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5 Apr 07

Dhruv gets into the car, is about to start it. Arpita who sees him from the balcony cannot call him, is helpless. She is tensed. Dhruv starts the car, but it has a problem, it does not start. Dhruv is constantly trying to start the car, Arpita goes in again, struggles to walk, goes back to the place where she was tied.. She sees a mirror placed there on one of the bags. She struggles to take the mirror in her hands, which are tied behind. She takes it, drops the mirror to the ground. The pieces of glass are now on the floor. Arpita now sits, tries her best to pick the biggest glass piece lying.

Down, Dhruv opens the bonnet of the car, is checking something, then he closes it, goes , sits and is about to start the car again. He looks very tensed. At this moment, Arpita is again back in the balcony, she turns with her back facing the road and Dhruv. She keeps the glass piece in her hand, the glass side facing the road. She stands in such a way that the reflection of the glass falls exactly on Dhruv's face, who is seated inside the car. Dhruv is blinded by the sudden reflection that is constantly falling on his face. He tries to hide his face, tries to start. But he is not able to , as the brightness just pierces into his eyes. He now sees up, gets out of the car. Still he cannot see who is standing there, as Arpita is still showing his back to him. But he sees a person there, runs up, climbs the stairs, goes in. He opens the door, is shocked to see Arpita there, sitting on the ground, trying to cut the rope tied to her hand with the same piece of Glass. Dhruv comes in, is shocked to see Arpita in that state, with hands,legs tied, mouth tied. He runs to her, she weeps loudly on seeing him. He removes the kerchief from her mouth, hugs her. She is very much shocked, he gives her the comfort she needs. She weeps aloud. Dhruv asks how did this happen? Dhruv is concerned for Arpita. Arpita weeps, says that Shekar did all this. She then points to Sneha, says that he has tied her too. Arpita now removes the rope from her legs, while Dhruv goes and takes the rope off Sneha's hands and legs. She is still unconscious. Arpita tells Dhruv that Shekar wants to sell them both. Dhruv is stunned, he hugs Arpita, tells her that he is here, nothing will happen.

Shekar comes in then. He hits Dhruv from behind, holds him at gunpoint. Dhruv is shocked. Arpita is now concerned for Dhruv. She cries. Shekar says that is is good, bcos the whole family is here. He has a score to settle with Dhruv too, Dhruv had slapped him once. Saying this, Shekar starts slapping Dhruv left and right. Arpita is tensed. When Shekar slaps Dhruv again and again, Arpita comes in between, hugs dhruv. Dhruv hugs Arpita, tells her that she should not come in the way, it is a promise she needs to make. Dhruv now pushes Arpita out of the way. They both start to hit each other. Dhruv starts to hit Shekar, when 2 men comes and start hitting Dhruv. Arpita is very tensed,s he is weeping. Dhruv is getting hit by all now. He is on the ground. All of a sudden, Dhruv starts to hit them back. Now one person goes to Arpita, holds her with a knife in her hand, tells Dhruv that he will kill his wife. Now Dhruv cannot hit back. Arpita cries, as the other man and Shekar start hitting Dhruv continuiously. Arptia yells to Dhruv not to get concerned for her, save himself. But Dhruv is on the ground, Shekar is kicking him left and right with his boots. Dhruv is in pain. arpita cannot see him getting beaten.

At this point, sneha gets back her consciousness. She sees Dhruv getting beaten, Arpita being held by the other person. She sees a vase lying on the ground, she picks it up, hits the person who is near Arpita , on his head. The person falls down. Dhruv now starts to hit Shekar and the other person. Again a big fight takes place, Sneha and arpita hug each other and cry. The police comes there at the right time, Shekar and the men are arrested. The police thanks Dhruv for helping them out to get this gang. Shekar yells that he will come back to take revenge. The police says that he will see to it that nobody bails him out this time.. Arpita hugs Dhrv and weeps. Dhruv consoles her. Sneha too runs to Dhruv, Dhruv opens his arms, she too hugs him. Dhruv huga both Arpita and Sneha. He kisses Arpita on her forehead. Both the girls are tensed Dhruv consoles them...

