend, but will try.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">love,</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Nyna</font>

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Nynu

So I land up finally ..Guess new year came for choomantar act for all of us😆 ..The place has become quite dead ..yet I come here bcos finally I have some time for myself I guess where I have lesiure to read all the updates ..though I have been sneaking in..I oew an proper comment to fics I love

So here I am

Chapter 3

I just love the sig you have created for it .. with life and death.I so so love the terrific combinations of black grey red white you have been using 👏.👏⭐️. It just hit me right out hence that takes the crown to start with.

Next Architecture and Sanskaar .. absolutely loved the background you have given to it and laced with passion Sanskaar has for lines and art.. it was spelndid to read .. and I can titally imagine Sanskaar as architect ..ok blame on you love for sunny .. he fits every role but young architect😉

Then comes Kavita .. lady I got to give you here. I didn't hate her infact I felt sad for her given my strong feelings for cavity ..Kavita here is lovable , a victim of circumstances .. Gosh! It was painful 😭but my treacherous heart ..Cant imagine Sanskaar being in love for her so I assume he like her ..had been childhood friends, a mutual likability, comfort which he felt it was love because he has not yet experience that strong soul connect which he would feel for Swara ..in future parts I guess .. Hence I keep my cards open on that part.

and the real hero .. whoa .. I love mystery elements you are weaving into tale .. very thrilling and good build of mystery to keep us hooked further. I don't want to strain with theories just sit back and want to watch tale unfold .. but yes I might come up with crazy ones ..once in a while.

and how to you guys manage to be accurate with timelines and dates fitting them into tale👏 I fail miserably there ..hence I love that aspect when you guys do that .⭐️⭐️

Ranted Ranted ..and yes I miss u guys and the forum .. hope we all will be back soon .. golden old days .. *sigh* Miss the fun

Love

Lucky