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Zephyr8

@Zephyr8

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Posted: 7 years ago

#201

Caught up with the story finally...Intriguing story. Waiting for the next update. Thank you for the PM.

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: iamreader
Nyna dearest,

Drastic changes happened in chapter 3, it was definitely a bumpy ride.. You got me with the detailed description of Sanskar's works as an architect, got me some memories of my late uncle.. He badly wanted me to be an architect and join his firm. He ignored his health during working on national building code, resulting in a very late diagnosis of lung cancer ...
I am so sorry to hear about you uncle, it is sad indeed that to read about that.

Coming to the plot, Kavita's death was cruel. I never wanted her to have this fate. Sanskar's guilt won't give him peace for not saving her, when he also loved her. Swara's memory is now blank paper barring some hazy lines... Where one story stops, another one gets started... We're getting Swasan's unusual story now!Swara will be her given name...

Kavita, quite a sad way to die. But she would be remembered. And yes, Sunny would never forget her nor forgive himself. Swara cannot remember, he cannot forget - they both need answers and solutions.

I'm wondering who wanted Kavita killed so badly! Waiting for next chapter.

That reason will not be out anytime soon - it is not a major conspiracy but that is what will make the act even more despicable.

Hey I'm the 1st one to comment... but my analysis was quite lousy... Got a bit carried away...

Yup, you are the first, and no it is not lousy - you got it correct - she cannot remember he cannot forget😊

Love,
Dyuti

Dear Dyuti,

Replied in blue above,

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: kritz4ever
Wow ur Tooo good

Thanks, Swetha😊

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: bhymi
Hi Nyna dear
It was a beautiful update, so many incidents had happened.Kavita was killed brutally and swara was also injured badly. I think swara must be the one who had helped kavita to escape and in the process she got injured badly but why should swara helped her? she is her enemy na. First i thought sanskar was the person who had talked to doctor but i was mistaken. I think janvi might be the person who talked to doctor.The story is getting more mysterious and i love this mystery.
Waiting for the next update.😊

Dear Gayatri,

Yes one day, and everyone's life turns upside down in a matter of a week. Kavita death was brutal, all the more for it appears to be quite senseless. Swara did go to help her (remember the last para of Chapter 1).

Swara and her father, both want revenge but would not allow the sacrifice of an innocent life for their revenge. But destiny had other plans, they could not prevent Kavita from dying and almost got killed themselves.

As to whom the doctor spoke to - keep guessing - I plan to keep in under wraps for quite some time. And I glad that you find the tale mysterious and are loving it.

Will try to update soon.

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: kojagorimalik
OK really a very twisty turny tight gripping enchanting tale u are spinning loved it...

Dear Moumita,

And that is quite a compliment - love you for that. I just hope I am able to maintain it.😳

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: Zephyr8
Caught up with the story finally...Intriguing story. Waiting for the next update. Thank you for the PM.

Dear Sagarika,

I am so thrilled to have you here. I will update as soon as possible😳

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: lucky.m
Res

Lucky 🤗

Will wait for your take😳

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#208

Res Nyna dearest. 😳
Unresed. 😃
Again a very twisty but interesting update. 😉 I really liked the Kavi here and felt bad when she died. Sanskar was totally broken. Okk so the second girl who was attacked along with Kavi was Swaha/Swara right?? 😕 And Dr. Bose got the case to treat both Kavi and Swaha/Swara where Kavi died but as Dr. Bose saw the similarities between both the cases so he called Sanskar to inform him about Swaha/Swara so that they can keep her safely and get clue about Kavi's murderers, right? 😕 And that's how Swaha/Swara lost her memory. 😔 And here Harsha also got injured, but how? And some 'well-wisher' who knows about both Harsha and Swaha/Swara's state informed it to Jhanvi. Siso I am li'l confused or u can say forgot that how Swaha/Swara's family and Kavi's family r linked that Swaha/Swara went to save Kavi?? Bhullakkar me! Plz remind me dear. 😳 Update soon dear. 😳 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 7 years ago

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showrav

@showrav24

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#209

Hello nyna dear
once again a interesting & beautiful update.
who is this shadow person who playing all games who kidnap kavita & want her dead.
& what swara/swaha & harsha doing with kavita.so swara lost her memory sanskar have only hope on her that she can give some clues may be now sanskar take her in his home for support & will expect her memory back & in the meantime they will start liking each other am I right.
now what is this janvi plan is she involve some secret mission I m blank confusion hi confusion hai salution sab nyna ke paas hai.
update soon dear
Bye
Take care

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#210

A wonderful update Nynu 👏👏 As always from you, so much of background research seamlessly interwoven into the narrative---this time, on Sanskaar's talent and skill in architecture, the way he combined apparently contradictory elements into his own signature style. Dynamic, unique, cohesive and startlingly innovative. Much like the man himself. 😊

The whole narrative about how Kavita and Sanskaar were the best of friends, and felt a deepening of the warm affection once their match was finalised...that was so well portrayed, so realistic. You have shown that affinity, the comfortable friendship very well indeed. This is Kavita as I would always like to see her...not the ridiculous zombie/ resurrected version the serial gave us. One who genuinely felt a considerable degree of affection for Sanskaar and who was held in like regard by him. A Love which was perhaps not as immense and potent as what he would later have with Swara, but nevertheless, a lovely emotion. I simply don't get why serials always have to run the 'first love' down to show the true love in better light. 😳😕 Sorry, digressed there, but the serial's resurrected Kavita track always irritated me. 😆

So that's how Swaha got named Swara? Kavita's dying words, indicating her as 'Swa...', Sunny assumed it was Swara instead of Swaha?

That entire scene by the temple steps was beautifully portrayed. Sanskaar's anguish and shock as Kavi died in his arms; your simultaneous description about the mysterious assassin/marksman who had shot the girls, and then pushed the mangled car in which they had had the accident into the waters. He had shot Harsha as well? I presumed so, but wasn't a 100% sure since he did mention having used 2 bullets where one ought to have been sufficient. He had shot both the girls, accounting for 2 bullets, so who shot Harsha in the hip? Or did the killer mean that he anyway had shot Harsha, so instead of one bullet additional to dispatch Kavi, he had had to use one each on both the girls?

Dr Bose...so here you brought in the Boses too. 😊 The person he speaks to...I initially thought he was involved with the 'enemy side', especially when the instruction to 'kill her' came. But then you mentioned the name, so this is Sunny, whom the doctor had confided about the same pattern of bullet and other injuries which had been found on Kavi? So Sunny wanted 'Swara' to be kept safe from the same fate that had been visited on Kavi

...BTW was there something else which alerted Dr Bose about Swara's case? He seemed to notice something uncanny/ unusual about the case, which prompted the call. Was it just the injuries she had? Or something else?

Harsha on the other hand, was slowly slipping into delirium, the fever and internal bleeding caused by the bullet to his hip, draining his life away. Wonder who that 'we'll wisher' was, who knew about his state as well as Swara's, and kept Jahnvi informed. Her part in the plan is yet to be played out, she thinks, steering herself despite the agony she feels. I have a doubt, since Harsha and Swaha/ Swara apparently had some local support on the ground, how did they allow themselves to get into the grips of whoever was responsible for Kavita's kidnap? Is there no material proof which Jahnavi could provide Sanskaar with? Or is it that she is now acting on Harsha's explicit wishes, that called for DP and the Maheshwari empire's annihilation...so she would not really want to ally with Sanskaar...

Intriguing...fascinating...thrilling...exciting. 😊

Loads of Love

Viji

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