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Posted: 8 years ago
#81
Congrats everyone. And Shivam yours was truly amazing. Sorry couldn't write on this topic. But will write on the next topic Rang
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: shruthiravi

Congrats everyone. And Shivam yours was truly amazing. Sorry couldn't write on this topic. But will write on the next topic Rang


Thank You Shruti
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Colors of Seasons
Urmila was in her room. She looked at the still half finished picture. She has titled it Seasons. The painting was her way of expressing her moods, her thoughts once Lakshman had left for Vanvass. She didn't paint continuously. She will use the color that defined the mood that day. Sometimes the beautiful memories overwhelmed her and she painted the canvass with rich colors of green, yellow, pink and red just like the flowers that bloom in the spring. And whenever Urmila splashed those rich colors as if her mood was known to Lakshman even in extreme winter Lakshman was in high spirits. He could do his duty in a jovial mood. He teased both his Bhaiyya and Bhabi and didn't hesitate to pester his bhabi with request for food. He also managed to get the best of vegetables even in winter somehow. It was as if Urmila's energy was passed on to him. Then there were those days when Urmila felt the heat of separation was too much to bear. Days where she felt she wont last another day. Just like the rays of sun blazing through summer she painted the canvass with bright orange and gold. It was like her pain of separation was trying to find solace in the vigorous strokes of the painting brush. And interestingly whenever Urmila was in this mood someone will cross Soumtri's path the wrong way. And well that person can bear the brunt of Lakshman's anger. It was on one those days Shurpanakha had come to Panchavati and Lakshman had cut her nose and ears.
Then there were times Urmila oscillated between being happy and being sad. She simply didn't know what she was feeling. Just like the autumn that has both the shades of new flowers coming and old flowers fading Urmila suffered mood swings. And at that time she painted the canvass with blue. To calm her mind, to bring it to normal and the blue eventually managed to do it. And just like she oscillated between her feelings Lakshman too faced emotional turmoil. It had happened when Lakshman was forced to go leaving Sita. But still he was able to manage Ram from utter despair. It had happened when Lakshman had gone with warning to Sugreeva but was calmed down by Tara. It was like the peace Urmila attained, made Lakshman come through the emotional turmoil also.
Then was the last feeling. A feeling of hopelessness, a feeling of everything lost.It was winter. Cold winter which she felt was seeping into her heart Urmila had felt only twice like that in the entire period of separation. And she had painted the canvass with ash, grey and white. First time it happened Lakshman was hit with Nagastra. Second time it happened Lakshman was hit with Brahmastra.
And today was the third time. The feeling of hopelessness has not gone from her even after knowing her husband has survived. She knew he was going to fight the battle of his life. The coldness she felt was nubbing her hand. Urmila took the brush dipped in the color. Battle was going to start between Lakshman and Indrajith. Urmila started painting. Battle started in Lanka. Urmila's brushes made vigorous strokes. Lakshman's arrows cut through Indrajith. Urmila continued to paint. Lakshman continued to fight. Finally Lakshman's arrow took Indrajith's life and Urmila stopped painting and looked at the canvass. Yes she was feeling numb, but she had decided this time this feeling wont over power her and she had dipped her brush in green and as she painted the winter has melted and the colors of springs splashed through the canvass and her mind. And when she put down the brush she knew he had won. Spring is back, winter has gone. Now her canvass will only have the colors of spring
PS: Guys due to busy schedule couldn't write on previous topic. Hope you all like this one
Edited by shruthiravi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84

Kya hai rang ?


Woh jo Mila ke chehre ko gulab sa lal gulabi karta hai jab koi uski tariff karta hai. . . .

Ya woh lal rang jo meri Mila ke galo pe chha jata hai jab main use pyar se dekhta hu. . . use niharta hu. . .


Ya woh gusse wala surkh lal rang jo mere Mila ka chehre ko aur nikharta hai jab woh mujhse gussa hoti hai. . . .


Ya woh halka sa gulabi rang uske chehre ka jab uske dimag mein koi yukti koi khurafat chal rahi hoti hai. . .

Kabhi Mujhe chidhati . . . . kabhi mujhe pe hasti. . . . .


Kabhi Hasti. . . . Kabhi Muskurati. . . Kabhi Sharartein Karti. . . Kabhi Ruthi hui. . . Kabhi Manati mujhe. . . Aur kabhi mujhe manate manate khud ruth jaati. . .


Meri Sita Bhabhi ki chhabi . . . phir bhi kit bhinn alag alag rango se paripurn. . . .


Meri to duniya hi us mukh ke bhinn rangon mein simat ke reh gayi hai. . . .



Nostalgic Lakshman thinking sitting outside their hut in Chitrakoot during the excile, missing his Mila and longing to see her . . . . . .

Note:

Photo credit to Mano all the photos are taken from her thread.

Picture presentation Idea courtesy to Shivam (inspired from his FF)

PS: Friends this is my first attempt at writing something all the criticism is welcome.

Edited by FAMS - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85

Hi guys, hope you all like this.

