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Posted: 7 years ago
Oh my God
Kavita is dead..
Swara lost her memories..
And sanskar is in so much grief ...

Emotional

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Posted: 7 years ago
Dear Nyna ..
Sorry for the delay ..
After my MIA I had to go through 3 pages of PMs .. I read a lot during the last few days .. and remain is yours , Viji's and Lucky's .. almost ..

Res .. I will read it right now ..
I will Un-Res after returning from work ..

Un-Res

Dear Nynu .. πŸ€—

What an splendid chapter .. I loved it ..
This story is getting interesting by every chapter ..
And I am very impressed with the way you used the medical terms and conditions .. though it is all familiar to me and in my work field .. I am sure I can't write it like that .. well done .. πŸ‘

Chapter 3 : Betwixt Life and Death ( love the banner )
I admit this the first time I know that Betwixt means between .πŸ˜†. ( thanks for improving my English πŸ˜‰ )

I can say .. the story start from this chapter ..

The chapter start with Sanskar .. talented Architect ( remind me with the research I am doing for my FF πŸ˜†)
Kavita phone call ..
Then she died in his arms .. 😭
I love this Kavita way more than the one in serial .. when he got carried in their memories together my heart broke with him .. he loved Kavita, but I think his love for Swara is way more potent as it is his true love .. but he lost a very close person .. hos best friend

So that how Swaha change to Swara .. Kavita last words " Swa .. " ..

The mysterious hitman who shot both Kavita and Swara .. did he shot Harsha too ..?
I am a little confused here ..
And how Harsha and Swaha/Swara got involved in kidnapping of Kavita ..?
And why Kavita ?! Who want her died and why ?!!

Dr.Bose ( oh we got the Bose too πŸ˜‰) .. I thought he was a bad guy then " Kill her in papers " .. I thought it was Harsha .. to my surprise it was Sanskar ..
Keep her save to know what happened and why it happened to Kavita ..
But fortunately or unfortunately , she wake up with no memories ..
I am still wondering about the kind of relationship they share , that in the prologue .. are they in love or it is something else ?!

Dr. Sisodia the one treating Harsha .. and Harsha doesn't seems to be getting well ..

Jahanvi on other hand .. who is the well-wisher that know about Harsha and Swaha/Swara ?!
And she can't do anything .. except wait for the part of the plan ..

It give me a feel of a clash of 2 huge organizations .. ( you know like the one in the movies ) ..

Fantastic works as usual .. πŸ‘
Waiting for next ..

Love
Khushi
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Res Nyna dearest. 😳
Unresed. πŸ˜ƒ
Again a very twisty but interesting update. πŸ˜‰ I really liked the Kavi here and felt bad when she died. Sanskar was totally broken. Okk so the second girl who was attacked along with Kavi was Swaha/Swara right?? πŸ˜• And Dr. Bose got the case to treat both Kavi and Swaha/Swara where Kavi died but as Dr. Bose saw the similarities between both the cases so he called Sanskar to inform him about Swaha/Swara so that they can keep her safely and get clue about Kavi's murderers, right? πŸ˜• And that's how Swaha/Swara lost her memory. πŸ˜” And here Harsha also got injured, but how? And some 'well-wisher' who knows about both Harsha and Swaha/Swara's state informed it to Jhanvi. Siso I am li'l confused or u can say forgot that how Swaha/Swara's family and Kavi's family r linked that Swaha/Swara went to save Kavi?? Bhullakkar me! Plz remind me dear. 😳 Update soon dear. 😳 Thanks for the pm. πŸ˜ƒ
With love,
Aheli.



Dear Aheli,

Glad that you called it a twisty update (I am happy, so happy). And also to know that Kavita is liked here - that is exactly what I wanted her to be - she is one who was blessed with every joy and had to die the way she did.

Dr. Amar called Sanskaar for he one reason mainly, he did promise his mysterious caller that he would ensure that Swaha / Swara "dies" and he needed help which he would take from his friend. That is the only reason he called Sanskaar. Similarities between the cases is visible, right both were shot and found at the temple stairs.