At home, Ant and Titli are tensed for Arpita. Ant is trying Dhruv's number but cannot get him. titli is very worried for Arpita. Ant asks her to cool down, Arpita might have been in the temple, Dhruv might have missed her. They might be coming home, he says. Titli asks Ant whether he does notknow Dhruv? She says that Dhruv never panics without a reason. Titli says that Sneha too is missing, she very well knows that it is bcos of Sneha.. Ant says that she always blames Sneha for nothing. Titli asks him not to side Sneha always.

As they talk, Arpita, sneha and Dhruv come. Titli asks Arpita where she was? Dhruv tells them the whole story, which is in mute. All are shocked, Kajal is also there now. Dhruv then tells that the police came at the right time.. Alls wells now.. Titli now goes to Sneha, stares at her, says that again all has happened bcos of you. Why dont you spare us? You are not ashamed to spoil your name, you will spoil the respect that our family has... Arpita now comes near Sneha, holds her, tells Titli not to scold Sneha. Titli is shocked. Arpita says that if i am here today, before you, it is bcos of her. Sneha did not care for her life, saved me.. Titli is shocked to hear this. Dhruv too says the same , says that all credit should go to Sneha. Dhruv says that he forgives Sneha for whatever she has done.. He smiles seeing Sneha. Sneha is in tears. Titli is now moved. She goes near Sneha, tells her that if at all, my kids are back, it is bcos of you. So thanks.. She says that she should not mind wahtever she has said to her in the past. She hugs Sneha, both are happy, shed tears of joy. Arpita and Dhruv are relieved. Ant is very happy ...
Morning. Kajal is taking the help of the servant, she is cleaning her room. She is taking out allt he medals, trophies of ant's, ordering the servant to keep them in the store. Just then, Sneha comes there. She has a box of sweets in her hand, gives it to Kajal,says that Titli asked her to give this, it is from her chachi's place. Kajal is happy to know that her chachi is back from teerthyatra. Just then, Ant too comes in. Sneha stands there. Ant sees the trophies, asks Kajal what is she doing with this? Kajal says that she is removing them from the room, making way for the toys of their daughter. Ant is a bit sad. He takes one trophy in hand,says that he won it in the intercollege level. He then tels Kajal that he has nice memories associated with them. So asks her not to take it out of the room. Kajal asks, where will i keep it? Suhaani has so many toys, that will fill up the room, there is not oher place. Ant nods, says that it is true that nwe things need to make way for older ones.. Ant goes from there with a sad face. Sneha sees all this. she thinks that Kajal has no feelings for Ant's likes, she never understands Ant.. Sneha then says that she does understand Ant's feelings and will always respect what he says..

Dhruv comes to his room.Arpita is there. She sees him, asks him whether he is not getting ready to go to office? Dhruv smiles, asks Arpita to come. He takes Arpita, makes her stand, asks her to close her eyes. Arpita does so, asking whatis it for? Dhruvv then puts a chain in her neck, which has a cute locket of Radha and Krishna in it.. Arpita is admiring it, dhruv is hugging her, from behind, talking sweet nothing, when Sneha comes there. Dhruv moves away from Arpita seeing Sneha. Sneha sees them close, says sorry and is about to leave, when Dhruv with an embarassed look , says that she can come and talk, he is leaving now.. Dhruv makes a confused face, goes out. Arpita smiles seeing him. Sneha comes in. Arpita very proudly shows the chain and locket to Sneha. Sneha sees the locket, says it is very cute. Arpita says it is cute, Radha and Krishna are a symbol of purity, the jodi is so nice.. Sneha now asks Arpita, what was so special about Radha and Krishna's jodi, they were not even husband and wife. Krishna's wife was Rukmini and not radha. Arpita smiles, says that they were said to he the union of atma and parmatma, such was their love for each other. Their love was not bound by any relationship, their love was very pure, not selfish, very nice and meaningful. They were each others' life.. Sneha now is lost in thoughts, asks herself, whether her love for Ant means that she is selfish. She then answers her own question, says that her love for Ant is just like Radha's for Krishna, very pure and unselfish... She thinks that her love for him is divine and true... She says that like all accepted Krishna and Radha's love for each other, all need to accept her love for Ant..

