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Hello My Friends ,

I have never written OS / FF before but Many of /my Friends are not happy with the character treatment . So I have written something something that might please my Friends & I hope U enjoy it very much ...

I appreciate all your honest opinion . More or less , I have always believed these characters have strength to find solutions without BM . Right or wrong but They have to work together & say what they want .

This is part 1 where only 3 characters [ Alok - KK - SM ] This takes place 2 - 3 days after the elopement of SanjDeep .
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Rano picked up the phone .

Alok " Haanji Rano , ? Main kya bol raha thaa ke aaj bahut kaam hain toh ghar aane main der ho jaye gi . Toh mera intezaar maat lkarna , Tum saab khana khake so jana . Mujhe kafi der ho sakti hain ... "

Rano [ smiling ] " Theek Hain , paar jyada der maat karna . Main jagti houngi ... Theek hain "

Alok " Arre Rano Ji , [ But he knew Rano too well to argue ] Theek Hain "
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Here at KK house Doorbell rings .
Shanti Mausi walks into Pitch dark Living room , turns off the light & sees KK sitting alone . & opens the door .

Seeing Alok at the door , Shanti Mausi says " Aye aye , Alok Ji Andar aye "

KK [ more like mumbling to him self ] " Aye Alok jii "

Alok comes in & sits down with SM & KK . They r all waiting for other to open the topic or at least talk abt the elephant in the room ... Until then they all set in uncomfortable silence .

Atlast Alok " Kaise hain aap ? Main jaldi aana chahta thaa paar himmat nahi joota paya , khas tor pe jo pichle dino main hua hain uske baad "

Hearing this KK [ completely breaks down , Crying ] " Mujhe maaf kaar dijiye , Mujhe aise nahi karna chahiye thaa ... . Pata nahi mujhe kya ho gaya thaa . Main toh sach bhi nahi janta thaa aur nahi janne ki kosis ki . Maine Radhaji ke saath bahut badi naa issafi ki hain "

Alok shocked to see KK like this " Nahi Bajpai Saab , Yeh aapki galati nahi hain . Yeh toh hamari galati hain , Hamahi aapko saab kuch batana chahiye thaa. Sanjana toh bachhi hain , paar hamein toh pata hona chahiye thaa naa ... "

KK " Main toh kaab se yehi soch raha hun ki maine kya galati kaar di . Vidisha ke jane ke baad mane unn dono ko saab kuch diya , pyaar diya , unka dost bana ... paar aaj mere apne bachhe hi mujhe sach batane se daar te hain ? Mujse jyada bura baap iss duniya main nahi ho sakta "

Alok " Nahi bajpai saab , Apne hamare ghar ke Namoono ko toh dekha hi hain , unki galatiyon ko milao toh bhi aapki dono betiyon ki galatiyon se kaam ho gi . "
[Then thinks for a minute & says ] " Main aapko saab kuch bata deta hoon . "

Listing to Alok's tale both KK - SM shell shocked . They had no idea What RB really been through .

Shanti Masi " Bechari Bachhi [ RB ] Bhagawaan itna boora kaise ho sakta hain uske saath "

KK " But Y won't Sanju tell me the truth earlier ? What have I done wrong to deserve this ? Or even Radhaji , Ohh shame ... How can I face her now . "

Alok " Naahi BajpaiJi , V have to look past what has happen to what V should do now ? Deepak - Sanjana has eloped & V have to decide for them too "

Shanti Mausi seeing both KK - Alok trying to take the blame , is very happy . She thought the family is good Not a doubt in her mind otherwise Alokji won't care for KK's reputation . But he is here just for KK nothing else gave her happiness .

