Originally posted by: shruthiravi
Congrats everyone. And Shivam yours was truly amazing. Sorry couldn't write on this topic. But will write on the next topic Rang
Kya hai rang ?
Woh jo Mila ke chehre ko gulab sa lal gulabi karta hai jab koi uski tariff karta hai. . . .
Ya woh lal rang jo meri Mila ke galo pe chha jata hai jab main use pyar se dekhta hu. . . use niharta hu. . .
Ya woh gusse wala surkh lal rang jo mere Mila ka chehre ko aur nikharta hai jab woh mujhse gussa hoti hai. . . .
Ya woh halka sa gulabi rang uske chehre ka jab uske dimag mein koi yukti koi khurafat chal rahi hoti hai. . .
Kabhi Mujhe chidhati . . . . kabhi mujhe pe hasti. . . . .
Kabhi Hasti. . . . Kabhi Muskurati. . . Kabhi Sharartein Karti. . . Kabhi Ruthi hui. . . Kabhi Manati mujhe. . . Aur kabhi mujhe manate manate khud ruth jaati. . .
Meri Sita Bhabhi ki chhabi . . . phir bhi kit bhinn alag alag rango se paripurn. . . .
Meri to duniya hi us mukh ke bhinn rangon mein simat ke reh gayi hai. . . .
Nostalgic Lakshman thinking sitting outside their hut in Chitrakoot during the excile, missing his Mila and longing to see her . . . . . .
Note:
Photo credit to Mano all the photos are taken from her thread.
Picture presentation Idea courtesy to Shivam (inspired from his FF)
PS: Friends this is my first attempt at writing something all the criticism is welcome.
Hi guys, hope you all like this.
Trina๐
THE COLOUR OF LOVE
Urmila was sitting in the bedroom alone and admiring a beautiful painting. It was the potrait of her dear Lakshman which she had made just now.She was talking to this painting.
Yeh chitra kitna sundar hai, bilkul aap hi ki tarah aur kitna raangein bhi hai. Par phir bhi mujhe adhura sa lag raha hai.
Aao ko pata hai kyun. Kyun ki aap mere paas nahi hai na isliye. Aap ke yahan nahi hone se mere zinadagi mein se rang he chalye gaye hain aur raangon ke bina zindagi kitne adhuri se hoti ha na.
Aapko to pata hi hoga. Wasie aapko yaad hai wo din jab hum raangon ke baare mein baata kar rahe the aur apne mujhe bataya ki aapka pasandeeda rang laal hai.Kya din the wo.
Urmila was sitting in the bedroom doing her favourite timepass ie. making a painting.
Suddenly Lakshman entered the room and crashed with her. Due to this all the blue colour in her hand fell down.She became sad.
Sumitranandan, yeh aapne kya kiya.
Mila, maaf kardo na. Maine dekha nahi aur yeh toh galti se ho gaya.
Ab main apni chitrakari kaise karungi.
Mila, sirf ek he rang toh gira hai. Tum dusaare se karlo na.
Swami, haan wo toh main kar lungi par phir yeh chitr utna accha nahi lagega.
Kyun.Jaara mujhe bhi toh batao.He smiled at her and started looking at her while painted and talked to him.
Kyun ki pratyek rang ka apna ki mahattv hota hai aur uske bina chitra adhuri se lagti hai. Chitr he nahi humari zindagi mein bhi rang bahut mahattv rakte hain aur inn sab rang se hi humari zindagi poori hooti hai.Yeh humari bhaavanaen batate hai jaise ki-khushi, dukhi, gussa,...Aapko pata hai yeh.
Arey wah, meri Mila toh bahut buddhimaan hai. Yeh toh mujhe aaj hi pata chala.
She turned around to look at him.
Wo toh main humesha se hi hun. Par aapko nahi pata.
He came closer to her and held her from her waist.
Thik hai, maan liya.Par aapko kya ke mujhe yeh rang dekh kar kya yaaad aata hai.He said smiling at her.
Nahi.Aap hi bataeye na.
Yeh mujhe tumhari yaad dilate hai, Mila.
She looked into his eyes which were busy in admiring her and asked, woh kaise.
Yeh peele rang se mujhe chanchal aur utsaahit Mila nazar aati hai.Hare rang ke tarah khush aur haasmukh, neela ke tarah hosiyar aur nirmal aur haan,bainganee ki bahut sundar.
She was very embarrassed and she looked down.
Par tumhe pata hai mera sabse pasandeeda rang kya hai..laal.Kyunki woh mujhe us Mila ki yaad dilata ha jab wo gussa hoti..
Kya kaha aapne, main aur gussa.Gussa toh aap ki karte hain.
Arey, main toh mazak kar raha tha.Laal toh mujhe us Mila ki yaad dilata hai jo mujhse itna pyaar karti hai aur jisse mein bhi bahut pyaar karta hun. Laal yani humare pyaar ki prateek.
He then closed the distance between them and kissed her passionately.
Urmila kissed him back and they looked into each others' eyes.Now she was very shy and freeing herself from his grip, she ran away.
Arey, Mila. Haan laal rang mera pasandeeda hai par tumhe itna laal hone ki jaruurat nahi hai, he said laughing at his innocent wife.
She smiled backed remembering those lovely memories.
Haan, aap jaldi wapas aao taki mere zindagi mein bhi rang wapas aa jae aur wo adhuri na rahe.
Laal rang mera bhi sabse pasandeeda rang hai. Laal..yani pyaar ke nishani.โค๏ธ
Originally posted by: LakshMila
Gosh!Trina I have written something quite similar.
Kitni milti hai hamari soch ๐Now I need to change that!And other left writers,someone please PM them about the topic and deadline as I am a lil busy.
Originally posted by: trina134
Sorry MiliI didnt know thatBut I know that you will write a better one soon
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