Sneha is in her room, searching for a audio cassette from the lot she has kept in the rack... She then gets the cassette in hand, goes to the bed. She takes the player, sits to listen to the song.. She plays the song, the song that is heard is - Jaise Radha Ne Mala Japi Shyam ki Maine Odhi Chunariya Tere Naam ki... She hears it, blushes... She says that this song is very apt , depicts her love for ant very nicely.. She thinks that she will record her thoughts and feelings for Ant in this cassette, after this song. Ant has a habit of hearing to songs when he drives the car.. She says that she will keep it in his player in the car, so that he gets to know her feelings for him. She now plays the wohle song, then presses the record button after the song. She records - Ant, i love you a lot, as this song, i have put on the chunariya of your love on me.. I am coloured all over with the love of you.. You have saved me from Shekar, given me a new life. I never knew when i fell in love with you, i love you and only you.. I do not expect anything from you in return, but i want you to know that i love you... I want you to give me the right to love you forever.. all my life. She records this. She is very happy .. She takes it out of the player, when Titli calls her. She places the cassette on the bed, goes out in a hurry..

Titli is in the hall, asks Sneha why is she in her room forever? She gives her another sweet box, asks her to give it to Arpita. Sneha takes it and goes. In the meantime, Krishna comes to Sneha's room. He sees the cassette on the bed, takes it and walks off. Sneha gets back, is shocked to see that the cassette is missing. She is tensed, searches all over, does not get it.. She is tensed.

In the hall, Krishna is holding the cassette in his hand, when Titli see it. She asks him cutely, where did you get this from? She takes it from him, kajal comes there with the servant who is transfering things to the store room. titli asks Kajal whose casette is this? Kajal takes the cassette is seeing it, when Sneha comes out. She is shocked to see Kajal holding the cassette. She runs to her, takes it from her, says that it is he cassette, she has been searching for it, how did it come here? Kajal is totally shocked to see Sneha's reaction. she asks her, why are you so tensed for a cassette? What happened now? Sneha says that she is ok, nothing is wrong. She goes from there taking it. Kajal asks Titli why is she reacting needlessly for a petty thing? titli says that eversince Shekar cheated on her, she has gone crazy, it might be a romantic song she was listening to...

Sneha is back to her room. She is relieved, that nobody got to hear it..especially Kajal Bhabhi... (Now, when Sneha calls Kajal as Bhabhi, why does she not call Ant as Bhai?? LOL, howe cray it is!!!) She now tells herself that Ant will be leaving for office any moment, she should not waste time, put this cassette in the player in the car. She now runs out, goes to the place where all the cars are placed. She gets into Ant's car, puts the cassette into the player. She is happy now, says that Ant will first listen to the song, (she has rewound it). She thinks that he will hear the song first, then her feelings. she smiles, blushes, when she sees Ant coming towards the car. She gets out, hides between cars. Ant gets in, is about to leave, when Kajal comes. Sneha is shocked to see her. Kajal runs, calls ant, gets into the car. She asks him to drop her at chachi's place as she has got back from her pilgrimage. Ant smiles. Ant starts thw car, as soon as he starts, to puts the tape on. The same song on Radha starts, the car leaves.. Sneha is stunned, is worried ,about what will happen if kajal hears it and gets to know her feelings for ant... Sneha is in tears..

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12 Apr 07

Kajal is tense, she is in her room. Ant enters, she sees him completely drenched, she comes to him, says that she will get clothes for him to change. ant rudely says that he can help himself, she can go and sleep. Saying this, Ant walks towards the cupboard. Kajal cries, is very sad.

Sneha in her room, she is standing before the mirror. She is still in that wet saree, she is admiring her own beauty, dreaming. She takes the palloo, puts it over her head, admires herself, in the mirror. She remembers the scenes where she held Ant's hand, they both looking at each other, in the terrace. She feels happy.