Trina๐Ÿ˜Š

THE COLOUR OF LOVE

Urmila was sitting in the bedroom alone and admiring a beautiful painting. It was the potrait of her dear Lakshman which she had made just now.She was talking to this painting.

Yeh chitra kitna sundar hai, bilkul aap hi ki tarah aur kitna raangein bhi hai. Par phir bhi mujhe adhura sa lag raha hai.

Aao ko pata hai kyun. Kyun ki aap mere paas nahi hai na isliye. Aap ke yahan nahi hone se mere zinadagi mein se rang he chalye gaye hain aur raangon ke bina zindagi kitne adhuri se hoti ha na.

Aapko to pata hi hoga. Wasie aapko yaad hai wo din jab hum raangon ke baare mein baata kar rahe the aur apne mujhe bataya ki aapka pasandeeda rang laal hai.Kya din the wo.

Urmila was sitting in the bedroom doing her favourite timepass ie. making a painting.

Suddenly Lakshman entered the room and crashed with her. Due to this all the blue colour in her hand fell down.She became sad.

Sumitranandan, yeh aapne kya kiya.

Mila, maaf kardo na. Maine dekha nahi aur yeh toh galti se ho gaya.

Ab main apni chitrakari kaise karungi.

Mila, sirf ek he rang toh gira hai. Tum dusaare se karlo na.

Swami, haan wo toh main kar lungi par phir yeh chitr utna accha nahi lagega.

Kyun.Jaara mujhe bhi toh batao.He smiled at her and started looking at her while painted and talked to him.

Kyun ki pratyek rang ka apna ki mahattv hota hai aur uske bina chitra adhuri se lagti hai. Chitr he nahi humari zindagi mein bhi rang bahut mahattv rakte hain aur inn sab rang se hi humari zindagi poori hooti hai.Yeh humari bhaavanaen batate hai jaise ki-khushi, dukhi, gussa,...Aapko pata hai yeh.

Arey wah, meri Mila toh bahut buddhimaan hai. Yeh toh mujhe aaj hi pata chala.

She turned around to look at him.

Wo toh main humesha se hi hun. Par aapko nahi pata.

He came closer to her and held her from her waist.

Thik hai, maan liya.Par aapko kya ke mujhe yeh rang dekh kar kya yaaad aata hai.He said smiling at her.

Nahi.Aap hi bataeye na.

Yeh mujhe tumhari yaad dilate hai, Mila.

She looked into his eyes which were busy in admiring her and asked, woh kaise.

Yeh peele rang se mujhe chanchal aur utsaahit Mila nazar aati hai.Hare rang ke tarah khush aur haasmukh, neela ke tarah hosiyar aur nirmal aur haan,bainganee ki bahut sundar.

She was very embarrassed and she looked down.

Par tumhe pata hai mera sabse pasandeeda rang kya hai..laal.Kyunki woh mujhe us Mila ki yaad dilata ha jab wo gussa hoti..

Kya kaha aapne, main aur gussa.Gussa toh aap ki karte hain.

Arey, main toh mazak kar raha tha.Laal toh mujhe us Mila ki yaad dilata hai jo mujhse itna pyaar karti hai aur jisse mein bhi bahut pyaar karta hun. Laal yani humare pyaar ki prateek.

He then closed the distance between them and kissed her passionately.

Urmila kissed him back and they looked into each others' eyes.Now she was very shy and freeing herself from his grip, she ran away.

Arey, Mila. Haan laal rang mera pasandeeda hai par tumhe itna laal hone ki jaruurat nahi hai, he said laughing at his innocent wife.

She smiled backed remembering those lovely memories.

Haan, aap jaldi wapas aao taki mere zindagi mein bhi rang wapas aa jae aur wo adhuri na rahe.

Laal rang mera bhi sabse pasandeeda rang hai. Laal..yani pyaar ke nishani.โค๏ธ


Edited by trina134 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
Bahut accha story hai... I loved it... ๐Ÿ˜Š I wish that this story would never end
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87
Gosh!Trina I have written something quite similar.
Kitni milti hai hamari soch ๐Ÿ˜†
Now I need to change that!




And other left writers,someone please PM them about the topic and deadline as I am a lil busy.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: LakshMila

Gosh!Trina I have written something quite similar.

Kitni milti hai hamari soch ๐Ÿ˜†
Now I need to change that!




And other left writers,someone please PM them about the topic and deadline as I am a lil busy.

Sorry Mili
I didnt know that
But I know that you will write a better one soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: trina134

Sorry Mili
I didnt know that
But I know that you will write a better one soon


No need to be sorry dear!
Infact I m sorry,I dont have time to write another one.I'll be altering that itself๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿฅฑ
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mere dimaag ka too pehle hi dahi ho rakha hai itna lamba os likhna ke baad, I will also need time to think something
I may as well put up a comic post if u don't mind . It's from a scene I had thought for my os series the four but never wrote it
Edited by Shivam... - 8 years ago
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