Swaha / Swara and Kavi's families - not linked exactly and as to how she ends up trying to save Kavi - you will learn as she starts to remember or Harsha recovers and manages to recount his part in the storyπŸ˜‰ As to how Harsha got injured, that is his tale to tell (I know I am being mean😈)

But I will tell one thing, the person whom Amar calls, who gives instructions to "kill " Swara and the well wisher who informs Jahnavi are one and the same. And no it is not Sanskaar. Sanskaar as of now is as much a pawn as Swara, Kavita and Adarsh are.

Work is hectic and not much time to steal. Will update ASAP.

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: showrav24

Hello nyna dear
once again a interesting & beautiful update.
who is this shadow person who playing all games who kidnap kavita & want her dead.
& what swara/swaha & harsha doing with kavita.so swara lost her memory sanskar have only hope on her that she can give some clues may be now sanskar take her in his home for support & will expect her memory back & in the meantime they will start liking each other am I right.
now what is this janvi plan is she involve some secret mission I m blank confusion hi confusion hai salution sab nyna ke paas hai.
update soon dear
Bye
Take care


Dear Showrav,

The person who kidnaps and has Kavita killed will lay low for quite some more time, convinced that there is no danger of discovery. Swaha / Swara and Harsh doing with Kavita - we will learn as and when Swara remembers or Harsha recovers to tell the taleπŸ˜‰

Regarding Swara and Sanskaar - you got it bang on, though there will be a couple of twists further down the road.

Jahnavi and Harsha are /were in the plan together, it will slowly unfold as the story progresses. No secret mission - as in spies etc, more of a corporate espionage / takeovers, but the will be in the background.

Work quite hectic, will still try to update soon.

Take care,
Nyna
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

A wonderful update Nynu πŸ‘πŸ‘ As always from you, so much of background research seamlessly interwoven into the narrative---this time, on Sanskaar's talent and skill in architecture, the way he combined apparently contradictory elements into his own signature style. Dynamic, unique, cohesive and startlingly innovative. Much like the man himself. 😊

Sunny boy is indeed dynamic unique and startlingly innovative - and being an architect (I love this profession and am tired of writing him as a business man - the clever, ruthless kind - here he is the artistic type with a temperament to match).


The whole narrative about how Kavita and Sanskaar were the best of friends, and felt a deepening of the warm affection once their match was finalised...that was so well portrayed, so realistic. You have shown that affinity, the comfortable friendship very well indeed. This is Kavita as I would always like to see her...not the ridiculous zombie/ resurrected version the serial gave us. One who genuinely felt a considerable degree of affection for Sanskaar and who was held in like regard by him. A Love which was perhaps not as immense and potent as what he would later have with Swara, but nevertheless, a lovely emotion. I simply don't get why serials always have to run the 'first love' down to show the true love in better light. πŸ˜³πŸ˜• Sorry, digressed there, but the serial's resurrected Kavita track always irritated me. πŸ˜†


The serial's resurrected Kavita track was the start of the disenchantment for me - as you said, why must the true love always be made to be brighter and better because the first love was flawed? One can always move on from the first love, but then Indian Television serials need their vamps
Kavita here is his childhood friend, whom he holds in great affection and whom he would have grown to love, if fate had not cut short her life. It is only natural that he holds on to her memory with fondness, even when he finally falls in love with Swara.


So that's how Swaha got named Swara? Kavita's dying words, indicating her as 'Swa...', Sunny assumed it was Swara instead of Swaha?

More or lessπŸ˜†

That entire scene by the temple steps was beautifully portrayed. Sanskaar's anguish and shock as Kavi died in his arms; your simultaneous description about the mysterious assassin/marksman who had shot the girls, and then pushed the mangled car in which they had had the accident into the waters. He had shot Harsha as well? I presumed so, but wasn't a 100% sure since he did mention having used 2 bullets where one ought to have been sufficient. He had shot both the girls, accounting for 2 bullets, so who shot Harsha in the hip? Or did the killer mean that he anyway had shot Harsha, so instead of one bullet additional to dispatch Kavi, he had had to use one each on both the girls?

He shot only the girls, Harsha was shot by someone else, the hitman's boss.

Dr Bose...so here you brought in the Boses too. 😊 The person he speaks to...I initially thought he was involved with the 'enemy side', especially when the instruction to 'kill her' came. But then you mentioned the name, so this is Sunny, whom the doctor had confided about the same pattern of bullet and other injuries which had been found on Kavi? So Sunny wanted 'Swara' to be kept safe from the same fate that had been visited on Kavi
...BTW was there something else which alerted Dr Bose about Swara's case? He seemed to notice something uncanny/ unusual about the case, which prompted the call. Was it just the injuries she had? Or something else?