Ant and Kajal in bed. They both are showing their back to each other, lying down. Ant keeps thinking of sneha, the way she told him that she is with him, and he is not at all wrong. Kajal thinks about the way in which ant scolded her, saying she is not his wife but his enemy, she does not even understand what her husband is going thro. Kajal weeps , as she remembers all this.. Ant keeps thinking of Sneha..

Sneha is lying in bed, she is again dreaming.. She blushes, she smiles to herself, she has gone completely crazy.. She switches off the light , again lies on bed and dreams about Ant..

Morning. Nih is in her room, she is thinking. She asks herself, what is the matter between Ant and Sneha? Whats going on? What were they both doing in the terrace at that late hour? She thinks that he embarassed me so much before the family, now she needs to teach him a lesson for all that. She thinks, she takes her medicine, a tablet, she gulps water. But the tablet is bitter, she is having a discomfort, Kajal sees her, smiles and comes in.

Kajal very nicely asks Nih whether the medicine is giving her a bitter taste. Nih stares. Kajal says that medicines are bitter, but for good results and a nice future, we at times need to take it in ... Nih stares again. Kajal says that we need to realise and see to it that we do not get this bitterness spread into relationships, then all will be lost. Nih gets up now, she tries to speak. But kajal cuts her short, says that she knows that Nih is angry with what happened the previous day, with Ant's reactions.. she says that she is swallowing and keeping her hate and anger with in her. Kajal advises Nih to spit her anger out, it is wrong to keep it in.. She needs to vent it out. She says that if she does not do this, then she fears that all will end in a break in relationship.. Nih stares, Kajal says that she very well knows that she is not liking whatever she is talking. But she asks Nih whether this anger in her, is of use to anyone , whether it is benefit anyone.. Kajal says that tomorrow is holi, tonight, we will burn Holika. Kajal suggests that Nih should burn every bit of anger, hatred that she has in her, in the holi fire... She says that it is said that on holi, even enemies turn friends, put colour on each other and forget everything... Nih now gets very angry, asks Kajal why are you telling me all this? Cant you go and give this lecture to your own husband? Kajal says that she tried doing it, but with no luck... Now ant is walking there, sees Kajal and Nih talking, comes near the door to listen. Kajal says that she knows that Nih is not bad at heart.. She is not as adamant as her husband Ant is... She says that Nih does not have the bitterness and is not so mean as ant is... Kajal says that she very well knows that Ant can never understand these things , but she knows that Nih will try to understand what she says.. Kajal says that she tried to talk to Ant, but got a scolding for that... Ant is shocked to hear his own wife talking about his weakness. Ant tells himself that my wife is now talking about my limitations to Nih, how can she do this? Ant goes from there....

The servant is getting tea for ant, when Sneha comes there. She takes the tea cup from him and asks him to make nimbupaani for her. She goes to the hall, where Ant is. Ant is tensed, he is thinking about Kajal. He asks himself, why is Kajal doing this to me? Why cant she understand me? Where did all the love that she had for me go? What happened? Ant is very tense, is lost in thoughts when Sneha comes there. Sneha asks him, what is wrong? He looks to be very tense. She sits down near him, places the tea cup, keeps seeing him. Ant sees her. Sneha says that if something is bothering him, he can share it with her. She says that he will feel better by sharing... She says that she could not sleep last night, bcos she was thinking only about him. Now Ant sees her, keeps seeing her.. Sneha asks Ant whether she can do something to make him feel better. She wants to do something that will give a smile on his face... Ant is now getting drawn to her.. He keeps seeing her, slowly his confused face gets better... Sneha says that whatever the family thinks about him, she does not care. She says that she knows that he is right, whatever happens, he can feel rest assured that she will be there with him, in all situations.. Ant is now looking at her as though he is seeing her for the first time, with eyes getting big.. She says that even if the whole world goes against him, she is there for him.. Ant now thinks, such a huge difference between Sneha and Kajal's thoughts... Kajal is my own wife, but she does not side me.. But Sneha has no relation with me, but she understands my condition and pain so well... Sneha now says that the tea is getting cold , he needs to drink it. Saying this, she gives him the cup. He takes it, their hands touch, as he takes it. Ant keeps seeing her, she sees him. They keep seeing each other for many seconds, Ant while taking the cup drops it, the tea spills on his dress. Sneha takes her dupatta, starts to wipe his dress, his face. She is touching his face, now again their eyes meet. They keep seeing each other. There is a pause, as they both keep seeing each other.. Nih who is there upstairs, again happens to see this love scene... She is happy to see it. She tells herself that there is something seriously wrong.. She then tells herself that she needs to know things more clearly before she can use this against ant.. She thinks that Ant called her a characterless woman, but now, what is he? He has a wife, but still is going after a girl... What is he ? She asks herself. She has anger in her eyes...

