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Darshi 🤗❤️
Sorry for the delay 🤪 actually i am a kachhua speed reader 🤣 and I really wanted to read this properly ❤️
It was so entertaining and paisa vasool part i can't tell you 😎 The best part is that you have a great sense of punch in your dialogues. I was so engrossed that i forgot i wasn't watching an actual episode 🤣
I can't really point out every dialogue but like how Ahir told Shaurya ko go back otherwise his family will call him to search for Shaurya... such dialogues are really cherry on the cake ❤️
Coming to the story...
I loved Reema and Anokhi's bonding reminds me of my college and hostel days 🤣 they are so cute and understanding. BFF goals 😎❤️
Shaurya being Jealous... expected 🤣
Ahir being an inexperienced boyfriend 🤪 so cute ❤️
I am totally loving ReeHir ship.
But...
But...
But...
NOT MORE THAN ShauHir 🤣🤣 I mean, both these guys went to meet their lady loves in a hoodie 🤣🤣 THAT WAS HILARIOUS darshi 🤣 I can't imagine if something like this i get to see in the show, how will I stop laughing 🤣
I am still thinking how they might have looked when they saw each other 🤣
Yaar ShaKhi aur ReeHir Chhodo...I am shipping ShauHir in your OS too 😕 what is wrong with me? 😭
Shaurya be like- inka chal raha hai????
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
I loved Ahir sweetie pie and Reema as gf bf, talking their heart out while Shakhi were bickering in the background 🤣🤣 I love it
So Shaurya confessed? 😲 Awwwwww
And he told Anokhi she doesn't have to reply immediately.... huh!!!! So cute ☺️
Lol! WARDEN AA GAYI🤪🤣 Bathroom me chhupna pada Director aur ACP ko 🤣 Kar de mushkil jeena.. Ishq Kameena 🤣🤪
It was so so so so damn cute when Shaurya requested Anokhi ko pick up his calls... haayee.... cutie pie ☺️❤️
Awwww end me ShauHir ☺️ so they are friends 😈 (I'm still shipping them only)
It was amazing and very entertaining Darshi...
I'm glad I could be a part of this with my edit ❤️🤗
Waiting for next part and more ShauHir moments 🤣
Baby it’s well written
I love you Damit ASR on my mind
Reema and Ahir a matured couple , loved it❤️
These 2 are like dog and cat🤣, especially this 30yr old child brat is not going to change🤣
Yeah Shaurya poora life jal kukdu banega kya
At last Shauhir bond
It’s a lovely update baby, in night I couldn’t finish because of this little devil, just now finished
Keep on updating. You rocked it.
My multi talented baby🤗
Aww it was soo cute
Shakhi as always pyaare se Tom and Jerry😆 inke baare mein kya hi kehna😍😍
But ReeHir god they are good to yr mtlab episode mein inko dekhne ke baad yaha dekha and i was like please aisa kuch ho jae toh bahut aacha hoga!!!🤭🤭🤭🤭
Bichare hamare shaurya ki thodi jealously bhi kam ho jaegi🤣
Waise iska burst🤣
I really loved it please please update soon 🧡 can't wait to know more!!!
Loved ShauHir's bond here 😍😍
Enjoyed reading. Loved it. Waiting eagerly for next part 😍
Awesome ts Darshi
Wow Reema nd Ahir😆kya combo hai😉
Shaurya as always misunderstands Anokho nd Ahit
Lol dono apne lady love se milne ke liye girls hostel pahunch gaye..same tym same place🤣
Loved the surprise Ahir gave to Reema(ji)😆
Finally ShaKhi confessionnd both of them all shy😳
Lol Shaurya lied to Devi🤣nd Anokhi nd Reema lied to warden🤣
Cont sooon
Nd i m waiting for another 2 os
loved it
awesome update
Lobed this ShaKhi banter😂😂😍😍😍
ReHir.... Tooo were so cute!
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Please do write more😋😋😋😋
As long as the TS turned I enjoyed reading it to bits & pieces 😃 Entertaining & accolades for the apt dialogues, especially Shaurya & Ahir's
Keeping the elements of the characters intact I thoroughly enjoyed reading + Reema & Ahir would actually make a cute pair, specially after seeing them together today 😎
Well.. The sudden outburst of emotions seems like something we can relate to Shaurya, he has never felt like this about any girl so it was obvious of him to spill it like that. Anokhi's tu tu main main with him gotta be the best 😂
Waiting to read the next part!
Originally posted by: Nan_ArHi
Loved ShauHir's bond here 😍😍
Enjoyed reading. Loved it. Waiting eagerly for next part 😍
Thank you dear.🤗
I loved reading your FF too..❤️
I am going to start working for the second part today. Hope to post it soon.😁
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