Yes, the Boses had to be brought in too😊 The person who Amar speaks to is not Sanskaar, Amar knows he needs help apart from the police support he gets so he tells that he will take Sanskaar's assistance. As of now, Sanskaar is as much a pawn as Swara. Amar called the unknown person because he had instructions to do so about any event connected to Maheswaris, as the patients were brought in by Sanskaar, he decided to call.


Harsha on the other hand, was slowly slipping into delirium, the fever and internal bleeding caused by the bullet to his hip, draining his life away. Wonder who that 'we'll wisher' was, who knew about his state as well as Swara's, and kept Jahnvi informed. Her part in the plan is yet to be played out, she thinks, steering herself despite the agony she feels.

The well wisher who keeps Jahnavi informed and the one whom Amar calls is one and the same - nothing more than that.

I have a doubt, since Harsha and Swaha/ Swara apparently had some local support on the ground, how did they allow themselves to get into the grips of whoever was responsible for Kavita's kidnap? Is there no material proof which Jahnavi could provide Sanskaar with? Or is it that she is now acting on Harsha's explicit wishes, that called for DP and the Maheshwari empire's annihilation...so she would not really want to ally with Sanskaar...


Well, that is the question Harsha is asking himself and would be asked, it was not a very well thought out action plan, more on the spur of the moment, how else would destiny play out its drama? Jahnavi is not interested in involving Sanskaar anymore than he would be. I know this is not clear but then I cannot tell anything more and further, the point above should shed some light.

Intriguing...fascinating...thrilling...exciting. 😊

And I am😳😳😳

Loads of Love

Viji


Dear Viji,

Finally got around to replying😳

loads of love,
Nyna
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Oh my God
Kavita is dead..
Swara lost her memories..
And sanskar is in so much grief ...

Emotional

Thanks


Dear Manisha,

Glad that you found the update emotional - yes, it is quite an emotionally charged chapter - Sanskaar is grieving and angry, Swara is bewildered and lost.

Best,
Nyna
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sneharay

Superb update.. πŸ‘


Thanks, Sneha
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Posted: 7 years ago
Dear Nyna,
Dropped in to say Hi...
Hope you are doing good.
I so miss being here
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Originally posted by: LoveToWrite

Dear Nyna,

Dropped in to say Hi...
Hope you are doing good.
I so miss being here


Dear Harshada,πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

So good to see you here. How is your health, hope you are keeping well. I missed you too, keep coming over.

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey nyna...
Im super duper late...but very genuine reason i have..my bro got married on 30 dec ..was busy, with addition of newest member in family...but im back now...fully..was actually praying that u guys not update stories...or then i will lag behind...but few stories updated..thank God...

Now coming to chappy 3...it was bestest...starting with sanky n his architecture experience..i must say commendable job..u wrote with such finese...i actually felt ur in architecture..it was marvellously penned.. n then whole story just changed.with one phone call...n we witness kavis death but that had to happen or else how we will get swasan..felt bad for her ...she appeared innocent n angel here...
Swaha..kavi n harsh got hurt by some man...luckily two survived.one with memory loss..other severely injured...n kavi died...kavi parent were devastated...there was an air of mystery holding story intact..making us curious n anxious...with loads of hows n why...

I have my few guesses...im not sure if im right...but i felt kavi must have heard something in last saturday ..held at her house..resulting in her kidnapping n death...u have mentioned laurie bakers style houses for ventilation...kavi must have witnessed something...she was going to tell sanky but got kidnapped...
Swaha having good heart knew about her where about n went to save her with her uncle harsh n got severly injured...sometimes i felt she will fake memory loss..but that possibility is fading away...n one who killed kavi ..i felt was shekhar..on dps instruction..but that very obvious...must be something different..

One thing more kavi was abducted for few weeks..why havent they killed her earlier..why waited so long..did she had something????or was abduction a bluff...??her death was accidental...wondering???

Now im desperate for next...nynu want swasan in next..loads of scenes...missing swasan...update soon..thank u for clearing doubt about chappy 2...

Love u
Talia
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