Dhruv in his room, he has lots of ties in his hand. He is unable to select one for his shirt. Arpita comes, he asks her to select one for him. Arpita takes one , gives it to him. Arpita then asks shall i put it for you? Dhruv says he has no objection, he smiles. Arpita is putting the tie, when Dhruv keeps seeing her. He puts his hands over her shoulder, she is putting the tie. She says, will you leave me, how will i put it? Dhruv now drags her closer, kisses her on her forehead. She pushes him, says i will not put it, go... Dhruv smiles, says you need to do this daily for me now.. Arpita smiles, says cutely ,think and tell me.. Dhruv pretends to think, says i have thought about it, you will put it.. Arpita smiles.. She puts the tie for him. Dhruv and Arpita look at each other. Dhruv now asks Arpita to get ready. She asks where are we going? Dhruv says that tomorrow is holi, we are going out to shop. arpita smiles, she goes to get ready.. (A very nice scene, the chemistry between them is getting better and better, no stopping them!!!)

At the breakfast table, Ant, Kajal, Titli, Nih are there. Nih is seated opposite to Ant. Sneha comes, says that she has made kheer. Titli sees it, says that Sneha has made kheer just to ant's taste.. Ant sees Sneha. Nih is watching closely.. Sneha asks Titli whether she should serve. Titli agrees. Sneha now comes to Ant, with the bowl in hand.. Sneha sees Ant, Ant sees Sneha. Ant gives a smile, Sneha blushes. Nih is enjoying this, she keeps watching all their reactions.. Sneha serves kheer, Ant keeps looking at her.Kajal asks about Arpita. Titli says that they both have gone out for shopping. Nih keeps seeing Ant and Sneha. Suhaani who is in the room starts to cry,so kajal gets up and goes.. Sneha now says that she needs to go to the tailor to get her dresss. Ant immediately says that its on my way to the office, i will drop you. Nih sees Ant and Sneha. Ant smiles seeing Sneha, Sneha understands. She nods. Ttili says that she can go alone. Ant immediately says that poor girl, why should she go alone? I dont mind dropping her, its on my way afterall. Nih watches all this.. She raises her eyebrows... She thinks, Sneha makes Kheer for Ant, Ant offers to give her a drop. What is going on? I need to observe closely, she tells herself..

Ant and Sneha in the car. As Ant drives, he keeps seeing her, she keeps seeing him. They dont talk, but ishaare ishaare happening. hehe.. Ant stops the car at a restaurant, they go to the open air part of the restaurant. They both sit. Sneha is confused, ant smiles. ant orders for 2 glasses of orange juice.. Sneha asks him, why did he get her here? This is not her tailor's place. Ant gives her a naughty smile. Sneha laughs, says that she was joking.. Both see each other. She says that she understands him, he wanted to spend time with her, so got her here... Ant smiles.. The juice is kept on the table, they both are about to take the glass of juice, when their hands meet again. They again see each other, they are lost, looking at each other. At this point, a car comes to the restaurant. The person seated at the back seat moves down the window pane. It is Nih. Nih looks towards the open air restaurant. Ant and Sneha are seated very close, she can see them clearly from inside the car. she sees them both looking at each other, their hands touching. She sees this very clearly, raises her brows again, says that Dono Jagah Aag Baraabar Lagi hai..(Fire is lit equally on both sides). She smiles.. She says that she will now use this to her won advantage, create a big issue of this, see to it that she ruins Ant's life. She stares, says that she will see to it that she makes life misterable for Ant, he cannot live , he cannot die... Nih gives a wicked experssion...


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