Shanti Mausi " Alokji theek kahe rahe hain , Galati haam saab se huee hain . Paar iss main hamari beti Sanjana kaa sab se bada haath hain . Radhaji agar use maaf kaar de toh uski khush kismat hain . " [ angrily & disapprovingly ]

KK " Main abhi Radhaji se mafi mangana chahta hoon . Abhi chalte hain naa Kashayap Bhavan !!! Main unka gunhegar hoon "

Alok " App itmenan se so jaeeye Bajpai saab , Main kaal fir se aayunga , App akele nahi hain . Haam saab milke iss ka haal nikalenge . Acha toh aab main chalt ahoon , Ranoji mera intezaar kaar rahi hongi "

Shanti Mausi " Sahi kaha , Haam saab milke haal nikalenge . KK tum pichle 2 -3 dinose soye nahi ho , Kaal saabmilke baat karenge . Kyun Alokji, Main aur KK apke ghar aa sakte hain ? "

Alok " Kyun nahi !!! Paar main soch raha thaa ke Kaal main Bauji aur Maa ko leke yahan aa jaun . Woh dono bhi Bajpai saab se milne ko betab hain . "

Shanti Mausi " Theek hain toh kaal milte hain . Aap Radha ji ko saath leke ayenge naa ? "

Alokk " Zaroor , Woh bhi hamare saath hogi "

KK quitely asks " Sanjana - Suhana kaise hain ? " [ Not meeting their eyes ]

Alok [ understanding KK's pain ] " good . both are crying as they didn't thought of consequences [Running away Wedding ]. They had no idea that their actions can caus so much pain to others . V have to make them understand what they have done wrong too . " [ Asking for approval ]

KK [ Determingly ] " I want them to own their mistakes this time . One request Alokji , All their life I have shield them from punishment , This time I want them to redeem themselves & work hard to correct the mistakes . I want to b theri DAD & not just their friend any more . "

Shanti Masi smiles seeing KK in new Avatar & Alok too leaves happily seeing both their families still care for each other .Hoped that they have averted big rift between 2 families .

Thank U , for reading or Not ... Plz give me honest opinion , I don't crave praise ... ☺️

I read it,its good the only thing that struck my mind after reading is that everything happened so quickly.thanks

So I get to read something Netri has written. 😃

Neha ..very well written ..logical in real world with bit of drama too. I hope something like this happens and not crowning the Madam once again on helping Sanju and Deepak united !!

Nicely done. I liked the conversation between the 3 elders. KK should have spoken to them all like this rather than humiliating RB. Hey ho, whats happened has happened and I am sure we won't see something like this in the coming episodes! Never mind!

They are being inspired by a track that was in OBS. It was where the girl was going to drink poison because she didn't want to marry the guy the family had chosen. So Lolita saved her and took her to the Mandir and called her beloved to come and marry her..oh sorry did I give it away? Well it may not happen exactly that way but the girl did marry her knight in shinning Armour after she left home with Lolita, without the knowledge of the family!

U know , I understand something like this 'll never happen in SGP even though It should . But I hope this is what V want to see .

I know what has happen , has hurt both families . In real life this would end up as Rift between 2 families . Sanju never thought it through . Running away marriage is not my fav. Choice ever . They never talk abt consequences of actions .

I don't believe in punishments but people need to understand the pain , suffering they have caused others . That is the first step to redemption , at least have decency to admit they caused pain . the Rate SGP is going It'll b done in 2 secs . 😆 .

Originally posted by: Karan.G.king

I read it,its good the only thing that struck my mind after reading is that everything happened so quickly.thanks

If U think this is quick then what would U say abt current rate SGP is going !!!!! 😆😆
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Originally posted by: venture

Neha ..very well written ..logical in real world with bit of drama too. I hope something like this happens and not crowning the Madam once again on helping Sanju and Deepak united !!

Thanks Di , I don't mind Madam being Mahan as long as It involves sensibility but ahh well ... 😆😆 I believe no parents deserves run away child , Its every parents nightmare . If only Suhana had talk to KK alone tried to give honest account without getting on high horse ... I really would have loved that .

As for BM , I m tired of her solving everything now . so this time I went with Alok !!!! 😉

Come to think of it , I think this conversation should have happened the next day after Sanju / Deepak alopement ..and that Sanju and Deepak should not be accepted back in Kyshaps too... As what they did or are going to is wrong in every sense. Sanju made a huge huge beyond repair mistake regarding RB and her self respect ...then by running away Deepak is going to give his mother more grief ...No matter what logic Suhana would give to bhag Kay Shadi ...in there circumstances it should be the last thing...For me Deepak should not agree for doing that ...he should have asked Sanju to publicly apologise about her behaviour ..then this kind of talk was needed with KK and elders behind closed doors.