// BIRTHDAY // A ShAkhi OS. - Page 3

Mahiiiii. I AM SMILING SO WIDE. this was so wholesome. Shaurya confounding in Anokhi and sharing his pain. That whole scene was so smooth and felt so so real. ❤️

Their chemistry flows so smoothly and harmoniously even in written pieces. ufff, FEELS.

andddd coming towards the ending. it was so beautiful. ❤️

You have made us/ me so used to these feelsy and wholesome writing pieces that I don’t think we can survive without a new one everyday.. ❤️

Mahi ji!!! 🤗

You are one talented writer!!! ❤️ I am in awe of the dialogues and the flow of your OSs ⭐️

I am lacking words to applaud this OS cause you have successfully sent me to lala land for tonight.

Thanks for showering us wit so much ShaKhi love ❤️

Originally posted by: aatiii

Mahiiiii. I AM SMILING SO WIDE. this was so wholesome. Shaurya confounding in Anokhi and sharing his pain. That whole scene was so smooth and felt so so real. ❤️

Their chemistry flows so smoothly and harmoniously even in written pieces. ufff, FEELS.

andddd coming towards the ending. it was so beautiful. ❤️

You have made us/ me so used to these feelsy and wholesome writing pieces that I don’t think we can survive without a new one everyday.. ❤️

Thank youu so much!!!❤❤

Yours words mean alot! And yes, I will try to continue writing as many as I can!💕

Originally posted by: AK_2010

Mahi ji!!! 🤗

You are one talented writer!!! ❤️ I am in awe of the dialogues and the flow of your OSs ⭐️

I am lacking words to applaud this OS cause you have successfully sent me to lala land for tonight.

Thanks for showering us wit so much ShaKhi love ❤️

Thank youu so very much ji!💕

Your words mean a lot. I'm waiting for tomorrow morning to watch the latest episode!

This ws a lovely os. Shaurya's b'dy, his realisation n admission of mistake. Also hw he shared abthis ppaat with Anokhi 💞 wish the show cd be as simple as this one. Bt no they wd be bringing in unecessary rubbish in the name of twists. 🙄 do keep writing. 😀

Originally posted by: mahiii12

Thank youu so very much ji!💕

Your words mean a lot. I'm waiting for tomorrow morning to watch the latest episode!

God! I wanna see him chase her to apologise...

Your writing spree inspired me to write something as well 😆

Yeh mujhe chahiye serial mein 😭😭😭😭 kash aisa hi kuch ho jata waha bhi 😭😭😭

Yaar i get extra glucose wali energy now whenever i see a new Os and under that written your name as writer . There's another one tunesofheart uski dekhti hun tab bhi aise hi over excitement wali energy ajati hein. You guys are fabulous..itni romantic way mein likhti ho ki single se mingle ho jane ko maan karta hein...meri ghar ajao rehne ko..roj kahani sunati rehna 😭

the way you presented this shakhi scenes trust me when I'm saying this you did much better than the actual serial with that flower banquet thing and party thing...😍😍😍 my my saab chale gaye the but shaurya was there I'm sure woh ruke hi the anokhi se baat karne ke liye...and then that cleaning part haye mera Shaurya gentleman sabherwal 😍

And loved loved loved the part where he opened up to her...it was like shaurya apni andar ki ek burden ko halka kar rahi hein..jaise bohut dino se dabai rakhi huyi dukh. That part even made my eyes glistening 🤧 Aisi childhood kisiki na ho.

And finally usne scars par aid kar hi di. From this cabin first aiding scene to that last car scene...one word = MIND BLOWING 😍😍😍

Pura story hi mind blowing hein...in one day they just stepped into a new phrase of their life and pata bhi na chala unko.

Thanks for giving us this beautiful shakhi OS's. This one for me is... with out any doubt the best one among all the 3 os you have written.

Please aur likhte jao aur hum padte hi jayenge rukenge na. Love you mahi 💗

Will wait for your new stories too 💗😍

Originally posted by: jhankarbeats87

This ws a lovely os. Shaurya's b'dy, his realisation n admission of mistake. Also hw he shared abthis ppaat with Anokhi 💞 wish the show cd be as simple as this one. Bt no they wd be bringing in unecessary rubbish in the name of twists. 🙄 do keep writing. 😀

Well...that's ITV for us lolololol🤣🤣

Thank youu so much!💕💕

Originally posted by: mahiaana

Yeh mujhe chahiye serial mein 😭😭😭😭 kash aisa hi kuch ho jata waha bhi 😭😭😭

Yaar i get extra glucose wali energy now whenever i see a new Os and under that written your name as writer . There's another one tunesofheart uski dekhti hun tab bhi aise hi over excitement wali energy ajati hein. You guys are fabulous..itni romantic way mein likhti ho ki single se mingle ho jane ko maan karta hein...meri ghar ajao rehne ko..roj kahani sunati rehna 😭

the way you presented this shakhi scenes trust me when I'm saying this you did much better than the actual serial with that flower banquet thing and party thing...😍😍😍 my my saab chale gaye the but shaurya was there I'm sure woh ruke hi the anokhi se baat karne ke liye...and then that cleaning part haye mera Shaurya gentleman sabherwal 😍

And loved loved loved the part where he opened up to her...it was like shaurya apni andar ki ek burden ko halka kar rahi hein..jaise bohut dino se dabai rakhi huyi dukh. That part even made my eyes glistening 🤧 Aisi childhood kisiki na ho.

And finally usne scars par aid kar hi di. From this cabin first aiding scene to that last car scene...one word = MIND BLOWING 😍😍😍

Pura story hi mind blowing hein...in one day they just stepped into a new phrase of their life and pata bhi na chala unko.

Thanks for giving us this beautiful shakhi OS's. This one for me is... with out any doubt the best one among all the 3 os you have written.

Please aur likhte jao aur hum padte hi jayenge rukenge na. Love you mahi 💗

Will wait for your new stories too 💗😍

OH MY GOD MAHI!

You literally made my dayy. Thank youu so much for showing this much love. I'm so glad that you liked this OS!💕💕💕

It was so cute♥️lovely os

Loved every bit of it

If only they had shown cabin scene something like that

Shaurya still trusted her after what happened in hospital nd Anokhi too listened pateintly

Loved the last scene..when he held her hand nd she stiffenedcompletely feeling smthing smthing

Nd finally she wished him..i wonder if she will wish him in show

Do write more!!