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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey people I know Sindoor ended it and we all are sad about it or at least we miss it. 😭

The Sindoor forum is getting boring and what not so I got idea for us to talk about




Your assignment is

- If you were the writer of the Sindoor how u would write the episode.

- We will start the story from the beginning and then next person can continue with his/her unique ideas.

- Your story does not have to be similar to the real story, but I suggest that make your story realistic and the one that make sense.

- You have to use the following people in your episode:

•Viren Raizada
•Kavita Raizada
•TitliMami
•Tara Raizada
•Rudra Raizada
•Niharika Raizada
•Antariksh Raizada
•Kajal Raizada
•Shuhani Raizada
•Dhruv Raizada
•Vedika Raizada
•Krishna Raizada
•Parth Raizada
•Arpita Raizada
•Sundari
•Uma
•Aarti
•Alisha
•Rahul
•Shivam


-you do not have to use all the character in everysingle episode but try to use most of them.. 😊

-please make it propitiate.

- Episode has to be atleast 3 paragraph with containing up 5-4 sentences in each Paragraph. 😊




SO what are you waiting for lets get started it!!!

we all are looking forward to read the Sindoor 2!

GOODLUCK TO ALL

EPISODE 1 IS COMMING SOON!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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so it has to be one episode or who story??
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: brainychild92

so it has to be one episode or who story??



no u only have to write one episode. i don't think one person can write whole story..

so only one episode. srry for not being very clear. 😊
Edited by Rinkalp90 - 17 years ago
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Episode 1


It was around mid November, and preparation for Diwali functions was getting ready in the most valuable parivar in society.
"Titli is everything ready?" screamed Mrs. Kavita Raizada from the main room. Kavita Raizada, the malkin of the Raizada family. "Yes didi, I am very happy today, and I am wearing my new dress that I got from America," replied Titli while walking in to main room. 😆 Titli was Kavita's babhi.
People had start arriving at their house for the Diwali function. Mr. Viren Raizada walked in to room with Tara Raizada. Tara was their youngest child. Mrs. Kavita Raizada got up and shouted, Rudra, Antriksh, Dhruv, where have you been all of you?!?!, it time for us to start the function.
Three brothers walked in to room with the big smiles in their faces. Rudra was the oldest son then Antriksh and Dhruv was after him. Tara joined her brothers and they all got together, walked in to the madir, and prayed god with everyone as well. After that four kids hugged Kavita and Viren. Titlimami happily smile, "May god keeps us happy everyday!"
As the function started everyone was having fun, naach gana, garba and enjoyed the evening with the family. Mr. and Mrs. Raizada were standing in the corner of the room and talked to each other that, "I remember yesterday when they used to play with us and now they all are taking care of us."😊



Edited by Rinkalp90 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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episode 2

all are happy and are playing with sparklers. a girl walks past dhruv and her saree is caught onto him. she turns slowly and dhruv is gobsmacked. "sorry..i...i.."
she laughs " dont worry." all of a sudden someone calls out to the girl. "Vedika!" she turn to see her sister, Niharika. she walks to her. Dhruv smiles to himself. "Vedika" he whispers.

"Vedika where were you? i was looking for you everywhere. Mama's not feeling well. We have to go." Niharika tells her. Suddenly a man comes from behind Niharika and covers her eyes. "Guess who?" Niharika turns angrily and pulls the mans hand off. the man(rudra) looks shocked. " i'm so sorry. i thoght you were my girlfriend, Chandni." Niharika and Vedika leave angrily. Titli comes next to Rudra and nudges him, teasingly. "how many girls are you going to try that trick on?" 😆

Antariksh is standing on his own, getting some fresh air. he goes back inside and is about to go upstairs when,Kaajal, who is coming down the stairs falls. Antariksh desperately catches her and lifts her to her feet. she smiles and thanks him. she glances around the party as if looking for someone. a man enters the party with a load of rebels. Kaajal hugs Antariksh so her back is facing the men. she whispers in his ear " please..please..i'm in some trouble. just a few more minutes and i'll let go. please." the man goes into another room. Kaajal makes for the front door. One of the rebels shout out. "she's here!!" he grabs her and everyone stops to look. "nowhere to run now is there?"
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Episode 3

Rudra looks at Niharika who was now holding hands with the guy who was platting small kisses on her neck. Rudra turned around angerily and wlaked past dhruv who looked at the scene before him. A smile etched his face as he followed his older brother outside.

" getting jealouse are we? "

he looked at his brother who wasn't looking at him but was mesmirezed by the beauty that he had his hands on.

" what you talking about? Me and getting jealouse you are not seriouse are you? "

" yeah right i saw how you looked at vedika's sister beofre and now her dancing with this guy.... you hate it don't ya "

" shut up and leave me alone "

rudra wlaked off and went inside the party determined to ahve good time. why spoil it for the crust at the first sight.

hope you liked it 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Rudra walked out and went to his room. he took out the phone book from his top drawer and looked up the number and dialled it.

the phone rang, niharika looked at her phone and then at the clock. 2:30 am. She gave a little mumble and got up and picked up the phone. 😳

" hello?"

Rudra heard the voice at the ohter end of the phone, gosh it was beutiful. He smiled and put the phone down

Niharika looked at the clock for the final time, looks like it was no use to go to sleep now. she got up and joined shivam to the room.

she looked at him, he was the only man that could make her smile even though he wasn't awake. it has been 3 yrs to thier marriage and every day niharika felt like she had just married him yesterday.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great going. i loved the all new thoughts..
i will come back and write when i get time. prolly not before weekend. 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Downstairs, Vedika was too excited to go to sleep. Her best friend, Suraj, was coming from America the next day. She couldn't wait to tell something that she had kept in her heart for a very long time. She had a feeling that Suraj felt the same way.


She remember the phone call she had received two days back ....


"HI vedika" - suraj


"Suraj, hi!! how are you? now u have the time to call me?!?" -vedika


"haha..i know u were going to get angry at me but i have good news...I am coming back in a couple of days" -suraj


"coming back?? achanak? everything ok?" -vedika


"ha everything is fine....and i have surprise for u" -suraj


"surprise...really?? can't wait to see!" -vedika


"ok then byee take care" -suraj

present...

"suraj..suraj...jaldi aajaooo!!" and then vedika slowly went to sleep

meanwhile in the raizada's house...all three boys are looking out their window thinking about the girls they met in the diwali function.

all of them are lost in their thoughts and did not see their sister, tara, walk out the house to see some guy.....

Edited by desiqt8806 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I apologize but i do not miss sindoor i am so glad it is over
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