Sabherwal Series: Shot #5 updated Pg24 (27/10) - Page 7

Akshu!! 😍😍

Loved your take on Bebo and Kitty and their changing dynamics with Anokhi.
I am glad you didn’t make them have a complete change of heart and become chummy! But how with time and with interactions with Anokhi, they had a better understanding of her and also themselves.
I loved the Bebo-Anmol track got closure. Coz no matter how Bebo annoyed me, I would never wish an Anmol type of guy on any of them. Kitty always felt redeemable to me. I loved how you showed her inner feelings regarding her achievement not being given priority over her brothers

And I am glad you had Gayathri speaking up for her daughter.

It was good to see Betty growing up. Beautifully penned Akshu. 🤗

I can’t wait see how you write other characters story.

Vote for Yash and Kanchan. I want to know their dynamics and their dynamics with Shakhi.

I never found shagun's turmoil this interesting.

I wonder am I the only one who disliked both the shagun 😆. I feel nothing about shagun 1.0 or 2.0 both are same to me may be if shaguj 1.0 had continued as shagun in later half of the story I would have connected to her.

I must say your OS has brought me on a stage that I can connect to her story a little if not. I always wanted her to question shaurya that why he never supported her but doesn't bat an eye before supporting his anokhi.

It was very interesting to read her perspective after the incident.

Loved it akshuu ❤️

Sorry for being the late one and thanks for coming up with is OS series

I always wanted bebo , kitty and anokhi to have this sort of relationship neither too friendly nor as toxic as it was just a normal relationship and your OS beautifully presents that.

I loved the gradual changes how they have adjusted with each other but the core nature of bebo and kitty remains the same.

Loved all the scenes akshuu...

Where are you dear,I hope you are fine you did not update ,was waiting eagerly to read more stuff from you

Originally posted by: Aimsha

Where are you dear,I hope you are fine you did not update ,was waiting eagerly to read more stuff from you

Thank you for waiting!! ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: mistofshadows

This is a brilliant work. The way you have portrayed the relations and stuck to the tenor as in the show....the tapestry of emotions and feelings is a brilliant mix. I loved the arc of Bebo and Kitty. It was perfect....the way they are. Not completely postive but not fully dark either. With Anokhi added to their equation it is as if their lives have taken a tilt. And I adored the small mentions of Shaurya ❤️❤️

Loved it.

- Niki

I tried my best to stick to their character and I am glad that you could feel the same! I am honored!!!

I hope you will stick with me to the end of this series so that I can give some more Anokhi-Shaurya snippets here and there 😃

Originally posted by: Snusmit

Loved this a lot. So refreshing it was. Thanks a lot for this....

Originally posted by: Aimsha

Awsome, you always leave us amaze, will wait eagerly for the next update please do

Next update on Sunday or Monday for sure! 👍🏼

Originally posted by: ShaKhi1820

Lovely update ❤

I want next chapter for Kanchan and Yash as their story is not shown so I will go for that 💜

Kanchan and Yash coming right up! I hope you like it... (Pls tell me your name) 😆

Originally posted by: anjali9996

This was beautifully written 👏❤ loved it