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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

24. DETECTION

Aaryan's head was resting on his desk…He was hitting it lightly on the desk.

Deepika had ignored it for the last fifteen minutes, but now she could no longer hold herself back. "Aaryan kya kar rahe ho?"

"Hmm? Jara sa dard ho raha hain…"

"Kis tarah ka dard ho raha hain?" she asked worriedly.

Inspite of his pain, he answered, "Don't worry, dil ka dard nahi hain…pet main jara sa…"

She ignored his feeble attempt at a joke, though it hurt her heart a lot.

"Pet main Aaryan?"

"Haan…Aisa burning sensation." He clutched the desk.

She approached him alarmed. Walking quickly towards him, she kneeled down beside Aaryan. Hesitatingly, she put a hand on his shoulder.

"Kuch weakness, ya tiredness pichle kuch dinon main lag raha tha?"

He nodded mutely. Fear and concern rising in her, she asked, "Nauseous?"

"Haan…" He said, resuming his head banging.

"Aaryan…I think you should go to the doctor."

"Kya hain Deepika? Chodo naa, it's nothing serious."

"Aur agar hua toh?"

Sensing the anxiety in her voice, he looked up at her. She was staring at him, hands folded across her chest, a concerned expression on her face.

He said with a chuckle, "Deepika, for all you know, ye indigestion bhi ho sakta hain."

She did not drop her worried look, and it raised pangs of regret and hurt in him.

"Okay, doctor ke paas jaoonga…theeke ma'm?"

She said, waving her finger at him "Aaryan tum chahe jitna utna mazaak uda lo, par please tum doctor ke paas jao."

He nodded his head like an obedient child.

Her eye twitched. "Mujhe kyun lag raha hain Aaryan ki tum meri sunoge nahi."

An amused smile appeared on his face.

"Waise bhi tum meri kahaan sunte ho Aaryan. Coffee kum piya karo. Pet main ulcers hue hoge."

"Kitni baar wahi dialogue sunaogi Deepika?"

"Aaj shaam hum dono doctor ke paas jaa rahe hain."

"Kyun, tumhari tabiyet theek nahi hain?"

Looking up, she gave him the evil eye.

The mischievous smile reappeared.

"Yes ma'm."

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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
at last an update from u...😛
great one👏 please write some soonnn... waiting...😊 just hope that aryan is fineee😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
oh aryan ko ulcer ho ga 😲 oh plz nahi... plz aryann bemar may hona warna hamari deepika ka kya ho ga 😭

thhhnnnxxx xxx alllooo ooo ooo ttt for the update. i'm sooo very happy while reading this 😃
after a long time u have posted updates and its wonderful
thanks deary 😃

oh janu and parth they made a gr8 couple... or parth had promise her not to be change so i know he will stick to his promise as he genuinely loved her 😳
and shyna must be looking beutiful but aryan's eyes must set only on deepika as he like her or more than likeness but he himselff is not aware of it... ufff pooja inn bahi sab ka number kab aye ga 😛
and plz aryan go to the doctor... deepika ki baat sun lena plzzz
👍🏼
👍🏼 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
loved ur update and feeling really really happy k new update aye hai
plz don't be late for the next updates
post new one sooon no sooner plzzz
waiting for more and more 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: darknite

at last an update from u...😛
great one👏 please write some soonnn... waiting...😊 just hope that aryan is fineee😭



😳 Sorry for the delay.
Yeah, will update sooon! 😃

😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Veena..

oh aryan ko ulcer ho ga 😲 oh plz nahi... plz aryann bemar may hona warna hamari deepika ka kya ho ga 😭


thhhnnnxxx xxx alllooo ooo ooo ttt for the update. i'm sooo very happy while reading this 😃
after a long time u have posted updates and its wonderful
thanks deary 😃

oh janu and parth they made a gr8 couple... or parth had promise her not to be change so i know he will stick to his promise as he genuinely loved her 😳
and shyna must be looking beutiful but aryan's eyes must set only on deepika as he like her or more than likeness but he himselff is not aware of it... ufff pooja inn bahi sab ka number kab aye ga 😛
and plz aryan go to the doctor... deepika ki baat sun lena plzzz
👍🏼
👍🏼 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
loved ur update and feeling really really happy k new update aye hai
plz don't be late for the next updates
post new one sooon no sooner plzzz
waiting for more and more 😃



😃 Hey Veena!
Sab ka number aayega yaar, tu chinta mat kar! 😆
Yeah, will update soon!

😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Wow! An update from you, I am so excited.

So Aaryan is finally moving on...but wait, is he OK? I hope he doesn't have an ulcer. But Deepika hai na. She'll take care of him.😉

Waiting for more!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Arre ye SOON kab ayega...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
yeah pooja i'm desperately waiting foor their number
or hum AD ki cjhinta nahi karen ge thu kkon kare ga 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: darknite

Arre ye SOON kab ayega...😳


yeh soon VERY SOON ana chaye 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Aayeggaaa...aayegaaa...aayegaaa...aayega,aane wala...aaayegaaa 🤣
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