13th August - Written Update

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13th August

There are men from the village with guns wanting to kill Sudha because of the Shaitan. The hit a gun on Pratha's dad's head and he falls to the floor. Sudha runs from there and the men follow. Parineeta tries to phone Chandan to come to there house but the men snatch the phone from her. Sudha tries to hold the doors shut but the men push her and get inside her room. The men take Sudha, her brother tries to stop them but gets pushed away.

The men take Sudha. They take her into a godown and tie her to the side, whilst Sudha tries to shout for help. The men tie her up and tell her the Shaitan wants her alive. Pratha and Chirag come to their house and find out Sudha has been taken. Pratha tries to say it is against the law and a man with a gun talks rudely. Chirag tells the man to speak nicely and fights with him and the man tells Chirag to stay quiet, when a bullet is shot into the ceiling. Sudha is tied down shouting for help. The clock strikes 11. Everyone at Pratha's house is worried and also the police, Raghav's mother and some townspeople. The door to the godown opens and Sudha is worried and shouts for help. Pratha makes a sign to Chirag towards the lights. Chirag goes to the lights with the excuse to get the first aid box, he pretends to look for it and turns the lights off. Pratha and Chirag escape, when the men do the lights back on. A man (Shaitan) comes towards Sudha, Sudha is terrified.

The man touches Sudha and is almost on top of her, when Chirag strikes his head with a rod. Chirag goes to attack the Shaitan but the Shaitan punches him and he falls over and the Shaitan strangles Chirag. Pratha unties Sudha. The Shaitan realises and goes towards Pratha and Sudha. Chirag pushes him over and all 3 run and the Shaitan is angry. Whilst running on the road, Sudha falls and the Shaitan catches up, just then they run off. They get to a mandir and go towards it, but the Shaitan brings a big wind, which stops them going forward, but Chirag, Pratha and Sudha manage to go forwards and into the Mandir. They go inside where the murti is and close the door. They pray to Mata Rani.

Raghav's mother is looking at Raghav's photo and remembers some times with him. Chitra comes and Raghav's mother feels like she has sinned, which is why that her 2 sons died in front of her and feels like it was wrong to bring Pratha into the house and Chirag is on Pratha's side. She tells Chitra to think of something to save her family. Sadhna overhears and feels her plans are failing and has to think of something to do now.

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Thank you Sattvik Thanks a numerous times for yr sincerity & the good updates given promptly. You are appreciated a lot.
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