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Posted: 8 years ago
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'A Writer lives a hundred lives before he dies'
Celebrating the spirit of our wide LakshMila imaginations.

Hello folks,welcome to Mina's

//*Writingmania*\\

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This thread is exclusively made for LakshMilian Writers.The credit for such an amazing idea goes to our friend Mina.

So basically, its sort of a game,in which Participating writers would be given a word,and within a provided span of time,they have to post their short drabbles associated with it ,here.

Clearly,the context you guys will be referring in your drabbles would be LakshMila and LakshMila compulsorily.
Infact,it could be of any length ,as we are ever demanding of LakshMiliness.Drabbles could be Mithilic,Ayodhyic,funny,serious,happy,emotional etc etc.We wish to celebrate the different shades of LakshMila.

Interesting ?Isn't it?So what are you waiting for?Just go and hit the like button in the participating writers' list.Once the right time arrives,we'll provide you the word.
Time span would be decided accordingly.
Reviews are allowed,and reviewers must point out their favs.Winner of a round would be decided by the number of favourites reviewed to his/her drabble.This drabble game is just meant for fun and for potraying our love for LakshMila.
No Bashing by any means allowed.

Note:-Aalsi people 😆,dont copy others' or even your own stuff,or something that has been posted previously.Cherish some new ideas!

The drabbles' length,breadth,height and matter would be exampled by the demo given below.

Enjoy:))

P.S.:-Dont give your reviews unless all drabbles for a particular round are submitted.

-Admins-
Minamma
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Demo by minamma


The word given to her was
"PATNI"


Patni...ardhangini..jeevansathi thinking about these words HE remember her...she is her soulmate...he can never forget her..
HER...!!!
Laxman sighed under his breath "ohh Mila"
How much he missed her all these years
It's been 14 long years since they separated...
He remembered the day of their wedding she looked so beautiful at the same time so ravishing
Ohh how much he want her in his arms at that moment..he smiled at that memory when she has blushed beet root by his intense gaze..
How he wish to see that blush again
He also remembered the day of their garbhadan sanskar how he asked her for promising him to never come in btwn his duties towards his brother and she gave it to him quietly without another word...that day his respect for her get doubled
Then he remember the dreadful day 14 years back
Ohh how much happy he was that day..finally his bhaiyya was becoming the king but destiny was cruel to them
Kaikey's wail clutches caught them in trap
Laxman closed his eyes and a tear slipped from his eye remembering how he snapped at his mila for thinking that she may come btwn him and ram
Ohhh never she can do that in her dream
He only realised his mistake when he saw a thaal in her hand which she kept on a nearby table and walked away slowly without complaining wiping her tears silently
He saw the thaal which contain clothes of a vanvasi for HIM
He felt his heart cut into million pieces such a fool he is sometimes..
When the time of separation came he can see her red eyes maybe because of crying.he cursed himself for being so stupid to not understand this mila
He can't take it anymore and dragged her towards their chamber ignoring everyone's shocked faces
Once in chamber he let go of her slowly and turned towards her bowing his head down feeling ashamed of himself but what surprised him was urmila gently taking his face in btwn her dainty hands making him look into her eyes she slowly wiped his tears away same he did and he got surprised further when she spoke "" nahi saumitra aap yeah na samjhe ki me aapse rusht hu..nahi kadapi nahi..bus thoda dukh hua that mujhe ki aapko mum Pr vishwash nahi hai pr frr me yeh bhi to bhalibhati janti hu ki is samay sb kitne dukhi hai..me samjhti hu swami ki aap USS samay krodhit the air me yeh bhi janti hu ki jab aapko krodh aatavhai to aapka khud Pr koi niyantran nahi rehta isliye aap aatmglani na mehsoos kre me bhalibhati janti hu mere swami ko WO kbhi apni mila ko dukh nhi pohochaenge haa ye baat alag hai ki gussa hmesha unki naak PR betha rhya hai.."" Both chuckled when she said that poking his nose with her index finger
"" aap nishchint ho or apne bhrata avem bhabhi ki seva me jae swami me 14 varsh aapki yhi prateeksha krungi yeh mera vaada hai aapse""she said those words chocking a little at the end making him also cry with her
He hugged her ferciecly as if to never let go

Laxman came out of his trance only to find tears in his eyes as well as his beloved ram bhaiyya and sita bhabi's also
Soon Mila soon I m coming back to you afterall
My love
My life
MERI PATNI

Written by,
Mina

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Edited by LakshMila - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Participating Writers
(Hit the like button if you want to be included)

Minamma
LakshMila
TwinMadness
Riya_16
Shivam...
shruthiravi
trina134
sayee
deejagi
starrylove_sk
SenRazia
sshirley
Edited by LakshMila - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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...Index...

Word: "Patni"

1.Patni-by Mina
Page 1
2.The Better Wife-by Shivam
Page 2
3.Patni-by mantuamu
Page 4
4.Role of a wife-by jaya
Page 4
5.His Patni-by Shrutha
Page 4
6.My Wife-by Trina
Page 5
7.Without Her,His wife-by Mili
Page 5
8.The Better Half-by SenRazia
Page 5

Winner:Shivam
Top 6 Page 9


Word: "Rang"
1.Colours of Seasons-by Shruthi
Page 11
2.Kya Hai Rang?-by Fouzia
Page 11
3.The Colours of Love-by Trina
Page 12
4.Floral Colours-by Jaya
Page 13
5.Rang Jo Lagyo-by Mili
Page 13
6.The Forgotten Colour-by Anu
Page 13





Edited by LakshMila - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hii mili
Luv u so much
And writers give our feedback plzz
Its necessary for us to know weather u like it or not
Luv you all
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mina it was really good.👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great Start Admins
I will also post a short update on the word Patni by tonight
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is actually a very good Thread Mili 👏 Innovative and creative .
yayy , We ll get to read more LakshMila 😉😆 #MeHappy

Ok , I am nt gonna review unless everyone els post their updates
( So count me in among the reviewers , u knw I cnt write 🤢 😆 )

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Posted: 8 years ago
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@Shruthi Well,if you werent busy with your studies,I would have written your name already. ;-)
Others,thankyou for your feedback!Gear up,we'll start round one as soon as we get about 15 writers.One special request,if you know of any writer who could participate in this game and currently not able to come here,do let me know!

Before that,lets look upto the update by Rishi Valmiki himself 😆

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Posted: 8 years ago
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My exams saved me 😆 No actually saved all readers 😉😆


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