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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello guys this is my first ever work on SDCH forum..I love Varun Kapoor..his natural acting skills, cute looks... Everything..

Dont know about others, but i feel that Veer is not getting proper screen space, his pain, feelings are not shown properly..

So here I am presenting to you all Dr.Veer's thoughts
Hope you will like this..

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Dr.Veer is lying on his bed in hostel room..thinking something deeply..pain is clearly seen on his face.

Just then Garv enters in room humming with a happy face..He is having a gift ..he sat on Veer's bed...
Garv- veer bro, you know what...i am so happy today..look my mom send me a gift..wooo..

Veer look at him, and smiled a bit..
Acha, show me what you got...

Garv unrapped it quickly and find a mouth organ in it.. he hugged Veer tightly..
I knew it, mom would bought it for me...I told mom about having it..and look she get it...

Veer- congrats Garv...atleast you got what you want... Everyone is not lucky as you..

Garv put aside the mouth organ and hold his shoulders..
Bhai, are you alright?? Tell me what's bothering you..

Veer- Oh God Garv..why are you getting so much emotional yaar..there is nothing in this world that can bother me..

Garv understand that he doesn't want to disclose...so he let it go..
Cool then...good night...

Garv fall asleep as soon as he hit the bed..and Veer again get lost in his pain..


5 year old boy is running in the hall and giggling..and a lady is behing him holding a glass of milk..
Lady- Veer stop beta..have milk..plzzz

Veer- no mumma i dont want it...give it to Priya di..look she is sooo thin not me...

Mom- ok i will give her too..but you too have to drink it...
With that she caught him..and made him drink...
While Priya and dadi were laughing making him irritated..


9year old veer is playing with his Priya di..their mom was not at home.. it's 5 pm and veer is getting impatient...
Di, when will mom come???
And she never came...Their mom left them..As per dadi she is with God now..



After that his dad Anand Malhotra got married to his secretary Gayatri and got a step mother , who always treated them badly...and starterd manipulating Anand..she created rift between father -son.

He clearly remembered once he cried a lot for getting a guitar..Anand got angry and slapped him..

Slowly slowly he became aloof from Anand due Gayatri..She never left a chance in increasing their deferrences.. Anand's money minded thinking never let him see his children's pain..

Then he started hiding his pain through pranks and smile which never reached his eyes..
Although Priya and dadi were always with him..but after his mother he never felt happy..

His father got him admitted in MBBS whereas he wanted to be a guitarist and singer..he never took his training seriously, always doing pranks..

He met Sanchi on his first day of internship..he liked her attitude..when she indirectly help him out..he started falling for her..even she too have feelings for him...
He called her Miss Golgappa..
Everything is going fine between them..
He don't know what happened suddenly, why Sanchi is ignoring him, surely its related to his dad Anand Malhotra...but what????

He confronted Sanchi and to his bad luck she rejected him..
He tried very hard to get her love but nothing worked...
And now she is with Dr. Kabir.His heart is not ready to accept but what to do with his mind...
He cant even tell all this to Priya di and dadi as he dont want to trouble them..


He snapped out of his thoughts by the alarm..its 6 am...
He sighed audibly as he spent another sleepless night ...
He got up, get dressed and left to hospital in a hope that may be today is the day when his love his life Sanchi will come to him and accept him whole heartedly...
May be...or may not be...



Waiting for your response..

Manisha Bhardwaj
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I'm not a san veer shipper but still liked this OS. Yes I have to agree his feelings and pain aren't shown properly.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Veer n pain s ;((( I miss his cute antics his smile ;(

Ur OS s AWESOMEEE:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Rosky
Welcome home mere pyaar writer
Thnks for this
Can write a Series of Dairy on Dr.Veer😔
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: needuraj

Veer n pain s ;((( I miss his cute antics his smile ;(

Ur OS s AWESOMEEE:)



Me too love his cute antics more..
Thanks
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: soumi93

Rosky
Welcome home mere pyaar writer

Thnks for this
Can write a Series of Dairy on Dr.Veer😔



Thanks dear..
Will try..
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